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Reviewer: ajh Anonymous Date: 2004.11.02 - 08:04AM Title: Reality
I am starting to Hate you... Now who could that be hmmmmm... So where are the other chapters that are finshed... I am hooked I have a need......
Reviewer: JakesJJ Anonymous Date: 2004.10.28 - 11:21PM Title: Reality
I ignored this story for a long time, but when I saw it on Recently Added and saw the note telling me to read it anyway, I tried it. I've only read the first chapter and I'm already hooked!
Author's Response: Yay! I have succeeded in snaring another reader! *Bwa-ha-haaaaa!* I hope you shall not be the last :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and I hope you continue to love it!
Reviewer: Fred_twin_to_George Anonymous Date: 2004.10.08 - 09:38AM Title: Reality
I LOVED THIS! I don't like reality shows but I love the way you did this one! PLEASE ADD MORE SOON!!!
Reviewer: harrypotterfan777777 Anonymous Date: 2004.10.02 - 02:23AM Title: Reality
I gotta admit i normally don't go for AU fics. Since i've seen a couple of these reality dating shows I thought i take a look. I'm so glad I did. What a riot , I love it. You do a very good job on the charcterizations, especially of Ginny. And i like the way that you write this, you do well. I'm hooked, please update soon! thanks
Reviewer: harrypotterfan777777 Anonymous Date: 2004.10.02 - 02:23AM Title: Reality
I gotta admit i normally don't go for AU fics. Since i've seen a couple of these reality dating shows I thought i take a look. I'm so glad I did. What a riot , I love it. You do a very good job on the charcterizations, especially of Ginny. And i like the way that you write this, you do well. I'm hooked, please update soon! thanks
Reviewer: Peskipiksi Signed Date: 2004.09.28 - 08:35PM Title: Reality
Hi--I'm not sure why I started reading this story, since stories like this usually aren't my cup of tea. I'm so glad I did, though! You're a great writer--in the hands of someone less capable I don't think this premise would work, but somehow you pull it off nicely. In fact, I'm so engrossed by this I went out on the internet to see if I could find the rest of the story posted elsewhere. I didn't have any luck, though, so please...I'm begging you...keep updating! (If you want, you can even email me the chapters and I'll format them for you! Heh heh.) Seriously, though, great work--I'm enjoying this a great deal!
Author's Response: Actually, this story can be found in two other places. I tried sending you an e-mail, but I'm not sure if it got to you... Just in case, you can find it under the "Flourish and Blotts" link at cosforums.com and under this penname at fanfiction.net I'm really glad you like it so much! Thanks for the formatting offer, but I think I better do it...I find mistakes when I do it, which is good because I never had a beta for this story...I don't work well with betas; they ruin my stories! lol
Reviewer: Irish_Lass08 Anonymous Date: 2004.08.26 - 12:12AM Title: Reality
Wait, so they don't know each other? This should be interesting...
Author's Response: No, they don't know each other. I don't really come right out and tell you in the story, but I think I imply it heavily. hehehe
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous Date: 2004.08.25 - 02:47PM Title: Reality
Hey! Why haven't you posted chapter 20 at ff.net yet? I'm awaiting it eagerly...
Author's Response: I didn't post chapter 20 because ff.net is being royally stupid! I got banned from uploading for a week because I broke a rule without knowing it. Idiots. So, yeah, chapter 20 will be up on the 27th instead, which is the day I was supposed to post chapter 21. That's why I'm posting here too; because I'm mad at ff.net. Thanks for reviewing, though ;)
Reviewer: Lynna E. Anonymous Date: 2004.08.25 - 02:26PM Title: Reality
Whoa...this is an interesting plot indeed and i cant wait to see how everything turns out!!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! But wait until I get to the real conflict! I haven't actually written that part yet, but I know it's going to be nerve wracking; I can't wait! lol
Reviewer: Tricia Signed Date: 2004.08.24 - 06:00PM Title: Reality
Hey, Trinka ! This is Tricia Emily on fanfiction.net. Good to see you here on Sink Into Your Eyes ! Great first chapter. Hehe, post the next one soon !
Author's Response: Hey, great to see you here too :) So, did my having to splice the first two chapters together seem strange at all? I mean, did it flow as well as it had when it was two chapters? I'm excited to see the responses I'll be getting here after I post the later chapters! SQUEE!
Reviewer: Niki Anonymous Date: 2004.08.24 - 03:03PM Title: Reality
Great idea for a story, I really enjoyed the first chapter, well done! I'll be checking for updates! (The only criticism was the paragraph layout, which everyone else has already mentioned)
Author's Response: I fixed the layout! I hadn't really thought about that when I posted it. I hadn't donned on me that it would be difficult to write, but now it's fixed. Yay me. lol And if that was your only criticism, I'm in good shape ;) I'm glad you liked it and I hope you continue to read, because the later chapters are MUCH better! lol
Reviewer: Sherbert_Lemon Anonymous Date: 2004.08.24 - 02:56PM Title: Reality
Hey, I really like this story! It's a lot of fun so far. However, i think some of your codes might not have totally worked as all the paragraphs and stuff are really squished together and sort of odd looking...:-) Great story thougth!
Author's Response: Yeah...it wan't a problem with coding, it was a problem with intelligence. I just hadn't realized that the paragraphs being squished together would be hard to read. I fixed it though :) I'm glad you like my story, and I hope you continue to read, because it gets a lot more fun further in. hehehe
Reviewer: Serpentspawn Signed Date: 2004.08.24 - 02:03PM Title: Reality
Hey Trinka, this is Harry/Ginnyfan4ever, the person who recommended posting here? I'm not sure if I was the only one who did, but I'm glad you took 'my' advice. I agree, you should check out the spacing. Press the enter button three times between each paragraph and it should be decendly spaced. Yes, three. Anyway, it's good to see you on SIYE. Update soon...preferably before the 27th *grins evilly*
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm pretty sure it was at your suggestion that I came here...no one else had suggested it :) This is a groovy site, so I'll definitely stick around...now I just wish I had more H/G stories... hehehe
Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.08.24 - 01:10PM Title: Reality
I saw this over on FF.net and I didn't read it, but now I am glad because I think it will be truly funny. I would recommend that you check out the spacing for the paragraphs, but it all runs together and is a bit difficult to read. Cheers.
Author's Response: Spacing is all taken care of, thank you for the suggestion :) and I'm so glad that you did decide to read this. The later chapters are much more funny, you'll see. I think my favorite at this time are chapters 14 and 15 (which will be 13 and 14 here...that is really going to throw me off...) Anywha, thank you for reviewing.
