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Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood831 Signed Date: 2004.08.18 - 01:33AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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Really wonderful. he was always there. He was just never here. That was my favorite part. Great job. Somehow I feel my revies are inadiquite compared to your writing, but oh well, on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Why thank you! I was having a rough day, but thanks to your reviews, I'm feeling better and am inspired to update! Thanks for the compliments!



Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous Date: 2004.08.01 - 04:57PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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Oh, I just love this story! When is the third chapter comming out?

Author's Response: Soon! Actually, by now it's up already, but anyway, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Ginger Snap Signed Date: 2004.07.23 - 01:13AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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*Ginger Snap is picking her jaw up off of the floor* Laura, you truly are the most brilliant author of your age. I am in awe of every piece you write. I can only hope to one day reach the first rung on the ladder that you sit atop of. Are you sure you are not a Weasley? Your grasp of the family is complete and beautiful! For me, any details JKR does not fill in WILL be filled with yours, and if I don't like hers, I'll just use yours.

Author's Response: Oh Em, what can I say? You rock my socks. You're brilliant, and whatever ladder I'm sitting on, you're right next to me, I'm sure. Thank you.



Reviewer: oldmuggle Anonymous Date: 2004.07.18 - 03:59PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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way to go! this is sounding really good. i love it when we get to see behind the scenes, especially with the Weasleys. Keep it coming

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! : ) Wow... what a creative response eh?



Reviewer: nita Anonymous Date: 2004.07.17 - 05:30PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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it's really good, i really liked it, but is this going to be a story?

Author's Response: More like a collection of short stories and anecdotes, revolving around a theme. Actually, the rest of it is on hiatus, until admin is sure that it meets submission guidelines, but I sent them an email that will (I hope) clear things up, so it should be here soon! Thank you for the review! : )



Reviewer: Calliope Signed Date: 2004.07.17 - 04:25PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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I've noticed that sometimes, some people can read a new chapter and others can't yet. I can't see the new chapter...and it upsets me so. Good work on the rest, though...::dejected::

Author's Response: I'm sorry! : ( It will show up as soon as possible, things are a bit crazy at the moment. Thank you for reviewing!



Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2004.07.17 - 01:43PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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*sits, staring at screen with mouth slightly agape.* Wow. I didn't expect this. It's.....deep. I never know quite what I'm getting at SIYE, but, wow! You MUST consider putting this at PS! We'd love to have you there! I have always wanted to read more into Ginny's relationships with her other brothers, and this insight was so good. It made me all choked up and i wanted Bill to come home and see his Ginny all grown up now, fighting off Death Eaters and going out with gits like Corner... I really enjoyed this, Thank you.

Author's Response: Wonderful review! This goes on my list of all time favorites! And I'm working on publishing it at PS as I type. Keep an eye out for it! And thanks again for the review!



Reviewer: Sherbert_Lemon Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 02:47PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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I'd love to hear more! It's really interesting and doesn't start off with obsessing over Harry, which is really refreshing. I'm tired of stories that are only have Ginny's love for Harry and not about anything about her--though sometimes you really want those fluffy ones! :-) Anyway, keep writing! More soon!

Author's Response: Aaaamen!!! I get so sick of helpless-lovesick-whiny!Ginny. Thanks for the review, as promised, I love you! lol



Reviewer: Penny Lane Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 02:07PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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Wow. This is very promising. You've really left me wanting more! I loved this part: "The problem is that it seems he decided all this very early on and has taken it for granted ever since. The fact that he was right is entirely irrelevant." I think OotP showed that the Weasleys have made assumptions about Ginny without really looking closely enough at her to see if they were even true. I like the way you expounded on that idea in this chapter. I'm also looking forward to finding out who Ginny's favorite brother is, if it's not Bill. I think I know, but it'll be fun to see if I'm right. (sorry for being so long-winded) *pulls up a chair and waits for the Charlie chapter*

Author's Response: Wow, What an awesome review! All the things you described as liking, were the very things that I tried the hardest to convey in this chapter, and I'm so glad that you got the point I was going for! The Charlie chapter should be here very soon, it's been posted, it's just waiting for approval. P.S. Don't EVER apologize for being long-winded in a review, I *love* that! : )



Reviewer: hrhobo Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 01:40AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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I do say... This has got to be one of the most incredible Ginny's comteplation on Bill fic/chapter/thing ever. EVER. Wonderfully written. And I could really imagine... feel what she felt. Just really really good.

Author's Response: Thanks you! Stay tuned for Charlie, I'm really excited about that one, it'll be appearing soon!



Reviewer: Galleonie Anonymous Date: 2004.07.13 - 11:35AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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Ohh! Very good! I always love getting a good look at Bill. *Squee* And the whole flashback scene was just too sweet! I sniffle. . .need tissue. .. . Don't tell anyone I cried. . . . ga ga

Author's Response: In a sick way, I'm glad you cried! Thank you so much for the review!



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.07.10 - 08:56PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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aww that was very cute, Bill is such a wonderful big brother. I liked the little flashback type things. I really enjoyed this your writing style, and thought it was a really great first chapter, so please hurry and update! Anxiously waiting for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, and it's good to hear that you'll be reading more, I know *I'm* certainly excited about the chapters to come!



Reviewer: Emarie Anonymous Date: 2004.07.10 - 01:49AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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First Sirius, and now Bill? Good Lord, woman. It's like all of my HP fantasies come true.

Author's Response: Hahaha, hanks Emarie! Oh grea he " "isn' working on my keyboard. his is errific, bu anyways, HANK YOU!



Reviewer: Denny Lupin Anonymous Date: 2004.07.10 - 01:37AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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Excellent as usual. I really love your style and your take on Ginny is always refreshing. That was very very sweet and I can't wait to read more. keep on rockin!

Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks for reading, and a BIG thanks for the good review!



Reviewer: Luvga Anonymous Date: 2004.07.10 - 12:20AM Title: Bill Was Always There

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I WANT A BROTHER!!!!!!! I love BIll ficcys! He seems so cool in this! I can see how close Ginny was to him. I always believed they were. Ginny in the suitcase--LMAO! She's so small! I do admire this relationship. It's like Ginny is up on a pedestal in Bill's eyes, and vice versa. I think Bill sees Ginny as perfection. I guess everyone has someone like that. I can see how she believed he didn't know her, but that was because she didn't know herself. Bill rocks! It's very bittersweet, knowing Bill adores Ginny, but perhaps not for who she is. I'll say it again....I WANT A BROTHER! Loooooooove, your TLOCKAH sister, Luvga

Author's Response: Aw, thanks Luvga! I can always count on you to give me a review! I'm glad you thought their relationship had depth, I'm so sick of stories where everything about their relationship is perfect. Anyways, wait till you read Charlie and Percy's, those should be interesting. In the meantime, you're the best!



Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.07.09 - 06:52PM Title: Bill Was Always There

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I really like this start and looking back at it with a critical eye I really don't think I would have you change anything. It was very touching the way you described Ginny and her relationship with Bill. Makes me want to have the same kind of relationship with my brother. I do hope that you continue onward with this as I really do look forward to more. Cheers.

Author's Response: Awww... d'you mean it?! Thanks, that made my day, I'm going to be posting Charlie's chapter soon, and I like that one... I'm really excited!




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