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Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2021.01.11 - 04:54PM Title: Summons

All right, I only kinda glossed over the last few chapter titles, so I'm not sure where this review really goes, but Ima put it here.
First things first, as always this is a phenomenal story, and I've been thinking about this when I've been dragged from my computer, I actually wish this was canon, instead of what happened in HBP, more fluff, and overall, a better story. That feels weird to say or review, at least.

Secondly, Snape's failure? Oooh, that was needed. I also liked how there was a subtle change in Snape's attitude towards Harry, more respect there, perhaps? It was overdue.

Thirdly, I feel like a fool for not realizing that Ron was going to utter a prophecy when they were talking to the Ministry official and he brought up Ron's remarkably accurate guess on...I forgot his name... change in Quidditch positions, and asked if he were a Seer, it was stupid I didn't guess it, it was foreshadowing, authors only put odd references or questions or what have you that are weird and out-of-the-blue when there trying to tell readers something. Smh. But good foreshadowing wether way. Another prophecy to complete! (False enthusiasm)

Fourthly, Dumbledore's/Harry's heart-to-heart? I may or may not have cried...it was beautiful *sniff*
Also, I feel like the "Leaker of Info" is Luna, whether she's under the Imperious Curse, or something else IDK, but we'll see.
That or you're trying to distract readers from otherwise obvious signals that it's something else.
Lovely as always!



Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2021.01.11 - 04:53PM Title: Summons

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All right, I only kinda glossed over the last few chapter titles, so I'm not sure where this review really goes, but Ima put it here.
First things first, as always this is a phenomenal story, and I've been thinking about this when I've been dragged from my computer, I actually wish this was canon, instead of what happened in HBP, more fluff, and overall, a better story. That feels weird to say or review, at least.

Secondly, Snape's failure? Oooh, that was needed. I also liked how there was a subtle change in Snape's attitude towards Harry, more respect there, perhaps? It was overdue.

Thirdly, I feel like a fool for not realizing that Ron was going to utter a prophecy when they were talking to the Ministry official and he brought up Ron's remarkably accurate guess on...I forgot his name... change in Quidditch positions, and asked if he were a Seer, it was stupid I didn't guess it, it was foreshadowing, authors only put odd references or questions or what have you that are weird and out-of-the-blue when there trying to tell readers something. Smh. But good foreshadowing wether way. Another prophecy to complete! (False enthusiasm)

Also, I feel like the "Leaker of Info" is Luna, whether she's under the Imperious Curse, or something else IDK, but we'll see.
That or you're trying to distract readers from otherwise obvious signals that it's something else.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.16 - 02:19PM Title: Summons

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haha, Dumbledore has duped the ministry yet again
great work!



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.21 - 08:43AM Title: Summons

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.25 - 06:17PM Title: Summons

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.16 - 02:47AM Title: Summons

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 02:55PM Title: Summons

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haaa that gala is on my birthday cool! good chapter



Reviewer: Liberi_Fatali Anonymous Date: 2005.10.22 - 07:36PM Title: Summons

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Lol! The ending was hilarious. I hope Dumbledore kicks some arse!



Reviewer: Jules Anonymous Date: 2005.06.29 - 01:46PM Title: Summons

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You're certainly gifted Melinda. I liked this chapter very much. I like that Ron and Hermione are on good terms again too. Harry will need that!



Reviewer: mad4sirius Anonymous Date: 2005.05.24 - 03:36PM Title: Summons

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What an emotional chapter. I am continuously impressed with your natural ability to write what JK Rowling started. You are so talented. I really loved Harry and Dumbledore's conversation while they were playing chess. So touching. Also I really enjoyed Harry getting some much deserved answers to questions that had been bugging him from day 1. Wonderful job! 10!

Author's Response: Thanks, I really enjoyed doing that scene.



Reviewer: rabastan 12 Anonymous Date: 2005.05.24 - 12:30PM Title: Summons

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once again i have to say this is a great story. how many chapters will there be in this fanfic

Author's Response: Thanks. There will be 33 in total.



