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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.10 - 11:15AM Title: Casualties of War

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I can't believe that the Burrow has been destroyed!
I wish JKR had thought of keeping the Durleys stunned all the time to keep them quiet, it would have been much better for Harry



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.22 - 01:05AM Title: Casualties of War

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.14 - 12:57AM Title: Casualties of War

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.15 - 10:51PM Title: Casualties of War

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oooh i hope moony will be ok! oh ohohohoh! i really hope he will be ok! and george! oh dear i bet fred is completly at a loss!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.12 - 12:54PM Title: Casualties of War

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OK I stayed up until three in the morning reading I couldn't stop reading. This chapter actually made me cried. I can't believe, well yes I can, but anyway, Harry can't lose Moony. He just can't. Oh and of all people George, he's my favorite Wealesy brother. How sad it must be for Fred, They have such a tight bond. This sad was way too sad. Brilliant however.



Reviewer: shadowkat Anonymous Date: 2005.07.03 - 12:45AM Title: Casualties of War

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I figured I'd review I haven't reviewed since chapter one and I know authors like to know they haven't lost any readers. I think I started reading this yesterday, but anyway good story, I'm still reading and I'm still interested. I saw once of ur responses to a review in the last chapter I think...and I'm glad you're keeping Gin and Harry's snogging innocent for the most part. I always hate to see fan fics where they move so fast and end up sleeping with each other within days of them dating. I'm 16 and I think you should wait till you are older as it is (not for religious reason, just moral reasons i guess) and seeing as the wizard community is so much more old fashioned...woah..I totally lost my train of thought...Guess I shouldn't try to review at 1:45 in the morning...



Reviewer: lunalovegood616 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.17 - 09:55AM Title: Casualties of War

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Phew! Remus isn't dead.... I was REALLY worried there! I just hope he doesn't die at all... Talk about a sobering chapter...



Reviewer: swishandflick Signed Date: 2004.05.30 - 08:58PM Title: Casualties of War

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Your writing style is maturing deeply. This chapter proved true to the title of your fic in portraying the very complex emotions of the central characters very richly, especially Harry, but it was also nice to hear from Hermione, too; we haven't had too much of her perspective in this fic so far. I very much like the conversation between Hermione and Harry about heroism and her own self-acknowledged reluctance about wanting to find out what the prophecy in the Department of Mysteries had been. You've developed the relationship between Harry and Remus very well also, not succumbing to the temptation of having Remus instantly fall into the role of a Sirius-substitute as many fanfic writers do and acknowledging the difficult issues Remus must cope with falling Sirius' death. I look forward to getting to the next chapters soon!

Author's Response: Thanks S&F! No, I don't think Remus or anyone will ever take Sirius' place in Harry's heart. I'm really glad you liked this chapter. Of all of them, I think this one is my personal favorite.



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.05.11 - 10:24AM Title: Casualties of War

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Very good fallout chapter. Using Hermione to catch us up on what all happened. And you did a good job of stringing out the tension as long as possible. If you're taking votes - please don't kill my Remus!



Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Date: 2004.05.10 - 04:22PM Title: Casualties of War

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WOW that was just.....wow!! It was soooo emotional. I was soo scared for Moony (and still am). It was soo sad how Harry thought it was better to just expect the worst so he wouldnt get his hopes up :( I was glad that Hemione got to finally understand Harry and how he blames himself, because its really hard to understand unless you have lived it. OMG the poor Weasleys!! The burrow is gone... and not only that EVERYTHING THEY OWN how are they going to pay for all that..... maybe they can restore everything?? Im sure Dumbly knows a spell or two to fix things up? And the clock....... I almost cried there. I also like how he went into shock. A lot of writers will say he burst into tears or was screaming and yelling but truth betold when something like that happens you usually go into shock. Its hard to explain to people...my dad died when i was 8 and I didnt cry for atleast 3 months and then I bawled my eyes out. No one I know that has had something like that happen and they dont understand why I didnt just start crying, and they say they wouldnt be able to handle it the would scream and cry. But its really not like that your too...shocked. Im glad you put that reality in the story good job! Your ending of the chapie was soooooo touching!! Harry really feels really strongly about Ginny it was soo romatic. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I liked Harry in shock myself, I mean how could he not be and I hadn't seen it done before so... The Weasleys will be okay. They are staying at Grimmauld Place anyway, and remember, Harry gave them a significant portion of Sirius's estate.



