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Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2020.12.31 - 06:30PM Title: End of an Era

The Durselys deaths were bound to come, and I can't say I'm disappointed, well, maybe Dudley, he actually started too mature.

But, why, why, why did you do it in front of Harry? I mean, he hasn't even gotten over Mr. Talyor yet! smh

Anyways, great writing as usual!



Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2020.12.31 - 06:30PM Title: End of an Era

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The Durselys deaths were bound to come, and I can't say I'm disappointed, well, maybe Dudley, he actually started too mature.

But, why, why, why did you do it in front of Harry? I mean, he hasn't even gotten over Mr. Talyor yet! smh

Anyways, great writing as usual!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.11 - 03:15PM Title: End of an Era

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I'm a little sorry about Dudley and Petunia but I've always hated Vernon
hope Dumbledore doesn't keep Harry dangling anymore



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.23 - 12:36AM Title: End of an Era

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.14 - 04:25PM Title: End of an Era

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 06:03PM Title: End of an Era

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i cant stand the either but i was...well coming to like dudley at least and this cant be good for harry he was just doing so well and you just made it worse for him! this sucks!



Reviewer: Kevin Signed Date: 2006.09.21 - 09:14PM Title: End of an Era

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darn! you killed dudley! i think there was some potential there, it was really obvious that you were hinting it! how could you! lol oh well



Reviewer: jbrick0831 Anonymous Date: 2006.07.28 - 04:11PM Title: End of an Era

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Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.13 - 08:30PM Title: End of an Era

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oh boy this was a long chapter but never a dull moment. First Dudley he should maturity after fifteen years it was bound to happen. Vernon however only showed he has no heart and no soul he deserved a slow PAINFUL ending but not in front of Harry doesn't the boy have enough nightmares. It's times like that I think Harry should have used majic but I understand he didn't have the strenght to do so. Bella I'll sayit again must DIE DIE DIE DIE soon. As sad as this chapter was I'm glad Harry is out of that house.



Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2005.08.01 - 04:27AM Title: End of an Era

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A fitting end to the dursleys. Killed by the one thing they feared the most. Excellent end to some bad bad people. thanks



Reviewer: charles Anonymous Date: 2005.05.06 - 08:17PM Title: End of an Era

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i realy like the fic i just wish harry would of stood up for him self. In OotP when mr,dursly grabs harry a jolt of electricty hits him and he lets go. but no matter they're dead now

Author's Response: Well, I think we all have our own interpretation of things. OotP Harry was not typical - he lashed out at a lot of things. As I see it, Harry stands up for a lot of things and a lot of people, but when it comes to the Dursleys - he's the one who needs the protection.



Reviewer: Goose Anonymous Date: 2005.04.27 - 01:30PM Title: End of an Era

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Umm, a couple of problems here, I know you can't change it now, but the first one is that Dumbledore makes it very clear that the protection is in the place, and he cannot be hurt while he is at the Dursley's, the blood protection offers him nothing when he is away. Second, you said the members of the order were constantly around and watching, and had doubled their guard, so they would have been inside the house when they heard the shouting, not to mention when they saw Harry leave it.

Author's Response: No, he said Harry can't be hurt as long as he calls the Dursleys house his home. Vernon kicked him out. Also, the attack happened outside in the yard, not within the house so it was entirely possible. No matter how vigilent the protection, there is always the chance of mistakes. That's how tragedies happen.



Reviewer: wichitatwister Anonymous Date: 2004.12.20 - 11:13AM Title: End of an Era

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Well, good riddance on Vernon and Spitunia the viperess. Dudders I'm gonna miss, a little. Crikey! You're intending to knock off MORE of the Order? Once you let Harry finally kack old Moldiebritches why don't you send Harry and Ginny to Disney World? A well told tale! Come ON Friday!!!!

Author's Response: Spitunia, ha ha, I LOVE it. Harry and Ginny in Disney, huh? Sounds like a oneshot...



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2004.12.19 - 11:40PM Title: End of an Era

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Oh. Omg.. wow, that was like, OMG, Poor Harry and well, wow... I almost cried. Its so sad! Why did he have to 'see' them die?! Especially Dudley omg.. I have to kno what happens, I am seriously gonna die, thats so sad... and after all thats happened in his life and omg, I am in like once again absolute shock, I -wow... omg... *Sniffle*

Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad I didn't see this review until after I posted the new chapter or I'd be so stressed out. Glad I could stir some emotions, however ;)



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.12.19 - 03:40PM Title: End of an Era

