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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.07 - 01:27PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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cutechapter between Harry and Ginny
hope they learn how each other feel soon



Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2008.08.16 - 11:23AM Title: Put Me In Coach

hey, i love emotional Harry. with all he's gone through, he's bound to be emotional at some point.



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.09 - 10:16PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.21 - 09:34PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 01:58PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.15 - 05:48PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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ron cracks me up at times! good chapter



Reviewer: calandrina Anonymous Date: 2007.05.01 - 08:38AM Title: Put Me In Coach

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this is the second time i've read this story and i still love it. i've read so many fanfics that i forget what happens, but i do know that this one is brilliant!! just wanted to let you know i'm a fan of yours...



Reviewer: YELLOWITCH15 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.03 - 03:35PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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HELLO AUTHOR ! I THINK THIS STORY IS FAB BUT I WANT HARRY TO BE MORE HANDSOME(IN A GOOD LIGHT YA KNOW) CANT WAIT TO READ THE REST!!!!!!!!!1



Reviewer: lunalovegood616 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.08 - 08:34PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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*whiny voice* but it's FUn when you make Harry emotional.. *end whiny voice* anyways, gr8 story/chapter!



Reviewer: swishandflick Signed Date: 2004.03.25 - 07:50AM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Good for you for not making Remus into a replacement for Sirius, he's not, though perhaps he himself might want to be. I liked when Harry used to describe how he hated his parents for leaving him and he was uncomfortable with kissing; those haven't come through in canon but they seem very real.

Author's Response: Thanks S&F! I can't help but think Harry would have to feel that way in his situation, it's how I see him anyway! I'm glad you thought it seemed real.



Reviewer: elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.03.07 - 07:33PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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just thanking you for replying to my review. i know how much a good review means to an author. and heck, you deserve it!

Author's Response: No, thank you for giving all those reviews!



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.03.06 - 03:11PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Good. I'm glad Harry's expressing some of his emotions, and I'm glad Ginny was there to distract him from things. But I'm disappointed in Remus's lack of affection. Of, course, I'm partial to my werewolf, it's not your writing. Each writer can characterize people as they wish, and I think yours is perfectly compatible with canon (but so is mine). Moving on...

Author's Response: I warned you you wouldn't like this chapter!! Remember, it was some time ago but I warned you! I'm very partial to Remus myself, but, as I said, I think he's a lot more like Harry than Sirius.



Reviewer: Sleepy Signed Date: 2004.03.04 - 09:55AM Title: Put Me In Coach

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think I've just lurked until now but wanted to say well done I love this!!

Author's Response: Thanks for de-lurking! I appreciate it! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm loving writing it!



Reviewer: elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 01:41PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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no one can take sirius' place, remus certainly can't--and i think he knows that. but he is the only marauder left (of the *true* marauders) and is harry's last key to james, lily, and sirius. i do see where he's coming from. update! can't wait to see the pensieve, as i told you.

Author's Response: Elizabeth! What a great reviewer you are, you did every chapter at once! Thank you! The pensieve scene WILL happen but not until Christmas when he and Harry are together. I've made a few notes on the scene but it's not written yet. I just know where it's going to fit in so you'll have a bit of a wait. Dean's not going to cause much trouble, you'll see next chapter where he's comig from, Cho, on the other hand, will continue to be a pain (like I think she is!). Thanks much!



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 08:08AM Title: Put Me In Coach

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You know what Melindaleo, I think you're correct! If not just in your story think of JK's when Remus went to pat Harry's shoulder to comfort him after he just saw his mum and dad being killed but pulled his hand away. People tend to expect Remus to be really open and comforting to Harry, but he probably has his own demons to deal with and things! I'm glad you thought of that aspect of Remus, it's truely interesting! I never even thought about it before I made Remus comforting, but really he's how you described him! Kudos to you and your awesome thinking of Remus! Great job!

Author's Response: OMG, thank you Gillian! That is exactly where this is coming from. I've read a lot of fics that have Remus filling SIrius' role and I just don't think that will happen. I think JKR killed Sirius to further isolate Harry and I don't think she'll fill that role with anyone else. I think Remus does love Harry, but he has his own problems with getting too close.



Reviewer: Hermione Anonymous Date: 2004.03.03 - 05:42AM Title: Put Me In Coach

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I agree with my clone (Hermione) you can't apparate in Hogwarts, but that's ok. This is fic after all! Great job! I'm looking forward for the next chapter! I'm a die-hard H/G just like you. You write almost as well as J.K. Rowling!

Author's Response: Okay, one more time. I know you can't apparate in and out of Hogwarts. You can't apparate in and out of Grimmauld Place either, but the twins DO apparate inside. The Room of Requirement is designed to suit your needs, so I used my creative license and decided for this story, apparating inside the Room of Requirement is going to work. Somehow, I feel canon mentions this way too many times for there not to be a loophole somewhere.

Author's Response: So sorry, I just reread that and I think it came out much harsher than intended! Thank you so much for both the compliment and the review, I really, really appreciate them!



Reviewer: EarthRowan Signed Date: 2004.03.02 - 10:48PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Lovely chapter, not to sure on the angsty Harry Bit, but that could just be from emotional overload in RL. Lupin, I dunno, maybe it's because I'm such a S/R shipper that something seems a little flat about Lupin. Also, it took me a bit to realize it was Moony and not Moody. So that threw things off too. Still, great chapter

Author's Response: Sorry about the Moony/Moody thing. I've noticed that too, but hey those are the names! Can't help with the S/R thing as slash isn't my thing. Angst is however, so Harry will continue to have his bouts. I can't help but feel that real grief doesn't go away after just one good cry, it's more gradual. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it.



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 07:22PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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Awesome job!! I loved it! To cute! Poor Harry, why did Remmy run away from him? Poor Remus! Hmm I wonder why DADA Prof is acting as if Harry offended her! Great chapter! I hope you had an awesome vacation! Sounded wonderful! Grand Cayman?! Awesome!

Author's Response: Love your enthusiasm Gillian! I see Remus as having as much difficultiy expressing emotion as Harry has. He pulls away from people and I don't think he feels he's what Harry needs, even though he is.



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 04:15PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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yea! i really liked this, and i can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, working on more!



Reviewer: MythWeaver Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 02:12PM Title: Put Me In Coach

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This chapter was just so much fun! I just love Quidditch! You had Lupin's character down pat! He's got to learn to open up about as much as Harry does! So glad you had a fun trip- I thought about you as I slaved away at work last week!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really had a good time, but back into the thick of it now! Yeah, I see a lot of similarities to Harry and Lupin.




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