Reviewer: md Anonymous Date: 2005.05.23 - 01:38AM Title: Summons

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Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: lisa770617 Anonymous Date: 2005.05.21 - 07:03AM Title: Summons

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bring it on!



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.05.11 - 04:20PM Title: Summons

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Wow. I sure can't wait until you update on Friday. I like the scene between Harry and Dumbledore. Why do I have a feeling that you are going to make LV or someone show up on Feb. 18th and kill Dumbledore? Also I loved how you do the sharing dreams with Ron and Harry (loved the nightmare scene in the CoS). As for the leaking in the Order as another review mentioned before (forgot they're name) that one of Harry's friends could be placed under the Imperius Curse....I kind-of agree with that. Also I loved how you protrayed Percy and Fudge they're annoying. Are you sure you aren't J.K. Rowling in disguse? Keep up the very good work. LuckyHP P.S. Something to read if your bored (on this site) Fairy Tales by Professor Scroll (one of my favorites)

Author's Response: Thanks! I am reading Professor Scroll's wonderful Faery Tails, and I love it. Even though I didn't do a H/G bond thing, I love those kind of stories.



Reviewer: MissCorker Signed Date: 2005.05.10 - 07:24PM Title: Summons

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Yahoo! Give 'em **** Harry! (I'd use the actual word, but I'm a good little Mormon girl) I hope he puts those paper-pushing, self-absorbed, money-grubbing, back-stabbing, power-hungry jerks right out of their jobs. And I love this story. And I think I used my quota of hyphens for one day. Thanks for this wonderful story, ~Misscorker

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! The Ministry Awards Ceremony is in the next chapter. Hold on to you hats...



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2005.05.09 - 06:47PM Title: Summons

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just caught up on the last...oh probably four chapters..great stuff!!! i love this story, its coming along so amazingly! i can't wait for Feb 18th!

Author's Response: Thanks, Rach. I'm glad you're enjoyng it.



Reviewer: buckbeakbabie Anonymous Date: 2005.05.08 - 01:04PM Title: Summons

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Oh, delicious. :) Revenge shall be sweet. I was in tears reading the scene between Harry and Dumbledore. beautiful. And Ron's prophesy was enloghtening,,, Last chapter I had to run right after I read it and come back to review, and forgot to mention it! whoops! The spy... who can it be? As usual, you are a genius... Til next week! 'Beaky

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked the scene between Harry and Dumbledore.



Reviewer: charles Anonymous Date: 2005.05.08 - 01:01AM Title: Summons

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i cant wait for the next chapter looking forword to the 18th when you were talking about the servant i assumed you were talking about wormtail but then i remember you had mooney kill him. sillly me keep up the good work

Author's Response: You're all caught up! Updates come out each Friday.



Reviewer: annabananna Signed Date: 2005.05.07 - 09:21PM Title: Summons

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it gets better every time, i cant wait to see what harry and dumbledore do at the press conference

Author's Response: That will take place next chapter.



Reviewer: Shannon Anonymous Date: 2005.05.07 - 08:53AM Title: Summons

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I loved the scene with Dumbledore. I didn't even realize how much I'd really, really been wanting to read a scene like that until now. Harry's realization that Dumbledore will die and there is nothing he can do about it was so poignant. The fact that it made him feel more helpless than anything was refreshingly normal. Hopefully that will help him realize that not everything is up to him to fix. I did think the scene ended abruptly with Harry just rushing out. I think that the love Harry gets from Ginny is definitely the most important part of his support structure. I'm sorry to see that Ginny doesn't see that right now, but I can also understand. It's so easy for her to love him -- how can that really be all he needs? I do agree that you should make sure that it's not just physical love that he gets from her. Don't want to turn her into a snog-toy (to paraphrase an earlier review)! I was very, very intrigued by the hint (perhaps?) that you dropped. Unregistered Animagi?? Perhaps there is no betrayer? Perhaps there's just a fly on the wall?? Oooh, I wish Hermione had heard that conversation!

Author's Response: Thanks, Shannon. I'm glad you enjoyed. I really don't think that's how Ginny feels, she's smarter than that, and she know Harry's history.




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