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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.07 - 02:15PM Title: After Effects

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great story
thanks for sharing



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.21 - 11:38PM Title: After Effects

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 03:09PM Title: After Effects

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.15 - 07:09PM Title: After Effects

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aw bloody hell! why would he be having a party when he was the one who "died" that night! stupid idiot!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.11 - 04:48PM Title: After Effects

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Just what I thought booze has the same effect on everyone, bet neither of them would forget the pain afterwards but they will be ready to drink again soon.



Reviewer: Just A. Fan Anonymous Date: 2004.04.16 - 04:22PM Title: After Effects

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Wow Melindaleo, you've outdone yourself. There was information in there I had not expected. Nor have given much thought to. You did it well. I also enjoyed the touch with Voldemort's celebration cutting through into Harry's thoughts at HW. Makes you wonder just exactly how far progressed the connection is. It also ties in to what I wonder...When the prophecy says, "Neither can live" or something close, that could mean two people cannot share one mind. I love how you're tapping that.

Author's Response: Thanks JAF! Glad to see you're back! I've missed you!



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.04.16 - 01:22PM Title: After Effects

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Bwahaha! You keep me laughing! That is SO like Hermione, with the sobering potion thingie. You described the hangover so well. Again, I am glad Harry let Ginny see the pictures. they really are getting close. Ugh, Voldemort. Sounds like something he'd do, but it's so overwhelmingly sad because Lily and James died in the hollow.



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.04.03 - 01:24AM Title: After Effects

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That was good! I was cracking up over hung over!Harry! I loved the way his friends were able to help him put some of the demons about October 31st aside. The bit at the end was intriguing - an anniversary celebration? Hmmm...

Author's Response: Thanks Cindale. He does have a good group of friends, doesn't he?



Reviewer: chptrseeker Anonymous Date: 2004.03.30 - 03:19PM Title: After Effects

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Really good whensthe next chptr coming?

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter just went up!



Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.03.30 - 02:01PM Title: After Effects

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What a good chapter, I love the idea of Harry sharing his photo album with his friends. What a great way to write it. Voldie is so sick, having an anniversary party? Good grief! Looking forward to more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, yeah it was time Harry opened up a little.



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.03.30 - 05:06AM Title: After Effects

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Drunk Harry. That was an nice change. Something different. Though he did act like a git, but thats what makes it fun. =D Celebrating is he now? Well, he's stupid (Voldie). Stupid old Mouldyshorts... Anyway, that was a great two chapters and we all hope you add more really soon!

Author's Response: Whydid you think he was he a git? I kind of liked DrunkHarry, but wait until Mrs. Weasley gets a hold of him!



Reviewer: Arnel Anonymous Date: 2004.03.30 - 12:58AM Title: After Effects

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Another terrific chapter! I certainly admire your writing skills an always look forward to the next posting. As for the contents of Chapters Seventeen and Eighteen, you handled Harry's "initiation" into adulthood with aplomb and tact, and I actually enjoyed seeing him have a carefree evening (even if it was at the expense of good health the next morning). I'm glad he got to experiment in the company of friends, that he didn't just suddenly become depressed and decide to drown his sorrows in alcohol solo. The big thing will be whether he learns a lesson or not...there's always the hint of a lesson in canon and hopefully Harry will have learned his. By the way, I really like how you are having him take charge of his position in the grand scheme of things; he could very well let the prophesy overwhelm him and decide not to do anything except reject Prof. Dumbledore's efforts to help him. Your Harry is showing a maturity that I hope will show up in Book Six. Only time will tell...in the meantime, fanfics such as yours keep us "addicts" happily satisfied. Keep up the good writing. You're a pleasant author to read.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the long review and the very kind compliments, blush! I, too, enjoyed Harry having fun and being a kid at the party. He doesn't get enough of that. I do think we'll see Harry mature in canon during Book 6, I really dont' see that he has a choice. JKR loves him even more than we all do and I don't think she sees him as a PIA kind of person. He just cracked a bit under allt he pressure.



