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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.06 - 08:57AM Title: The Howler

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fantastic chapter
love the way that Ginny send a Howler while everyone else tiptoes around him - just what Harry needed! :)



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.11.09 - 02:52PM Title: The Howler

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.18 - 01:26PM Title: The Howler

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nice little climax there! and fred and george are genuinley concerned, and no don't molly will be when she sees him!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.08 - 10:44PM Title: The Howler

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.11.28 - 11:55PM Title: The Howler

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.19 - 12:20AM Title: The Howler

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 11:31AM Title: The Howler

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.10 - 12:01PM Title: The Howler

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oohh poohy well at least he's safe...for now...good howler ginny!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.09 - 09:55PM Title: The Howler

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God I love Ginny, that howler was brilliant. Hedwig is a genius for taking the letter. At least now they will know how he's really doing, the good and the bad. What a great chapter, both exciting and emotional. I agree you are a natural writer and a amazing story teller.



Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2005.07.26 - 01:57AM Title: The Howler

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This ils the second time I have read this story. The characters are wonderful. It keeps you interested and makes you care about Harry and the characters. Keep up the good work.



Reviewer: lunalovegood616 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.07 - 07:17PM Title: The Howler

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PHEW! I was worried there!



Reviewer: Stringer Anonymous Date: 2004.07.14 - 01:17PM Title: The Howler

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Oh my... I cried when Hedwig picked his letter out of the trash and flew to Grimmauld Place. I wish I had something... anything that loyal to me. I love this story! *runs off to read the rest*

Author's Response: Thanks, yeah...Hedwig does love Harry.



Reviewer: Daily Prophet Reporting Signed Date: 2004.04.08 - 10:53PM Title: The Howler

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Just picked up reading this last night and wanted to say I like what I've seen so far.

You seem to have an excellent grasp on the characters, and your portrayal of their emotions is fitting of the title. You've captured Harry's sense of loss quite well with his indifferent attitude and the vivid description of his sad condition.

But I most like your Ginny. As you say in Chapter 4 (which I've started but not finished), the contrast between her sending a howler and everyone else's messages to Harry is striking. The letter emphasizes that something we see that sets her apart in OotP.

I will definitely keep reading. Good job.

-KC

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've seen your work over at PhoenixSong and enjoyed it. I'm glad you like this one so far, I'll be interested to see if I hold your attention! Let me know!



Reviewer: Strider Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 08:36PM Title: The Howler

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This is great, I'm really enjoying this story. It makes me sad that Harry' s so depressed, but I woldn't be surprised if that's exactly how book 6 opens. One small suggestion- remember "show, don't tell." Consider using more dialogue and action to show everyone's state of mind and feelings. That's a small thing- it's really very good. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll remember your suggestion but a lot of this is already posted so I hope it doesn't drive you to crazy. Hope you continue to enjoy!



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 11:59AM Title: The Howler

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go ginny! I knew she could always bring harry down a peg. she knows exactly what he needs to come back down from his high horse. though i know he's in a ton of pain.



Reviewer: Ides of March Anonymous Date: 2004.02.22 - 05:24PM Title: The Howler

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Yes! That's my Ginny!. I love your story.



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.02.07 - 08:56PM Title: The Howler

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Good! I really like that someone is willing to tell him what he needs to hear. He needs to be slapped around a bit. If he's not, he'll just die (literally). He's a mess. I also liked Hedwig taking matters into her own hands - very clever. Still enjoying it!



Reviewer: justanotherfan21 Signed Date: 2004.01.20 - 12:10PM Title: The Howler

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I have read, an re-read this chapter several times now in an attempt to find out what had so intrigued me. I figured it out, this was the same nervous tension I felt the first two times I read OoTP. Way to go! But, the platform you've made for yourself, I ask you?! 10+

Author's Response: OMG, I don't think you could have ever paid me a higher compliment. I'm flattered, disbelieving, but flattered nonetheless! Thank you



Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2004.01.20 - 11:49AM Title: The Howler

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Excellent plot and well written! Look forward to more!



Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.01.20 - 10:41AM Title: The Howler

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This is a good story and a great chapter. I personally can't think of anything to change on it. I like the action and the way you are developing the characters. Keep up the good work.




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