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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.06 - 10:22AM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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super chapter
love the story



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.11.09 - 07:21PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.09 - 09:49PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.12.01 - 12:00AM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.21 - 09:23PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 01:43PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.15 - 05:35PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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well that was interesting...why is trent being cold toward harry...she should understand! i hope that remus shows harry some good memories of his parents and ginny and harry need to get together!!!



Reviewer: lunalovegood616 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.08 - 08:20PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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I"m not sure about this Prof. trent person...



Reviewer: Silly Cowgirl (aka S.Black13) Anonymous Date: 2004.08.15 - 02:51PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Okay i just thought to let you know I was still reading, and I cant wait to finish. Oh and I was thinking, you said Harry had never seen the ocean before. But I thought he had when he went out on that Rock where there was the shack that he and the Dursleys stayed in in book 1, you know, before Harry knew he was a wizard. Just a thought.

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Author's Response: Yeah, I've since realized that. Ooops. That wasn't a real vacation though, he needs a real one at the beach. I love the beach.



Reviewer: swishandflick Signed Date: 2004.03.23 - 08:18AM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Great scenes between the foursome! I especially liked the fact that Harry thought he owed Ron and Hermione an apology. I didn't really understand why Ron seemed so sexist though; was he just trying to wind Hermione up? I also liked the scene with Lupin and Harry though for some reason I've never really liked James since OoTP (well not for SOME reason, I suppose, but still....). I had thought Harry had contradicted Cho but then I remembered he hadn't. I'm a little surprised Dean would have been the one to tease Ginny but that's probably a good sign, really, if he can be that easy in front of her. Very in character for Ron to think that would lighten up the conversation. I also continue to like the way you put bits of the prophecy in italics to show what Harry is thinking about; it's very haunting and very well done. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: I don't see Ron as sexist, but I do see him that puts his foot in his mouth during the heat of the battle. He just got carried away and knew he went to far. Our Hermione makes him crazy! Yeah, I can't help but think that something with the enormity of the Prophesy wouldn't be weighing heavily on his mind! Thanks for the continued reviews!



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.03.06 - 02:50PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Oh, no! I'm behind! I'm not sure if I like Trent or not - I guess that 's the idea for now, huh. I'm intrigued by her change - I'm wondering if she's a polyjuiced DE, but I guess that's been done before, huh. I like how Harry's relationship with Ginny is continuing, but still isn't crossing the line into romanic yet. Good chapter - getting the feel for school. Oh, and I'm really suspicious about Harry sending the Maurader's Map away - now he can't see if Trent is an imposter!

Author's Response: Still friends for now, but that's about to change...in a few more chapters anyway. Smirk!. Damn, you picked out something no one else commented on, we'll see...No Polyjuice here though.



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 01:31PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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I cannot wait to see the Pensieve. How great will that be? And I am extremely curious about this Diana person? Who is she, why does she know Lil---hey, did she love Sirius? Did Sirius love her? Maybe! Can't wait.



Reviewer: bart Signed Date: 2004.02.26 - 01:00PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Nearly forgot to review **smacks self with random frozen fish :)** and then I put it in the wrong place! It's the little things I rally like in this story, and Harry doing a runner, when Professor Trent, mentioned she knew his parents, felt so right, so Harry...Then Ron showing his mature side in talking to Harry, the teaspoon's grown up! but again felt right and something Ron would say. Excellent stuff once again.

Author's Response: Yeah, well, our heroes are all growing up! Thanks for the positive feedback!



Reviewer: EarthRowan Signed Date: 2004.02.26 - 11:02AM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Brilliant Chapter, I like it very much. Have a great vacation!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm home now and working on the next chapter!



Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.02.24 - 05:37PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Ok I am so jealous that you get to go to the Carribbean that I may not review, so there!!!! OK now really, I enjoyed this chapter like I have enjoyed the others and I hope you have a great vacation. Cheers

Author's Response: Well, thanks for reviewing anyway Angie! I'll try to get up the next chapter by mid-week next!



Reviewer: arios (Too lazy to sign in) Anonymous Date: 2004.02.24 - 04:29PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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As someone who grew up in the Caribbean I really hope that it doesn't rain while you're down there! Other than that, good chapter!

Author's Response: I hope it doesn't rain either! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: MythWeaver Anonymous Date: 2004.02.24 - 04:02PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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Brilliant, yet again, as always. I continue to be amazed at your story and character depth, your research and writing style. Bravo! And please, have a wonderful time in the Caribbean- for me!

Author's Response: Thanks MythWeaver! I'll have an umbrella drink for you!



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.02.24 - 03:19PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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ooo i cant wait for Remus's memories about Harrys parenst! this is good, i cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks Rach! That will happen at Christmas time.



Reviewer: Sir Ollivander Signed Date: 2004.02.24 - 03:08PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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A good transission back to school. Friendly memories helped. Good chapter. BTW, didn't Snape date Lily for a short while?

Author's Response: Maybe. Not in canon though (yet anyway). So far I have guesses on Snape, Moony and Sirius. Any others? What about Peter?



Reviewer: justanotherfan21 Anonymous Date: 2004.02.24 - 02:01PM Title: Teach Your Children Well

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This chapter seemed to go at a different pace. I really like how you hit on things from the previous books. Highlights that make it so personal with each character. Harry is also behaving his age now. Cool. The way you handle the classes and their progression is amazing to me. I also like how you've weaved in Professor Trent. She seems authentic. When are you going to let us know who the other guy Lily dated was???? Hope you two have a great time on the beach! Until you get back JAF21

Author's Response: Thanks! Who says I'm going to let you know? Who do you think it is?




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