Reviews For A Tale of Two
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2018.03.15 - 02:13PM Title: Prologue
I agree with your other reviewers. You need to do something about your spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. They detract from the story and leave the reader with the sense that you don't care about what others think of your writing. I was also disappointed that the first thing I read was your author's note that stated that you doubted that you'd finish the story in time for the deadline. My question to you is this: why bother submitting the story if you know you're not going to finish it on time? The rules clearly state that all stories must be marked as "complete" by the end of the submission period.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.14 - 11:22PM Title: Prologue
I hope you are able to finish this in time for the challenge. Interesting concept, can't wait to see where you go with it. I have to agree with the other reviewers - find a good beta or proof reader.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.03.09 - 09:01AM Title: Prologue
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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.03.08 - 01:26PM Title: Prologue
Interesting start, I'm curious where they'll end up. The name Malfoy in the summary, already makes me fear the worst.
Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2018.03.08 - 01:46AM Title: Prologue
I like your story - in concept.