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Sorry, I posted it on the first chapter instead of the fifth, so here it is. LoL. Whoops. ~*~*~**~~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *~ OMG Melinda! What madness! Poor Harry! I want to sob for him! I mean awwww! Harry's going to take the Dursley's deaths so badly! Especially since Aunt Petunia blamed Harry on them before she died! Aw that was so sad, Dudley's death! Harry trying to run and save him, and then having to watch it knowing that his body wouldn't respond! Awww! Poor Dudders, but *shh* you'll be the only one to ever see me write that, ever! LoL. Aw, I love Harry in this story, he soo needs to be cuddled, I'm so glad that him and Ginny are together already so that he has her. I mean imagine if they broke up for some reason, it would kill Harry, not to mention GInny. But Ginny's to strong to ever let Harry push her away which is brilliant! Yay! Poor Harry, I feel like you should name this story Harry Potter and the Series of Unfortunate Events, because everything bad just keeps happening to him over and over again. He lost more blood, more magical reserves. Ah poor soul. AH I HATE VERNON! I'm soo thrilled that you killed him! I mean I can't believe that he punched Harry in the face! I mean me and my sister punch each other all the time, but it the face?! That's madness that is. I'm glad Harry took it standing up though, I liked his frame of mind, a very good one it was indeed! Stand up to those brutes! LoL. Aw, that was so sad, I think the saddest line in this chapter was when Harry was like "I'm sorry Mum," because Aunt Petunia died. Aw, that was sad. Overall, I just want to say that you sure know how to pull on a girl's heartstrings! LoL, Brilliant job as always! Brilliant! I LOVED it! Fantastic!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL about poor Dudley. I did consider keeping him, it just didn't work out that way. More thoughts from Harry on his mum's connection to Aunt Petunia next chapter.



Reviewer: Nicon Anonymous Date: 2004.12.19 - 11:52AM Title: End of an Era

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Once again, you never cease to intruige me with you story. Poor Harry, though. And as for the Dursleys, hey... it's like what was said in "Chamber of Secrets" Dumbledore said to GIlderoy, "Impaled upon your own sword." Looks like the Dursleys finally got it in the end. As far as the story in general, you have a knack for keeping your readers captivated.... wating and wanting for the next chapter, nice one! I shall continue with the waiting as well. Hope Harry will find some solice in his stays at Grimmauld Place, and to the place he's never been before. Keep up the good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Harry's in need of some R & R, but a few things need to happen first.



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.12.19 - 11:15AM Title: End of an Era

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oh man...what an intense chapter!! really really good!! poor harry. and i liked the Ron's point of view thing for a bit in there. well i dont really know what tosay..it was excellent, i really loved it, and i cant wait for the next chapter! so i guess, good luck!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed. I always enjoy Ron.



Reviewer: fire red Anonymous Date: 2004.12.18 - 10:15PM Title: End of an Era

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Oh my gosh. This chapter was so good. It just makes me want to rush you for the next one. It was also a sad chapter. The Dursley's were mean to him, especially at the end of the chapter, but they didin't deserve to die-not like that anyway. But poor Harry. I really am wondering how he is going to cope with this. At least he has his family there for him. When I said I was going to rush you for the next chapter, I was serious. Hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry. I can't wait. I might burst with anticipation. Can you imagine me splattered all over the computer? I can and would not be a pretty sight. UPDATE SOON. :-)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author 's Response: LOL, I'm trying to keep to a once a week schedule, and I'm pretty sure I'll make this one. I don't want to say definite and jinz myself! After Christmas, you guys all have to hound me to start writing again, because so far, I'm working on my backlog and have done nothing new since returning from Disney. Gulp. It's starting to worry me.



Reviewer: Longhorn Anonymous Date: 2004.12.18 - 08:25PM Title: End of an Era

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I was so excited when I saw that you had posted another chapter!! And it just keeps getting better! I have to admit that I'm not sorry that you killed off the Dursley's. Got what they deserved if you ask me! Thanks for all of your effort. I have really enjoyed this story and can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Nah, no one seems particularly upset about the Dursleys, although I'm surprised by how many people accepted Dudley's turnabout. It'll be hard on Harry, however.



Reviewer: la schtroumpfette Anonymous Date: 2004.12.18 - 06:10PM Title: End of an Era

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Thank you for your answer, I'm so impatient to read your next chapter, and discover where harry will be send... And, when I read the others reviews, I read one who said a very interestinf thing : I think he may be right when he (or she) say that harry may want to push everybody away. The person who love him have already suffer from this war (I think of sirius, Remus, and of course Ron), and even the person who hated him are dead... All kind of relation with him seems "damned" or "cursed" (stangely, it makes me think of your title... strange... very strange...). I look forward to read your next chapter and see how harry will react to all the things happening to him. I hope you will do what you promised (even if your fingers were crossed) and publish your next chapter on Thursday. If not, I may sernd you a very bad review, but never mind, it would be just temporary anger, so forgive me, and don't take it too hard... I know it's difficult to be one time... Especialy when you have children to look after (I don't know what it is right know, I'm only seventeen, but I can guess...) Excuse me for my bad english writting, as I said to you one day, I'm just a french girl who love english and try to pratice and speak it.... I LOVE YOUR STORY

Author's Response: Well, I've got some edits back from my beta, now I've just got to find the time to get to them. So, the next chapter is in progress. You won't have to wait too long to see harry's reaction, so no bad reviews please! They stress me out!




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