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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.07.15 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 2

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When in doubt rock the casbah!!,



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2018.05.27 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 06:46AM Title: Chapter 2

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Interesting way to murder someone. A few comments, if you don't mind. Hermione said there was nothing remarkable about the body, but if she was held captive and poisoned she would have been vomiting and dehydrated which would be evident in the exam. Milk sickness is a unique way to murder someone, but how could Hermione tell she'd had ten liters of milk in the last five days? It wouldn't all still be in her system. That just seemed a bit odd.

Author's Response: I don't mind at all! I am always looking for constructive criticism. You are right, no doubt. I had similar thoughts about a week after I posted it, however I didn't want to change anything and mess with people who have already read this chapter. With things like that I've come to a conclusion to leave it be, but make improvements in the future chapters. Thank you for pointing that out, much appreciated.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.05.07 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter 2

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This was certainly an intriguing chapter! The number 1 on Cho is ominously indicative of a potential serial killer! Corner would be a good suspect if he hadn't apparently been in the states when the body was dumped, unless he had an accomplice! Using a poison from the States in milk would indicate the suspect has been to the States previously or could be someone with potions or pharmaceutical knowledge! Suspect would seem more likely to be muggle born or half blood since a muggle poison was used, possibly with a grudge toward magical people and or young women! A lot of possibilities and few answers! One thing is for sure - I can't wait for the next
chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: I'm glad your detective mind is at work here. Maybe you will solve the case before Harry and Tonks! I love seeing thoughts and theories. Thank you for reading and hopefully you like the next couple of chapters as well!



Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.05.05 - 06:13PM Title: Chapter 2

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Yay! Youíre back with another chapter!

Cho was never a favorite of mine, but wow... what a creative and horrible way to go. Iím intrigued by the 1 on her wrist. I assume there will be more victims, but will they all go the same way? And will this eventually tie to Ginny, or is that a parallel plot line... inquiring minds want to know! Well done!

Author's Response: You ask all the right questions, sadly you're just going to have to wait to get the answers lol. Get ready for some more information in the next couple of chapters. I hope you're ready for some twist and turns!




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