Reviewer: Lo Anonymous Date: 2004.05.10 - 12:51AM Title: Casualties of War

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I don't think there's anything I really can say, except wow!! Your writing is brilliant, and I don't have anything I can criticize at all!! I love angsty Harry, nad the rest of your plot is so believable that it's hard to realize I'm not reading the novel ;) Besides- it's almost time for you to party--you are almost at the 500 mark!! Early congrads....as a reward i thinkyou should update as soon as possible so I can check it and try to be #500 (I like to be #'s you can remember, lol) Good Work!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I know, can you believe there are that many reviews? I can't! Thank you all so much. You'll always be remembered by me becuase you were my first one!



Reviewer: Irish_Lass08 Signed Date: 2004.05.09 - 11:46AM Title: Casualties of War

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Amazing! You are one of the best writers on the entire website. I'm almost in tears. I like the whole thing with Hermione's parents. I noticed during the books that shes seeming to grow farther and farther away from her parents, and I was waiting for someone to make a reference to it. I've also noticed, that in fanfiction, people tend to make Hermione and Harry grow farther apart. That's sad, too! But anyways, I love this story. I've reviewed before, but never in my user name... good story, though... really good! Wow, this is a long review!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! Sorry to make you cry, I warned you all that Christmas wasn't going to be pretty! I'm wondering who you are now if you've reviewed before under a different name!



Reviewer: RyokoTenchi Signed Date: 2004.05.09 - 03:33AM Title: Casualties of War

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wow i thought i reviewed this chapter already lol. anyway i hope you do not think i am mad at you for not reviewing last chapter i got busy. anyway i have had worse angst so i am thankful ^^. that last bit in the Chapter where harry just HAD to be near her almost broke my heart. this is twice in a row i have had this feeling today because i also just read the latest chapter in Love and Power and that one also made me cry. i swear i need to stop reading stories that make me cry. ^^ glad you liked my little nickname though hehe.

Author's Response: Sorry, didn't mean to nearly break your heart, that was supposed to be the good part of the chapter actually! Angst is good though, gotta love the angst!



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.05.08 - 07:59PM Title: Casualties of War

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AWESOME CHAPTER!! What a great job! You brilliant brilliant person! I LOVED it! So good! Jeeze! Such awesome writings with the emotions of each of the characters! I love it! keep up the great work! Post some more soon!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Gillian! I'm glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: KEDme Anonymous Date: 2004.05.08 - 07:12PM Title: Casualties of War

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Nicely done! I thought Harry's emotions and reactions were very in-character. Looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought he was in characeter, even if slightly hysterical.



Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Date: 2004.05.08 - 01:39PM Title: Casualties of War

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Another great chapter. wELL DONE. PLEASE PLEASE Let us know that Remus will be ok Soon. I like how Hermione is starting to understand how Harry feels. I also liked the way Harry had to see Ginny before giving in to sleep

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. I was pleased with how this chapter came out myself.



Reviewer: bart Signed Date: 2004.05.08 - 08:55AM Title: Casualties of War

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Wow!, wonderful chapter, Harry finding the broken Weasley clock, was particularly poignant. :(

Author's Response: Thanks, I know, the Weasley clock killed me to do, but, I mean the Burrow is gone, the clock couldn't survive. I have plans to revive it, however!



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.05.08 - 07:01AM Title: Casualties of War

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You cant kill Remus! You cant! You just cant! Please dont! Dont! For me? I'll be good, I promise, as long as you dont kill remus. If remus died I think Harry might fall over dead on the spot (I know i would). I think this is one of the best chapters yet . More soon, Kimmy

Author's Response: Sorry Kimmy, no promises. I'm glad you liked the chapter though, it's my personal favorite.



Reviewer: Jenni Anonymous Date: 2004.05.08 - 05:45AM Title: Casualties of War

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Phew, am so glad remus is going to be orite...hopefully anyways. I hate wormtail! but the h/g!!! aaaw how cute!

Author's Response: Thanks. The fate of Remus is yet to be seen...



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.05.07 - 08:02PM Title: Casualties of War

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Aw! Well, first of all I am glad Remus is all right for now. That's good. He's Harry's last link to the Marauders. And Hermione's guilt was so like Harry's--not unfounded but misplaced. H/G........aw! I like how Ginny is Harry's ray of hope. She has always been the bright spot in his life. But let Remus live. Please? Oh, and the Tonks/Malfoy mention--nice way of reminding us they are related.

Author's Response: Thanks, yes Tonks and Malfoy are cousins. I like to think of Ginny as Harry's rock too, he so needs that. Yes, I tried to make Hermione seeing things almost from Harry's POV. Hermione loves him, but sometimes I think she just "get" him.




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