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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2018.10.28 - 02:41AM Title: Chapter 1
You actually make me feel sorry for Dean in this story! Well done. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: THanks Arnel,it was a prompt on the HarryandGinny discord page, Im happy how it turned out. Great to hear from you xx
Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2018.04.17 - 06:13AM Title: Chapter 1
A new name? Interesting...I didn't know you had a profile on the 'other' site. Does the material run more risque?
You made me sympathize with Dean, if only for the duration of your short story. I will admit it felt good not to have to wear my sea legs for this one(hint hint). I will never forget the name HPMum2014, if only I could remember why...;)
Author's Response: Yes, i have more adult content on my other two sites, I've been there for awhile now. Thanks for your kind words xx
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.04.16 - 05:11PM Title: Chapter 1
The Queen and her Broomstick of Brilliance has returned over the moon high with this one! Glad to see you have consolidated to the one name! There is only one Queen tho! Really enjoyed this one! Can't help but feel sorry for Dean but he was still a jerk with Ginny! He also didn't realize the powerful magic between Potter men and their redheads! So glad to see a new one from you O Queen! ::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Author's Response: Aw, I thought JKR was the Queen! LOL Happy you liked it and yes, Harry and Ginny were meant to be. Still, he really could have made it awkward for the two of them, or even for Harry before the kiss, which may have made Harry have second thoughts. Great to hear from you xx
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.04.16 - 02:05PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent insights! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, great to hear from you xx
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.04.15 - 02:05PM Title: Chapter 1
Had to read this -- great job, and great timing for me as I'm currently (for reasons you may guess) also re-evaluating the Dean-Ginny-Harry triangle.
Anyway, I do appreciate your rendition greatly. Canonically, Dean was a bit thick at times but then *everyone* in canon is a bit tick at times. In any case, he was honourable in the end, and never made life difficult for Harry or Ginny after 'the kiss', which is more than can be said of lots of real world exes.
One tiny spelling catch that I'll send to you via PM.
Great read -- thanks!
Author's Response: It' not something I'd usually write, in fact, when the request came through with several suggestions, this was probably the one i was least interestted in. But then i had an epiphany in the shower (funny, i get a lot of inspiration when im in the shower!!) and knew which angle I wanted to go. Thanks. Spelling error is fixed, good spotting. xx
