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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.12 - 12:49PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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funny chapter
trust Harry to go into the sea without knowing how to swim!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 08:56PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.23 - 11:05PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.14 - 05:31PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 07:59PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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poor harry i know how bad sunburns are i have one now and its really bad! and the bad thing is that once its gone my skin wont be TAN! argg! but anyway loved this chapter!



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 03:25AM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Being in med school, and seeing the results of a drunken ANYTHING, I guess you could syay that fic or not, I'm not too amused. In the states they have MADD (I suppose that wouldn't work on a broom).

An Aisde, leading nowhere: You mentioned Hedwig...and the very first story I ever read, and still go back to on occasion, even though it has been renamed, is a very short one shot called Little Wizard Chick. It was named Hedwig's Wizard Chick when I first read it. If anyone loves the bond between Harry and Hedwig, you should read it. It's posted in fanfic.net. I guarantee you a lump in your throat.

Darian



Reviewer: jbrick0831 Anonymous Date: 2006.07.28 - 05:53PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.13 - 11:29PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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I have to mention that I like your comedic style. You always put just enough humor that makes reading your stories so enjoyable. Keep up the great work.



Reviewer: Bear Anonymous Date: 2005.07.09 - 07:24PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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About your disclaimer: You say that you're just playing with Jk's character's, when really your playing with her characters AND her previous plots, stories ect. So you should say that you are playing with her characters and previous ideas. If you weren't using her ideas from her other stories you wouldn't be able tomention some of the things they did. Sorry, I sound like a prat, but hey, I just thought i'd mention it. other than that, Power of Emotion and Curse of the Damned are brilliant! keep writting, you're great at it. You write sorta like JK which is a huge compliment! Don't stop writting, I can't wait to read another of your fanfics, which means there better be another! Smiles :) :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed them.



Reviewer: Jules Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 08:45PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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I like the beach idea....I'm sure Harry never had a proper vacation in his life anyway. He's well deserving! ^^ I liked the bit about Sirius having stayed there as well, a nice thought!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this as you go thorugh. I liked the beach idea, myself. Harry needed it.



Reviewer: Nicon Anonymous Date: 2005.01.14 - 12:08AM Title: A Much Needed Break

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I'm sorry I haven't posted sooner... being in a band has its disadvantages... Anyways, I thought this break was exactly what Harry needs... a little R & R does wonders, doesn't it? Thanks for clarifying the Tonks/Remus, Tonks/Charlie question I was wondering... it's good to be on the same page as everyone else now! I can't wait to read about another Drunk Harry... I remember the one in PoE and I thought it was rather humorous! So, like all of your readers... you have so many now! I'm going to wait in anticipation for the next chapter to be posted! Nice way to give Harry a bit of rest!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you had the chance to catch up. I'm delighted by the number of people who seem to be enjoying this story. It's very encouraging! Drunk!Harry coming right up...



Reviewer: heckle Anonymous Date: 2005.01.10 - 06:53PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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o yea, jeckle is really upset now from the tonks/charlie part i'm her puppet 4 now :)

Author's Response: Why? So far, teh only thing said was that they had a relationship at Hogwarts years ago. Charlie has been in Romania for six years.



Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Date: 2005.01.09 - 06:28PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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I love this so much! Thanks for giving Harry a break! Hopefully he and GInny will get some alone time on vacation! Keep it coming and it's so awesome!

Author's Response: He and Ginny definitely get some alone time ;) The beach kind of demands it.



Reviewer: heckle Anonymous Date: 2005.01.09 - 05:54PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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oo! a Hangover!Harry! :) the one in the power of emotion was really good :)

Author's Response: Giggle. I liked him, too. Hope you enjoy.



Reviewer: Kimmy Anonymous Date: 2005.01.08 - 08:20PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Yea, Drink scenne! Hehe, should be fun, cant wait! But Poor Harry, It must be so akward and embarrasing not knowing stuff, luike the undertow and sunburning and stuff.. lol. I like how Sirius stayed there, it makes it all so much better for him! I hope he gets out of his mood and enjoys! More soon!

Author's Response: I love the image I have of Sirius with a sun tan, lol. As for Harry, he is enjoying himself, but where would he have ever learned all these things that the others take for granted? Can you see the Dursleys ever taking him for a day at the beach?



Reviewer: jnhink Signed Date: 2005.01.08 - 08:00PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Hope Harry gets to take the boat out. Keeep it up, good read.

Author's Response: Next chapter should be up on Friday.



Reviewer: crazed Anonymous Date: 2005.01.08 - 07:28PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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I know how evryone says they love drunk harry. But knowone loves him more than me!!!!!! i have a felling that harry is going to say something that the brothers wont exatly approve of:) [guess i should a give a pat on the back to myself] and after you answered someones review i am sure it will be quite fun to read harry say '' hey ginny lets go snog right now cause you look really hot.'' ha ha ha ha but anyways.. i love the rest of the chapters and how harry gets to enjoy the place sirius did . i always loved sirius. hopefully by the end of there vacation he will have learned how to swim and drive that speed boat. defentily agree that harry needed this and to get away from it all. as one person pointed out im looking froward to the training but i also want to see some midnight beach strools. your right nothing like the beach fro romance eh? so i want you to know that i appreciate your chapters and that i ooked forward to reading the rest and defenitly next weeks one. that one proves to be hilarious. glad hedwig is all right and i love the male thoughts as well as teasing. crazed

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying. Sirius was one of my favorites, too. I think HBP will be hard to read without him, and I'm so anxious to see how JKR is going to make him behave. Probably not nearly as traumatized as I did, but, ah well. I was traumatized, lol.



Reviewer: AmethystPhoenix Signed Date: 2005.01.08 - 05:15PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Great job! Yay, they've got a break for at least two chapters... Anyway, I love the character of Aberforth... sort of like a Dumbledore who isn't the Headmaster of a school. I liked how they all were carefree for a bit, and how Ron was berating Hermione for coming out in a bathing suit. Fred and George were great, too. And I wonder how they're all going to teach Harry to swim... ~AP

Author's Response: Actually, that's going to be Ginny's job. Glad you liked the twins, I love the twins.



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2005.01.08 - 04:31PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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oh no no no! more!! please! i loved it! and i am DEFINATELY looking forward to the next chapter, i love drunk harry. haha good job and good luck!

Author's Response: Thanks, Rach. Like I said, most people seemed to enjoy him, and by far he was the biggest request, so....



Reviewer: HarryPassionFan Anonymous Date: 2005.01.07 - 04:00PM Title: A Much Needed Break

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Great job Melinda, Oh boy even when Harry is on vacation he has a near death experience. I sure hope by the end of the vacation Harry will learn how to swim, but I'm sure that training will have to come first. LOL at Harry not knowing the Sun Screen Charm. It is good for the Weasley brothers to tease Harry. Harry has his typical male moments that I love. Can't wait to see how Harry celebrates his big 17th birthday, and I cannot wait to see the Hogwarts letters.

Author's Response: Ginny will ensure that Harry learns to swim...and use the proper SunBlock Charm, lol.




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