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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.10 - 12:56PM Title: Abduction

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wow! I would never have guessed that it was Malfoy's mother
I thought that there was something off about Trent but I thought it was Bellatrix Lestrange using Polyjuice Potion



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.12 - 10:46PM Title: Abduction

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Reviewer: HPpooka1127 Signed Date: 2008.03.13 - 05:09PM Title: Abduction

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When Harry and Malfoy are in the tunnel woth Narcissa and Harry was worrying about escaping instead of without a wand you say,"There was no way to stun them both at the same time and he’d never tried a stunner with a wand." I dont know if this is intentional or not I just thought you should know. I enjoy your stories very much and have read them several times. I wonder if you ever thought of writing a story of Harry's Childhood? I think it would make a very good story!



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.22 - 06:28PM Title: Abduction

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.14 - 01:14PM Title: Abduction

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 01:22PM Title: Abduction

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arggggg argggggg argggg i was glad that it wasnt lestrang cuz if it was i dont know what harry would have done!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.12 - 05:58PM Title: Abduction

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Seem Ron was right for once and Hermonie was wrong, she's going to love that.



Reviewer: swishandflick Signed Date: 2004.09.21 - 01:58PM Title: Abduction

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Ooooh!!! Now the action really begins! And a cliffhanger no less! Ingenious set of twists with Professor Trent; really ingenious, in fact! She wasn't really a villain in the way that Harry suspected she was but then she really was a villain. And a great stroke making Narcissa a metamorphagus! Of course, it stands to reason that she could be since she and Tonks are from the same family! Now, Harry still hasn't learned what he needs to know from Jonathon and he's already been lured into Voldemort's trap/ How will they ever get out of this one? Great stuff, Melinda!



Reviewer: cindale Anonymous Date: 2004.06.18 - 11:51PM Title: Abduction

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I'm glad Ginny's not there with Harry, but please don't hurt Ron!

Author's Response: Okay, no hurting Ron. But I can hurt Harry?



Reviewer: Miss Ray Anonymous Date: 2004.06.09 - 09:45PM Title: Abduction

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amazing Chapter once again. I loved the new twist, though, I hope you update quickly because you've left us hanging at the worst cliffie ever! anyways, I've got to agree with you about your comment on hermione and the third movie. I can't believe they gave her the line that ron says in the Shrieking shack...that was totally UNFAIR! sorry...this really annoyed me cause I love Ron and there wasn't enough of him in it. anyways...there was a lot of H/H insinuation in PoA...it really annoyed me. But hey...we all know who Harry will end up with in the books so I guess that it's ok. It doesn't help in the forums, though, where I'm currently debating on the topic of H/G and H/H the girl just will not take the fact that Harry and Hermione are PLATONIC friends and that Herm will end up with Ron and Harry with Gin...she's so incredibally stubbron. anyways, great job on the fic. I'm pisitively hooked on this so keep updating1

Author's Response: See, I didn't get anything more than platonic from the movie either. I thought all the sexual tension was between Ron and Hermione, which seems so obvious to me. I just thought the director, or screen writer or whatever just needed to cut back on Hemrione all together! Too much, she overshadowed Ron, Harry and even Malfoy! Anyway, glad you liked the chapter.



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.06.09 - 06:26AM Title: Abduction

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OMG! Now that I've caught up with the story, I cant belive it! It was her all along! Well, not really her i suppose but yeah! Omg! Wow! You have a way of bringing on the unexpected! Wow... That was like wow! You ahve to write more! Well, you obviosly will but uh, soon! Wow...

Author's Response: LOL Kimmy, I'm glad you enjoyed it! More coming up shortly.



Reviewer: Irish_Lass08 Anonymous Date: 2004.06.08 - 03:41PM Title: Abduction

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Amazing Chapter, once again. Yeah, my theory on PoA was that they were trying to confuse people about who's going to end up with who, with the whole Hermione thing. But we on this website know the truth! Me and my friends dressed up when we went, and I was, you guessed it, Ginny! It was great... only problem was my brother was Harry... ick! Anywho... good chapter!

Author's Response: Fun! I'm glad you enjoyed. I did like the movie, but I need to think of it as a stand alone and not related to the book. I'm glad it will be a different director next time, maybe we can get away from the Hermione the Vampire Slayer attitude and give us back the real Hermione (who would never care how her hair looked!)



Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 06:22PM Title: Abduction

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checking in again...wondering how you're doing, because I feel that the story is going very well and not at all soap opera-like (trust me I've seen plenty of soaps). I urge you to keep going. I think Bonnie was just coming into her own. She is a very young actress and I think HP was one of her first films. I think she is perfect for our Ginny. So don't lose heart. You handled yourself with class.

Author's Response: You're the best Elizabeth! Thank you, it's beena tough day and that was not the best way to start it! I wasn't phased much by Ginny in the film, she didn't have much of a role in Book 3 either. She'll be just fine when 5 roles around. Thanks for the encouragement, but I should have held my tonugue! (or fingers...)



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 04:13PM Title: Abduction

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my god..you wouldnt think so after 32 chapters but this story literally keeps geting better and better!! u LOVE IT!!! this is just..crazy...trent..but no..malfoy's mom! and ahh! poor ron..poor harry! ahh i love it i can not wait for the next update please hurry!!!

Author's Response: Oh Rach, I really needed a pick me up today and you just did it! Thanks! Next update will be soon.



Reviewer: DreamerGirl Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 03:11PM Title: Abduction

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Another cliffhanger? That is just flat mean! You really need to update...soon! Preferably sometime around now! This is so awesome! It's like reading the sixth book before it comes out! I like Hermione too but I do agree that the director liked her a little too much! Although one of favorite scenes was where she punched Malfoy - that was wonderful!

Author's Response: Sorry. And I'll give you fair warning, the next one ends on a cliffy too, but the very last one of the fic so try and bare with me! Updates will be quick, I promise. I think everyone enjoyed her punching Malfoy. The theatre broke out in applause...both times!



Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 02:16PM Title: Abduction

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What a great plot twist. I love how you have handled this. I am totally swamped at work (Mondays! Aughhh!) so I can't comment much more but I just love this story and look forward to more. Cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry about being swamped, hoped your Tuesday is better anyway! I'm glad you're still enjoying it!



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 02:50AM Title: Abduction

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I like what they did to this site... I havent been here g=for 2 weeks! And I'm SOOOOO sorry! I havent been able to read-Grounded-I swear-I've missed out on so much! 4 chapters! I still have 4 chapters to catch up on! Sorry. I'll review again when I'm done reading. Thanks for the chappies!

Author's Response: Thanks Kimmy, I'm looking forward to hearing what you think!



Reviewer: Liuxiaochun Anonymous Date: 2004.06.07 - 02:15AM Title: Abduction

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I read your entire story up to this point. I loved chapters 1 through 21 and I'm glad that in this chapter, the climax has finally arrived / begun to arrive. However, I felt that the chapters between Christmas break and the climax are a little too soap-operatic and dragging-on. Perhaps you just wanted to show that Harry did have a normal and peaceful live between major developments (e.g. discovering Ginny, facing Voldemort). So, I can't really criticise you based on my personal preferences for denser stories that progress towards a climax. As for the Prisoner of Azkaban film, I haven't watched it yet, but based on the second movie, I can guess why the director only gave Ginny one line. Bonnie Wright is a poor actress: the way she portrayed Ginny waking up in the Chamber of Secrets was absolutely awful and tepid (in the book, Ginny was essentially in tears, sobbing, shuddering, and fearing being expelled from Hogwards). I've already drawn a thick wall in my mind between Ginny and Bonnie and I hope something terrible happens to Bonnie so that the filming team chooses another actor to play Ginny. And just to let you know, I chose an alternate SIYE skin so that I won't have Bonnie Wright staring at me.

Author's Response: Well that's rather harsh to wish real harm to an actress simply because you don't like her portrayal! I think you need to work on seperating fiction from reality becuase that is an awful thing to say.



Reviewer: Sadz89 Anonymous Date: 2004.06.06 - 11:37PM Title: Abduction

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I was very upset that Ginny had only ONE MEASLY LINE! But I really love Emma Watson.....too much hand holding between her and Dan though..... Well maybe they were just showing how comfortable they were together. Anyway to your story, MAlfoy sooo evil i hate him!

Author's Response: Yes, Malfoy is definitely evil in this one. Even with the hand holding, I still thought it came off as platonic. I like Emma Watson too, but it was supposed to be a Harry Potter movie!



Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Date: 2004.06.06 - 07:56PM Title: Abduction

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Great...brilliant...love your work. I agree with PoA. Too much Hermione not enough Ginny. I am glad there were some R/Hr moments.

Author's Response: I'm glad too, I liked the R/Hr stuff. I just wish there was more R and less Hr!! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!




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