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Reviews For Hollow Ash

Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.06.23 - 11:03AM Title: Chapter 5


Its nice to see you back! I enjoyed Ginny's visit with Marcy, but I couldn't help the nagging feeling that she was talking about someone else but it seemed like Harry. I might be off base, but I read it twice and something is still unsettling. Both she and Ella referred to Harry and Ginny as "duck." I really enjoyed Harry's introspection on life in the Loney. He was very much like Marcy only vastly different, too. He grew up the only one with magic and being shunned for it - opposite, yet alike, though so far, I like this other "family" better than the Dursleys. Of course, that isn't hard to do! Favorite part was Harry remembering Nagini possessing Bathilda. Your writing evoked that same creepiness. Well done!

Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.06.23 - 06:21AM Title: Chapter 5



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.06.22 - 07:26PM Title: Chapter 5


good to see a new chapter.

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.22 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter 5


Love the last sentence. Very profound.

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.22 - 05:17PM Title: Chapter 4


Oh dear.... what a way to end this update. Filled me with anticipation.

Reviewer: SilvaGrey Signed Date: 2018.06.22 - 04:54PM Title: Chapter 5


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Reviewer: CraZMe Signed Date: 2018.04.10 - 07:50AM Title: Chapter 4


Great chapter! I've read some of your other stories and I love your writing. I haven't been on SIYE's site for a while and when I saw that you had started another story, I was so excited for this one! Please update when you can.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Sorry that the updates on this one are quite slow, I have a lot going on in my life right now.

Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter 4


You can see why the local Muggles stay away from the Loney. It's certainly not a comfortable place to be. Nice to find out a bit more about Theia in the first part of the chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 11:58AM Title: Chapter 4


Good story! I'm enjoying it and looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 01:20PM Title: Chapter 4


I felt a shiver going up my spine reading this.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad! :P

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.02.23 - 10:21AM Title: Chapter 4


And so the plot thickens... Really good chapter, somehow I don't think Theia was imagining someone watching them - perhaps it was the mysterious "A"
What Dennis said was pretty creepy, and I'm wondering if he's going to come back into play somewhere down the line since he seems to think he still has some kind of "relationship" with Theia

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2018.02.22 - 05:51PM Title: Chapter 4


Hey there! My general thoughts: this was an excellent chapter. The intro to Theia's hidden struggles are done very well and nicely tied in to her more general introduction. Then we went to that abandoned hamlet scene and that was just as good. I love abandoned stuff, so already you had me hooked! And then the creepy figure peeking in upped that tension so well, and it really fitted the mood and make the ending super foreboding at the same time. The only critique I can think of after reading it, is maybe the jump scare. It's such a tricky thing to do in novel form. You don't have camera control, sudden sounds to use, a way to film reactions, etc. If I was an expert I could probably point out a way to improve it, make the shock and the immediately ensuing threatening feeling pop out of the pages more, but sadly I'm not :( But! I never end these on a negative note, so I'll just reiterate that this is an excellent chapter, and the story is great so far!

Author's Response: Ugh, you are just such a star honestly! <3

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.22 - 05:50PM Title: Chapter 4


Great to see a new chapter Flo! And the mystery deepens! Sounds like Theia has a pretty spiffy new pad! I agree it's strange there was no baby stuff at Marcy's place in Loney! - Wonder who this "a" is in the message and who did Theia see watching them? Strange happenings abound - hope we get some answers soon! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2018.01.21 - 06:25PM Title: Chapter 3

Omg! I'm so excited this new story is up. I've been waiting my whole life for some more Theia Harry dream team action. Can't wait for this mystery to unfold!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.01.21 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 3


More puzzles. I wonder just what is going on in the Loney (and how many people have 'Harry Potter' autographs courtesy of Dung!) Harry and Theia's talents seem to complement each other more as time goes by.

Author's Response: Thank you! The autograph thing is utterly pointless but I couldn't resist slipping it in! Got to have somewhere for my headcanons.

Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.20 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 3


Love the last scene between Harry and Neville! Somehow them being happy, successful adults after what happened to their parents always makes me feel a bit better. Hope Harry and Theia manage some progress soon tracking down more information about Marcy.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Love a bit of Neville/Harry bonding :)

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.19 - 02:32PM Title: Chapter 3


Quite an action packed chapter! So now we have a missing baby to compound the Marcy mystery! Hope the tyke is ok! Enjoyed the undercover action at the police station and another appearance of the bike boy! Also enjoyed the appearance of our favorite herbology professor! Can't wait to see what they find out about Loney(Loony in Lancashire speak?)! Looking forward to the next chapter with
baited breath! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks! No, Loney is pronounced like lonely :)

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.01.19 - 11:36AM Title: Chapter 3


Aargh, that's so good, but so frustrating because I didn't want it to end! :)

Author's Response: Aww thanks!

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.19 - 01:58AM Title: Chapter 3


Awwww. It is so good e Bebe is alright. How did you knwthat people from Lancashire to visit Neville and have the last line of this update give syou o much joy! Oh heavens, I hoe the wespeak with rather broad accents?

Author's Response: I think your review got a little muddled, but I appreciate the sentiment! ;) Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: SilvaGrey Signed Date: 2018.01.18 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 3


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