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Reviews For Hollow Ash

Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2018.01.17 - 11:38PM Title: Chapter Two

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Good story so far. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.01 - 08:24PM Title: Chapter Two

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Love the friendly relationship that has developed between Theia and Ginny! Harry's comment at the end was certainly poignant. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.01 - 02:59PM Title: Chapter Two

Welcome back! It's nice to see you again. Your "Not From Others" is on my favorite list. Dennis is creepy, but so unaware of his own craziness. Good job with that! I loved Harry's comment at the end about gaining a blood relative. I think parenthood would both delight and overwhelm him at times, and I'm looking forward to seeing your take on it. The question about finding out the sex intrigued me. I'm very curious about wizarding maternity care. When we saw the list of departments, St. Mungo's didn't have a Maternity Ward, so my guess is that it's done very old school. I'm eager to see how your thoughts play out.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, a home birth is on the cards, I think!



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.01 - 12:36AM Title: Chapter Two

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Awwww......I love the last thing Harry said about the first time he is going to have a blood relative.
Happy New Year!xxxxxxxxxx

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: glasscandlegrenades Signed Date: 2017.12.31 - 07:29PM Title: Chapter Two

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another incredible chapter! i'm very impressed by the way you've characterized theia's grief -- it reminds me so much of my own thought patterns after the loss of the grandmother who raised me. i also love how you write Harry and Ginny together. as always - can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! Need to be careful with Theia's grief, because I'm using my own current grief, but obviously things are fairly different. Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.12.31 - 03:45PM Title: Chapter Two

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Interesting chapter this was! Theia still seems to be battling some ghosts from the past, especially her mum! Surprised she'd still visit Dennis who is clearly still looney tunes, but sounds like she's trying to get info on his cohorts! Wonder if this seccret community is somehow involved with what happened to Marcy? Can't blame Harry for being over-protective of Ginny and their baby after recent events! Also wondering about the little boy with the bike! Looking foreward to the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks!




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