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Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 02:52PM Title: Into The Forest

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He suspected that he and Hagrid weren't being very subtle, lol - A Bludger would've been more subtle.

Ugh - it had to be snakes. Shudder. I'll admit, I cringed away from my computer and read some parts really fast. I don't like snakes! Still, it was exciting and heart-pounding, and I'm so glad Ginny listened and acknowledged that she's been hurting him this whole time. Good on her keeping her head and summoning the broom before they both died of smoke inhalation. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I also like how you had all the build up of a first kiss, yet us keep the canon one. Well done!

Author's Response: Yes, it had to be snakes! Harry saved Ginny from the Basilisk, so now it was Ginny's turn to help him out with the ashwinder. I hate snakes too, which is why I didn't go into much detail describing them (there is no way I'm googling pictures of snakes). The first kiss has to be the canon kiss. The timing of the first kiss and Ginny's breakup with Dean in canon is what made this story so long!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 09:09AM Title: Into The Forest

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Well that was certainly an action packed chapter! I'm very relieved that Harry and Ginny managed to work together and escape the snakes and the flames.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I liked the idea of them fighting the snakes together (especially with Ginny taking the lead in the fight) as a sort of inversion to Harry fighting the Basilisk in CoS.



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 02:13AM Title: Into The Forest

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Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.21 - 04:24PM Title: Into The Forest

Great chapter. Harry and Ginny were so close until the snakes. Great snake fight by the way

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the snake fight! I couldn't let Harry go into the forest without a bizarre and dangerous attack :)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.01.21 - 12:40PM Title: Into The Forest

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An exiting fight with the snakes.

Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing action scenes!




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