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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.11 - 02:48PM Title: Broken Wings

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the thought of Dudley with a girl is strange - I don't know whether to lsugh or cringe
great chapter:)



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.14 - 06:59AM Title: Broken Wings

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.23 - 12:01AM Title: Broken Wings

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.14 - 03:37PM Title: Broken Wings

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 05:05PM Title: Broken Wings

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harry wasnt coorperating with you? haaa ya that sounds like harry! good chapter made me laugh!



Reviewer: nevascared Signed Date: 2006.06.06 - 01:37PM Title: Broken Wings

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i think u should let him and gin get carried away sometimes. theyre teenagers for christ sake. let them have some fun



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.13 - 08:19PM Title: Broken Wings

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I'm not sure how I feel about Dudley being all chummy with Harry all of the sudden. Ron is getting on my nerves. He's always crying about Harry getting all the attention but he does nothing to help his own situation. If he wasn't so lazy and study he might pass every now and them. Also with the War against Voldemort Ron should stop whining and start helping to find a way to stop him. I swear I just want Harry or someone to hex him.



Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2005.08.01 - 04:02AM Title: Broken Wings

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great chapter mel.



Reviewer: Jules Anonymous Date: 2005.06.16 - 04:15PM Title: Broken Wings

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Heated that one up! Makes for good reading for us adults, lol. And not too risque for younger eyes. Good work!



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.12.08 - 07:49AM Title: Broken Wings

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Oh wow, I hadent noticed you had started the sequal, How exciting! I reckon its really great so far and its ok if Ginny and Harry got carried away, their seventeen! Well, not reeeeallly, but you know what I mean, lol! Wow, Im still not over how much time and descruption and emothion and thought you put into your fics. Ive tried writting some but like there not the same... I cant put emotion and feeling into mine. And a fic aint no fun with no feeling in it, so seriously, your really talented, more talented then others anyway, lol! Anyhows, I like how Dudleys starting to get closer to Harry, its a good idea, a bit different, but thats what makes it cool. More soon!



Reviewer: fire red Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 09:23PM Title: Broken Wings

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Sorry, I meant Wednesday but you probably know that already. Still Can't waith for the next chapter.



Reviewer: fire red Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 09:21PM Title: Broken Wings

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Hi, Melinda. I read this Tuesday but I didn't get a chance to review. So, I think that was an interesting twist on things when you had Harry and Dudley on friendly terms, but I guess that it remaining that way indefinately was a little far out. Still, I enjoyed what you did with those two. Glad to see that everything remains well with Harry and Ginny. I enjoyed the talk with Ron even though it wasn't a very open talk, I just love that they DID talk. Dongrats o finishing another chapter. Can't wait until everything with Voldemort starts firing up. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Have a good vacation.



Reviewer: AmethystPhoenix Signed Date: 2004.12.03 - 07:47PM Title: Broken Wings

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Excellent chapter! Don't worry, I don't particularly mind that Harry was pressuring you into writing that scene. :D The poor thing needs it. And Dudley... well, that's an interesting development. We've got two sides... one brother likes it, the other is basically telling Dudley, "touch her and die". Percy... ::sigh:: ~AP



Reviewer: HarryPassionFan Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 04:44PM Title: Broken Wings

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Wonderful job Melinda, I really loved the H/G scenes. Boy do I love those twins I sure hope Percy gets his act together!!! Cannot wait for the next chapter ~Ana



Reviewer: ll4ever Anonymous Date: 2004.12.03 - 03:58AM Title: Broken Wings

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Oh, fantastic chapter. You are a really gifted writer!!! Nice and long chapters to!! Thank you so much for writing and update soon!



Reviewer: ice princess Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 11:19PM Title: Broken Wings

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Another great chapter, as always. It's good to see Ron starting to enjoy life a little again. And I definitely liked the scene between Harry and Ginny. I think things like that happen once in a while, and they didn't go TOO far, so it's all good. Have a good trip and I'll look forward to your next update!



Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 02:32PM Title: Broken Wings

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LOVING IT!! This was an awesome chapter. I love watching Harry hang around his friends, especially Ginny, I liked those scenes with HG action, they are very realistic. Hormones are very powerful and Harry, now more than ever, needs some sort of distraction. It seems perfectly normal, and enjoyable (lol), that he would resort to this. I hope to see more HG action and of course, this story rocks. Have fun in Disney!



Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 01:20PM Title: Broken Wings

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Sorry, I do type at 75 words a minute and a review I was sending you got sent somehow. As I was saying, before technology rudely interrupted, Harry is an enigma... indeed, "a freak of nature." Christians say that "God only gives you the cross you can bear." Well, now.. from books 1 - 5, it is clear that there is something so strong, so powerful, out of this world that is keeping this young boy sane. Your contribution to the fanfic world of Harry Potter just confirms how extraordinary this character is. It also helps that you are such a brilliant writer with a very creative imagination... but then again, being a mother of 3, you also have your feet on the ground and your head properly screwed. It shows in your writing style. Well done.



Reviewer: Shannon Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 09:51AM Title: Broken Wings

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This story is coming along nicely. I am enjoying Harry's character development. Harry feels like a real person in your stories. I think that you have managed to hang on to an inate understanding of the mind of a teenager. I pity your children when they are older! I agree with some of the reviewers that Harry's childhood experiences at the Dursley's are not supported by canon, but I don't think they are *unsupported* by canon. It just isn't really discussed. JKR hasn't focused on Harry's childhood. I don't think it will be important in the development of the canon story. So, it's nice to read it here, because I don't think we will see anything to address it from JKR. That being said, I do think you are focusing on the past a little too much. Does this have something to do with the later plot? If not, let's move on. Let's get Harry away from the Dursleys next chapter too. JKR has never spent more than a few chapters there. They aren't the real story. Much as we all enjoy maligning them, let's get the real plot moving.



Reviewer: Dolenbyd Anonymous Date: 2004.12.02 - 08:28AM Title: Broken Wings

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well. I'm glad Harry qand Ginny had a little minor groping session. They BOTH deserve it I think. Your usual well written chapter, I'm looking forward to where this is going.




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