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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2018.11.16 - 12:29PM Title: Chapter 11

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I found this story just a few days ago and I'm glad it took me so long to find it. Bad weather at my house made it very easy to curl up with my laptop and a cuppa and binge-read to my heart's content. As soon as I realized this was the continuation of the Harry/Theia partnership from "The Aurors," I wiggled happily in my seat and settled down for a good read. Thanks for that.

I love how well Theia and Harry work together. It seems they know each other's strengths and weaknesses quite well and that Harry assigns her tasks that while not always pleasing, are quite agreeable to Theia's personality and work ethic. It seems that because of this, the clues seem to present themselves at the appropriate time during the unraveling of the mystery. If only more supervisors were as kind and astute as Harry!

My heart goes out to Marcy, mostly because she's such a lost soul. She's very lucky to have found Harry, since he seems to empathize with her situation more than most people. I know he will do right by her and get the answers she doesn't know she needs. I'm glad it was Theia who broke the news of her baby's death to Marcy.

I really like how Harry reflects that this particular mystery seems to be inside out or backwards as presented to him by Marcy. I also hope that when they return the bicycle to the boy, he will be willing to tell them what he saw, mostly because I don't think he understands why his bike was taken or what he witnessed.

Finally, I'm wondering what Dennis' role is in this particular mystery. I don't think you would have included the Azkaban scene or Theia's reflections in this story if he didn't have a significant role to play. Like everyone else, I'm eager to know what comes next, but as an author, I do know that real life often intrudes into personal writing time, so I'm content to wait for your next chapter. It will come when the opportunity presents itself. In the meantime, I'm going to reread "The Aurors" because it's such a great story, too.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, what an incredible review. I really appreciate the time you've spent over it and I'm so glad you're enjoying the fix so far!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.10.22 - 09:42AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm so sorry about your mother. Don't worry about updates, but I'm glad the writing is useful therapy.

I have a feeling the Burrow will completely overwhelm Ben, but the idea of Arthur getting hold of him is a hoot. I think he'd be far better off if Theia just babysat while Harry and Ginny went to the party, but what fun would that b3?



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.10.22 - 09:08AM Title: Chapter 11

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Something is definitely rotten in the state of Denmark....OK, maybe not in Denmark but definitely in Loney! Quite a shock for Marcy! Ralf is an odd character but maybe being protective of Marcy! I smell dark magic in the mix and I hope Harry and Theia are careful! Can't wait for the the next chapter! (I'll say a prayer for your mum and for you) :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D



Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.10.22 - 01:12AM Title: Chapter 11

Sometimes Marcy give me the creeps and this is one of these times. Very good chapter.

You don’t need to justify yourself. There is life beyond this and your mum is more important than anything else. I am sorry you have to endure this. A big hug.

Author's Response: Thank you so much xx



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.10.22 - 12:42AM Title: Chapter 11

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Whoa! What a very interesting way to end an update! Good job.

I am so sorry about your mum. She is a priority and so is life. Please do not worry about updates. I look forward to the ne t one whenever that’ will be. Take care.

Author's Response: Thank you xx



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.10.21 - 07:05PM Title: Chapter 11

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I have probably said it before, but I will say it again. I really like Theia as a character, I am glad she was there to put an arm round Marcy

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, it really means a lot! X




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