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Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2011.12.18 - 10:36PM Title: Revelations

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I was glad to see Snape show his true colours in front of Remus and Dumbledore. Usually he saves that for Harry alone. Also the scene where Harry asked Ginny to the Ball was cute.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.09 - 04:46PM Title: Revelations

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fantastic chapter
I'm glad Harry and Ginny are going together
well done to Moony for punching Snape - it's about time someone did



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.21 - 11:50PM Title: Revelations

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 03:24PM Title: Revelations

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.15 - 07:26PM Title: Revelations

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WAIT so how was snape their! argg! this sucks!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.12 - 01:44AM Title: Revelations

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Awesome chapter, I'm glad because Harry finally asked Ginny to the ball. Way to go Harry. And because Remus clocked Snape, finally somebody let him have it.



Reviewer: lunalovegood616 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.14 - 07:01AM Title: Revelations

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Oh gosh, I never expected Remus to...well... break out of his quiet-er world... that way!!!!



Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Date: 2004.08.25 - 09:37AM Title: Revelations

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About time someone punched that great prat in the face!

Author's Response: LOL, yep, and since it couldn't be Harry (teacher and all), I needed to let Remus be the one to do it.



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.04.16 - 01:38PM Title: Revelations

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wow! you converted someone to our great ship! I wish I could have been from a different ship just so you could make me convert:) wait, no. i really don't want to ship H/Hr. Ick. No offense. That said, I am thinking that Sev had a thing for Lily. Truly. I think maybe Sirius taunted him about it and that's why he hates Sirius so much. That's my guess.



Reviewer: Dalf Anonymous Date: 2004.04.05 - 02:33AM Title: Revelations

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Well I have to admit I had been avidly reading this story for a while, and reading every update as soon as it came out. But, then your A/N on the party chapter for some reason convinced me that the chapter was going to be everyone OOC and so for some reason I just avoided reading it till todaly. I am happy to say that chaperter was actually one of my favorites. I have read a few fics with drinking sceens and not many of them seem to capture what I think woudl be in chricter for our heros. I think you did well and the story has gotten even better since. I am going to have to assume that having harry see that memorypushed Snape over the edge here. Otherwise I dont even think Snape could be usch an ass. Its also good that Remus hit him I think I woudl have lost respect for him otherwise. Maybe DD will make snape apoligise *lol*. Though that woudl be OOC for him .... he does not seem too concerned with prefesionilism when it comes to Snape in Connon ..... one of his flaws I fear. Keep up the good work! Dalf

Author's Response: Hi Dalf, so glad you came back and gave it another try! Sorry if I scared you off! That memory will obviously be significant to Snape, but you won't find out for a while. You don't honestly believe Snape would ever just make it easy on Harry do you?



Reviewer: HermioneGreen Anonymous Date: 2004.04.04 - 12:53PM Title: Revelations

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Fantasmic story so far! I am completly enjoying this. I look forward to the support Ginny will continue to give Harry. Update soon HermioneGreen

Author's Response: Working on it! Waylaid by a stomach bug this weeked so I dont' think I'll get a midweek post, as soon as I can though!



Reviewer: oldmuggle Anonymous Date: 2004.04.03 - 04:23PM Title: Revelations

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Terrific! please keep at it. I love the way that chapter went.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: RyokoTenchi Signed Date: 2004.04.03 - 09:28AM Title: Revelations

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awesome chapter again. i would like to thank you for such an awesome story. this chapter was well written and very nicely put together. glad snape got his nose busted in. it seemed like he had feelings for Lily. that has always been one of my beliefs since the pensieve episode in book 5. i only have one request of you. PLEASE DO NOT LET HARRY GO INTO SELF-PITY MODE or something like that and hurt what he has built with Ginny. it would be too dramatic for him right now. heck if all this happened to me in just a couple of hours( i am including the possibility of the H/G Row) i might walk off the astronomy tower. lol. great story, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We're still building H&G up at this point, but the time will come to add some tension, have to in order to keep it interesting! You know I'm a diehard H/G fan, they'll work it all out in the end!



Reviewer: Cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.04.03 - 01:41AM Title: Revelations

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Good! It's time for the H/G goodness, and I'm so glad Harry finally knows what he said the night he was drunk. I'm very curious about why Snape was at the Potter's house... -c

Author's Response: Yes Cindale, it's ALWAYS time for some H/G goodness, hint hint! As to why Snape was there, do you honestly think Snape, (or I!) is going to tell you? For now anyway...



Reviewer: swishandflick Anonymous Date: 2004.04.02 - 10:43PM Title: Revelations

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The plot really moved on a lot in this chapter. Harry asked Ginny to the ball (but we don't know what happened afterwards). Glad you considered the possibility of Ginny asking him; most H/G shippers don't seem to like this and the turnaround "not just as friends" was a good way of doing it. The scene in Snape's memory was really chilling, though, and the best part of the chapter. Is this what converted Severus away from being a DE? Did Snape save baby Harry? And how did they link up with Sirius? You also advance an interesting theory in this chapter which is that Sirius only took a stunning spell and then died because he fell through the veil whereas I have always assumed that he was killed by the curse and then chose to fall through the veil. We'll have to see. Great job and needless to say I hope Ginny is waiting up in the common room for him!

