Reviews For Framed
Reviewer: Time Shifter Signed Date: 2018.03.24 - 09:02AM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Wow, an interesting series of premises here; Astoria with some Seer abilities, Ginny having a relationship other then jealousy with Romilda, the children being worse than the Carrows last year, and some very mysterious letters including one accusing Harry of some impropriety we know he isn't responsible for. I'm really enjoying the interactions between Harry and Ginny, it seems like they reconciled a little bit faster over the summer than most fics have them do. They're not struggling through the most common issues of even trying to get back together, but the ones you do have them dealing with make sense. I'm really excited to see what you have in store!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.23 - 04:35PM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Interesting, Polyjuice or Delusion? I wonder how the wards let the owl through. This is a very intriguing story. I like the way you've described both Astoria and Draco. I think you've captured Draco well - he's not good, but he's not totally bad. I like this version of Astoria and it fits in with her seeming delicate and dying young.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.23 - 03:18PM Title: Chapter 2: Ghosts
Uh oh! An owl spy? It's possible. If beetles can spy, so can owls. I love Harry's openess in sharing with Ginny.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.23 - 03:14PM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
Nice start! Harry handled the press very well. I can only imagine how awful it must be for him. I love the idea of him trying to enjoy the ball for Ginny's sake. They are very sweet together. I'm thinking a murder would definitely ruin the evening!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.03.14 - 07:59PM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Dun Dun Dun The plot thickens! Someone is clearly setting Harry up! I'll admit, the beginning of this chapter through me! Everytime there was a Crack! I thought someone was Apparating! Clearly I read too much fanfiction as eggs were a much more logical assumption! Choked on the line about not being sorry for putting his hand in his daughter's knickers lol! Too funny. Great update!
Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.03.14 - 04:16AM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Youíre doing a great job, already waiting for more!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.03.13 - 07:48PM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Wow! I hope Harry hands over the letter to Ginny. To say it is strange is rather an understatement. The way you wrote Harry's inner monologue was brilliant! It was truly so very Harry in every way. I also appreciated the slight comic relief of his wayward thoughts concerning Ginny's knickers ;) Well done!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.03.13 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Oh no...... not a breakfast cliffhanger!
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.03.13 - 11:30AM Title: Chapter 6: Apologies for Breakfast
Great chapter! Harry is still struggling with the aftermath of the war but he seems to have his head on straight as far as his future as an Auror and with Ginny! Interesting note which seems very suspicious to me! Obviously intended to look like it was from Romilda Vane but clearly came after her murder from someone with the skill to get that owl thru the wards - like a dark someone who wants revenge against Harry! Looking forward to the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 11:33PM Title: Chapter 5: Romilda
Oh, poor Romilda. You have turned her into a martyr in this story. Something should be done about her gang rape. Hopefully Astoria will be brave enough to speak out.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 03:11PM Title: Chapter 5: Romilda
I shudder to think about what happened to Romilda at Hogwarts! She was easy to dislike but this sheds a whole new light on the character - she seems to have coped well and certainly didn't deserve to be murdered! Were I an Auror, I'd start looking at who hurt her at school as they'd be most likely to have a motive to murder her to keep her quiet and frame Harry for revenge! I can foresee why Draco would be key to helping Harry - he'd likely know who the culprits in Romilda's attack were since they were probably Slytherins, assuming he himself wasn't involved! Will be interesting to see where the Astoria angel leads! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 02:18PM Title: Chapter 5: Romilda
I really like how you are showing unexpected sides to various characters, and all in a completely believable way.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 06:58AM Title: Chapter 5: Romilda
I believe this is the first story I have ever read that makes me feel sorry for Romilda. You have successfully painted an image of Hogwarts while under Death Eater control that is quite horrifying. I suppose a lot of painful truths will be unveiled as part of the investigation. Looking forward to reading how you connect it all together!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.02.26 - 06:18AM Title: Chapter 5: Romilda
I never liked romilda in the books. Of course, she was written as pretty unlikable, especially for a H/G shipper. That last revelation, though! You can't help but feel for her, and now she's dead. I'm guessing this is going to become e important to the criminal investigation as soon as it comes to light. Is someone who escaped justice trying to make sure it stays that way? I'll be looking forward to finding out more about what is going on.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.02.12 - 05:04PM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
Very interesting...I admit I am quite enjoying this glimpse into the lives of the Malfoy family. Looking forward to seeing how you pull this story together!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.02.12 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
I am sure it will all come together and make sense in the end, but the time line seems a bit odd at the moment.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.02.11 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
Poor, spoiled, pampered Draco. Pfftt. I wonder who's hunting him though - the good guys or the bad guys? It was neat to see how Astoria fits into their storyline. This is a really neat story, and you write well so it's a pleasure to read. Keep going!
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.02.11 - 08:47PM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
Wow. Who's hunting Draco? What ever happened with Pansy she rarely appears in fanfiction
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.02.11 - 05:46PM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
Ominous ending there! There is certainly no shortage of arrogance in the Malflunky family! I think this may be the first fic where I've seen something about how Draco and Astoria met - might make an interesting side story! Can't wait for the next chapter - this is on an interesting track! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.02.11 - 02:22PM Title: Chapter 4: We Were Malfoys
An interesting view of the Malfoys after the battle. They are not something I had given much thought to but I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Now, someone is threatening Draco? Will this turn out to be related to the poisoning at the Ministry, or something totally unrelated? I'll be looking forward to finding out more.