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Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2019.01.17 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 15

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You are so good at creating the atmosphere of your locations, especially the creepiness of the Loney, It seems to really be getting to Theia,at the moment. Ben is a great character - I love how he's coping with magic and just rolling with it all,

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's one of my favourite parts of writing. Maybe one day I will find the same love for action sequences!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2019.01.08 - 11:55PM Title: Chapter 15

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Chapter sixteen can't come out fast enough! Evil cliffie, this one. It's not fair to your readers to tell us only half the story and then make us wait. That's the mark of a true story-teller in my book, however. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Haha sorry! I'll get the next chapter up asap.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2019.01.08 - 10:12PM Title: Chapter 15

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Oh no....... what an ending!


Author's Response: :)



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.01.07 - 06:55PM Title: Chapter 15

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Great chapter but an ominous ending! So Marcy and Osman, eh? Wonder how Oeric figures in to this? Interesting conversation between Marcy and Theia! Nice plan of attack by Harry! Can't wait to see what comes next! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2019.01.07 - 02:59PM Title: Chapter 15

Hmm. No clue what's going on here, but eager to find out.

Author's Response: Hah, my husband is baffled too.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2019.01.07 - 01:33PM Title: Chapter 15

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Pretty intense chapter



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2019.01.06 - 08:02PM Title: Chapter 15

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Getting very near the end.




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