Reviews For Framed
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.01.24 - 11:35AM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
You are off to a good start! A well written first chapter and an interesting story idea so I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2018.01.23 - 06:49AM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
A good start to your story with the appropriate cliffhanger at the end to make sure your readers keep coming back. We definitely need to know how someone clearly on the other side of a huge room can be the only suspect in a murder case. Well done.
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 04:42PM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
Interesting start to the story, and I congratulate you on your summary - that's what really drew me in. I love stories that take place shortly after the battle to see how everyone is coping. You write well, and the story flowed perfectly. The only thing that gives me pause is the feeling I get that you don't like Ron. I know there are people who don't, but Harry does so it concerned me. Of course, I could also be completely reading into it incorrectly, and I look forward to more.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 12:20PM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
Really, really like the premise for this story! Not sure how Harry can be a suspect if the victim was in a far corner of the ballroom away from Harry and he was with Ginny and others! You've gripped me with this so I can't wait to seed where you take it! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.22 - 09:30AM Title: Chapter 1: The Midsummer Ball
Interesting start to this story! I'm curious to learn who the victim is. A reporter perhaps?