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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.02.18 - 10:06AM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Oh, oh, it's more bitter than sweet. Harry's really in a bad way. I don't think that he's up to teaching at Hogwarts at all. His message to Ginny is short and unequivocal, I don't want you to be my friend, leave me alone. To be honest, if I were Ginny, I'd never try to talk to him again.

On the other hand, Ginny has always been a strong girl. She got over all the hardships of her life without ever having someone as a source of comfort. Maybe, she will be able to help Harry in the end. Though, considering Harry's state of mind, I'm afraid it'll take years. Seems, you have a long, sad story for us here.

Author's Response: Oh dear, I wasn't supposed to make you think that! I promise it won't take years. Harry wasn't ready to face any of the Weasley's yet, let alone Ginny and it was a huge thing to be just dropped on him like that in that kind of situation so he's understandably upset right now. Ginny can see that, so she won't be deterred by it. And Harry's actually not that bad that he's not up to teaching, just as I said, it was a shock seeing Ginny when he wasn't ready for it. Hopefully the next chapter will show this. :)



Reviewer: snarky24 Signed Date: 2018.02.17 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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I like your portrayal of Ginny in this doc. She’s upset that he left, but she doesn’t unleash her temper on him. It shows how much she cares for Harry that she was able to hold back her questions and just ask if he was okay. Harry must be really struggling with guilt. Hopefully Ginny can help him see the truth

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, Ginny might be angry at Harry but she can also see that he's deeply troubled and is concerned for him and as you'll see soon, wants to help him.



Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.02.16 - 02:02PM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Wow! Heartbreaking to see Harry broken down so thoroughly. Heartwarming to see Ginevra searching for reasons rather than reaching for her wand. The last thing either of them need right now is for her to hex first and ask questions later.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Ginny might be angry at Harry but she can see he's troubled and is concerned for him so isn't stupid enough to hex him. That's not to say she might never need to do it though! :)



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.15 - 11:27AM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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So glad to see a new chapter on this! Harry is clearly still dealing with guilt and ghosts from the past! If anyone can get thru to Harry it's the feisty redhead he loves! Hope the next chapter comes quicker! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll have a word with the sheep and see if they'll let me get the next one up quicker! :)



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.02.15 - 10:21AM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Oh, poor Harry. It appears he's had a bit of a meltdown, and still has nowhere to turn. I would imagine when he was young and things got too much at the Dursleys, he'd retreat to his cupboard until he could collect himself, even though his cupboard was also a form of punishment. It seems to me, that's what he's doing here, too. I'm finding this story very intriguing, and I'm eager to see where you go with it. A huge thanks for not having Ginny rip him apart rather than noticing he's not okay. This seems much more how I imagine "his greatest source of comfort."

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! You know, I've never actually thought about it like that, it's a really interesting concept. And yes, Ginny might be angry at Harry but she's also been incredibly worried and can see that he's troubled so isn't daft enough to hex him without at least finding out what happened first.



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.02.15 - 07:13AM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Wow, Harry must have had a mega meltdown, especially if he hadn't remembered Ginny would be at Hogwarts. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes.

Author's Response: Thank you, more will be revealed about Harry's state of mind shortly :)



Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed Date: 2018.02.15 - 05:06AM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.02.14 - 06:41PM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

I’m not sure Ginny should have gone in but for sure not to leave...as for harry he needs to talk and Ginny maybe is the best one to talk to about everything.....kutgw

Author's Response: Thanks, I agree Ginny is the one he needs to talk to



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.02.14 - 06:09PM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Oh, poor Harry! He really is struggling tremendously. I suppose Minerva convinced him to return in the hope of helping him somehow since he is so alone in the world. Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Harry is struggling a lot and there'll be more on his return to Hogwarts soon



Reviewer: My Wicked Quill Signed Date: 2018.02.14 - 02:33PM Title: Chapter Three: Bittersweet

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Cool idea!

Author's Response: Thanks!




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