Author's Response: Thanks S&F, yeah, Ginny's no wallflower and I think if she got tired enough waiting for him, she'd make a move. I also think Harry's pride would spur him on, so, voila! As for Snape, I have to believe someone else was there or else how else did they know Lily sacrificed herself to save Harry? Harry sees that with the Dementors, but not until third year and DD knew instantly that he had to put Harry witht he Dursleys to keep the blood protection alive. Someone had to be there, IMHO. As for Sirius, the light was red, not green and Lupin didn't seem to have any doubt Sirius was dead. Again, IMHO, it was the Veil that killed him.



Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Date: 2004.04.02 - 08:45PM Title: Revelations

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Ooo that was awesome! Snape got wooped by lupin!! Go Moony. I wish Harry would have jinxed him tell he was un recognizable... but hey it was still cool seeing Moony let his anger out. The H/G scene was great... cant wait tell the Yule Ball. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks Alex! I like the Yule Ball, I wish JKR would bring it back! Such teenage fun. I liked letting Remus vent, he's been bottling it up as much as Harry has.



Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2004.04.02 - 08:49AM Title: Revelations

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Wow. Girl, that chapter was nothing short of PERFECT!!! Everything was as it should be-Harry and Ginny were perfectly in character, and the buildup to the invite and the invitation itself could not have been any better. The Occulumency lesson was incredible. I love where you are taking the story, love pondering where you might be going with the story. And so Snape was there when Harry's parents were killed? Things that make you go hmmm...... Keep doing your usual incredible job!



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.04.02 - 02:42AM Title: Revelations

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Snape knew?!?!?!?!?!?! He knew!? He knew and he never said- The Idiot! I hate Snape! If I was Harry then I WOULD HAVE JUST POUNCED ON HIM AND BEAT THE LIVING DAYLIGHTS OUT OF HIM! But anyhow, That was a great chapter. This story gets better by the minute! I like the idea of starting a new Yule ball. Even though Harry doesn't like them I do. Write more soon! ..:::~Kimmy~:::.. (Im a HUGE H/G fan so don't worry about me. I would never betray that Relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks Kimmy! I post on another site and the non H/G people are over there! Silly people! I liked having Remus be the one to do it, he needed to lose control and let it out too! I have a problem with Harry hitting a teacher so I wasn't going to go there. I like to make the character of Snape be vile, but I still really like the character!



Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Date: 2004.04.02 - 01:17AM Title: Revelations

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that was the best chapter EVER!!! that made my day, right there...Snape being punched, ginny and harry going to ball, ron and hermione...I LOVE IT. WONDERFUL chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Sara, glad I made your day, LOL!



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.04.01 - 07:48PM Title: Revelations

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OMG!! What a bastard, thank god Remus punched him! "To see the enjoyment of it happening" OMG!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I HATE SNAPE!! Urgh! You can tell this chapter was so well written! I could kill Snape right now, again thank god Remus punched him! I can't believe he said that! I can't believe Snape was there and he touched Lily's face, the scum! Aw such a sad scene Harry crawling up and touching Lily's arm! Aww! Where was Sirius? Poor soul Harry! Hey at least he got to ask Ginny out! That was hilarious he didn't want her to ask him so he blurted it out! Aw Poor Harry now hes going to be an emotional reck! LoL are you going to make Harry do what you're always asking me to do, give a good cry on Ginny's shoulders? Ah that'll be too sweet if you do! POOR HARRY! AH! Snapes a bastard, I hate him enough as it is, you just made me hate him even more! But love Remmy even more! He's so totally cool, punching him in the face I hope he broke his nose! This chapter was so well written! I was so far behind about four chapters, but I'm caught up once again, and can I say that party was hilarious! Harry is such a funny drunk, good thing Hermione had the smarts to split up Harry and Colin, that didn't look good! Great job! I LOVE your story Melindaleo! Its so great! I can't wait until you update! The quidditch game was awesome too! Your son continues to amuse me with his comments! I love it! LOL the small shirt and then catching the snitch before killing Voldie! LoL! *shocked face* Non H+Ger's on this site?! Good job, you must convert them, I leave it up to you! LoL! What an awesome story! You must update soon! I LOVE it!! Great job btw making featured story! You deserve it as well as all the reviews you get this story is awesome!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad I got you angry with Snape, you're supposed to be angry with Snape. I'm still not clear on which side he's on! The scene with Harry as a baby with a dead Lily has always been in my head, he wasn't an infant and at 15 months, he was old enough to realize something was wrong, if not understand. I already gave Harry his good cry on Ginny's shoulder, remember? Thanks so much for your enthusiasm!




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