Reviewer: swishandflick Signed Date: 2004.03.29 - 11:51PM Title: After Effects

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Amazingly, I managed to read all of the posted chapters finally! Even more amazingly SIYE made font adjustments possible! Yay! But I digress: the story is really picking up, including the action elements which were nicely interspersed with the interpersonal dramas. I'm really interested to see how this dynamic continues particularly as the stakes get higher. Wondering if Snape makes a habit of wandering around the Great Hall after midnight? Just a thought... Professor Trent seems kind of creepy; difficult to know what's going on with her. The H/G stuff was very good, of course; I especially like Harry and Ginny's discussion about the lack of past birthday parties and Ginny's thoughts on how Harry could turn out this way with such an abusive upbringing. Too bad Harry's revelation had to come when he was drunk; Ginny seemed to have taken it remarkably well; I shouldn't worry about whether you've convinced us underage drinking is bad! I confess I suppressed a gag at Hermione's "big sister" talk; as if she's qualified to give one! Still she sort of turned the other cheek after Ginny wanted to blackmail her. Maybe she feels bad about it now? Interested to see where this is going. Please update me with future chapters when you have posted them!

Author's Response: Wow S&F, I'm impressed! I know, aren't you excited about the font changes! I would assume different teachers might be on patrol at different times, H&G were just lucky enough to be up to trouble when Snape was making his rounds. I get the feeeling he always senses trouble anyway. Did you think Ginny took it well? My thought is that she just doesn't believe it. More on that next chapter. Sorry to make you gag, but I do think Hermione likes to put her nose in things, out of a genuine concern, so I thought that was something she'd do.



Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2004.03.29 - 02:16PM Title: After Effects

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Ah...now you have given us a cliffhanger! I don't feel nearly as guilty for mine now!

Author's Response: Well, I didn't really intend that as a cliffhanger! I've just worked on scenes I consider to be a REAL cliffhanger, so consider yourself warned! LOL! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: KEDme Signed Date: 2004.03.28 - 08:44PM Title: After Effects

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Ooooo... a cliffhanger! I just read the party chapter and this one. Nice job! I loved seeing Harry so uninhibited. That was too funny! Also, the way he admitted his feeling for Ginny was priceless. I'm glad Ginny (or anyone else, for that matter) didn't say anything. Hermione was right. It would scare him off, wouldn't it? The bit about Harry researching himself is a new angle. I've never seen that done before. How weird would that be? Maybe they'll learn something that may help Harry win again? Keep the chapters rolling. I, for one, am still reading!

Author's Response: I didn't mean that one as a cliffhanger! Yikes, there's one coming later that you definitely won't like then! Thanks for the review Kedme!



Reviewer: Harry @ GP Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 04:56PM Title: After Effects

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I absolutely love your story. Makes me wanna just grab ya, lift you up and spin you round and round everytime I finish a new chapter. I loved the "crush scene" at the party in the last chapter, and was very happy about Harry appearing to let Ginny in even more now - although I wanted him to let her touch his scar, that always seems to lead to interesting things :-) Keep up the great work, you're wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Harry! You alwasys say the nicest things! I'll work on a scar scene just for you, okay?



Reviewer: sara Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 04:27PM Title: After Effects

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that was a great chapter! i'm glad you're taking g/h up a notch.

Author's Response: I hope you like the next chapter then! I worked on a lot of it lying on the beach in Grand Cayman!



Reviewer: oldmuggle Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 04:17PM Title: After Effects

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Great story. I loved the ending of that chapter. Never saw it coming. Very nice, please keep writing

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm still writing, working on some Christmas stuff now...



Reviewer: Rifke Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 03:47PM Title: After Effects

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wonderful ... I am waiting impatiently for the next update ... quickly, please! ~Rifke

Author's Response: I'm trying!! It's hard to find the time to write these days and I don't want to get to a spot where there is nothing between whrere you are and where I am, I know that would give me an instant block!



Reviewer: Jerry Anonymous Date: 2004.03.28 - 02:55PM Title: After Effects

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As I've said before, you display good story structure and excellent plots throughout your work. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for responding again Jerry, I couldn't reply before! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I'll try to keep it up!




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