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Reviews For A Battle with Fire

Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.10 - 06:01AM Title: The Practical Test

hmm not much to report on the front lines. Just keep going the way your going and I won't stop reading your that good



Reviewer: harrys girl Anonymous Date: 2005.06.29 - 05:07PM Title: The Practical Test

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this one was deffinately better i cant w8 2 read the rest i really liked that dobby waz in it because he is a very good character



Reviewer: Dawn Anonymous Date: 2004.12.28 - 09:32PM Title: The Practical Test

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Hm... good job on bringing in the big guns to teach Harry how to hate -- I vowed never to use American slang but I am, please let me beat myself. All better -- that was a great plot device. Also utilizing Dobby and his knowledge of the room added another demention to the concern for Harry and his Dark Arts dabbling, so to speak.



Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2004.12.26 - 01:27AM Title: The Practical Test

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Well written. Good characterisation. Well described. Just one thing. I do not know which book of the HP series but it seems that to use the wand effectively, it must not be held very tightly.



Reviewer: heeniebabie Anonymous Date: 2004.12.01 - 01:07AM Title: The Practical Test

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Hey I'm feeling a bit confused, is the Dark Magic really getting to Harry? That's all I want to ask. Ok now i'm going to read the next chapter. Bibi heeniebabie

Author's Response: Yeah, it does seem to really bother him quite a bit, doesn't it. Thanks, Sir Ollivander



Reviewer: parakletos Signed Date: 2004.11.30 - 04:06PM Title: The Practical Test

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I'm enjoying the story but "sidewalks" ???

Author's Response: Sidewalks? What sidewalks? Do you mean the path in the Forbidden Forest that splits at the big rock, one going to the right near where Voldemort is hiding behind the downed tree and one going left where Harry eventually ends up on?

Author's Response: Sorry, wrong chapter. Yes, sidewalks. Those concrete walkways along the outside of the buildings in downtown England. The shoppers don't walk on the street, you know. The movie deplicted the town a lot different than in the book. Sir Ollivander



Reviewer: saugart Anonymous Date: 2004.08.31 - 04:47PM Title: The Practical Test

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This is an interesting concept. It's clear that some darker things are now happening, and that Ginny is rightly uncomfortable with Harry's studies. I am looking forward to seeing where you are taking this story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the good words. Next chaptyer is ready for my beta reader. Sir Ollivander



Reviewer: lionheartpotter Anonymous Date: 2004.08.19 - 01:35AM Title: The Practical Test

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hey i loved your story and i hope u keep going and continue . its a very good story,i love it

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm in the middle of the next chapter. It's all in my head. I need a quick quill and parchment to finish the next chapter. Sir Ollivander



Reviewer: LoSeR BuGeR Anonymous Date: 2004.06.23 - 06:01PM Title: The Practical Test

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AWWW im second...oh well...great story but i was wondering isnt it Crucio ? ok well update soon! plz plz plz!! Muahz...Dayi love your story

Author's Response: Thank ya. Thank ya very much. And you are absolutely correct, it's Crucio and I have made the proper corrections. I mis-spelled it in my custom dictionary. I accept detention from you. Sir Ollivander



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.06.23 - 02:34PM Title: The Practical Test

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i just read the first three chapters, and i think this is a great story! you're doing a fabulous job, and i can't wait for the next update. Also, i think your idea about Harry conjuring up the instructor in the Room of Requirment was very clever. Keep up the great work! im really looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I do like the instructor concept also. He has to be taught. Dark Arts is not something you can learn well on your own. I also refrained from giving the instructor a name, keeping it impersonal and detached. The next chapter will be harder to write. Sir Ollivander




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