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Reviewer: Loony_Lovegood_216 Signed Date: 2021.01.11 - 06:47PM Title: Survivors

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Harry is such a freaking amazing person. He's really changed. Too bad this isn't 100% canon And this is a freaking amazing story!

Ugh. And now the end is coming up soon. *sniff*

Also, now that both HBP and DH can we just applaud how much of this story is close to canon? Neville-Hannah Ron-Hermione Harry-Ginny the choice of "Going on"

It's all a little different but the same.

...And better, you didn't kill Fred, and almost kill George with that loss.


Author's Response: Thank you SO very much for all the lovely reviews. It's so awesome to hear from people experiencing old stories for the first time. I really got a thrill every time I saw your name on the review panel.



Reviewer: jerryfs2 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 09:51PM Title: Survivors

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.08.18 - 02:33PM Title: Survivors

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definatly a tissue chapter - I had a job with it
sweet parts with Harry's parents and Sirius



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.07.21 - 03:28PM Title: Survivors

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.28 - 12:55PM Title: Survivors

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.16 - 04:25AM Title: Survivors

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Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 11:00PM Title: Survivors

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well now who's being the prat! GINNY get ur act together! arggg



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.19 - 12:01AM Title: Survivors

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I always love when Harry can talk to his parents. He missed so much in life. Nice touch about Rita, Ginny punching her was awesome. I'm glad Harry choose to live rather than give up.



Reviewer: sandy Anonymous Date: 2005.07.04 - 09:28PM Title: Survivors

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The chapter was sooooo good and so very human. Thanks for sharing Sandy



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.06.29 - 06:59PM Title: Survivors

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Keep up the good work!



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 06:18PM Title: Survivors

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aww how sad! I love it. can't wait for more, good luck!!



Reviewer: Ginny_Potter_89 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.21 - 02:10AM Title: Survivors

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*can breathe now* So happy Ron's not dead. *go Hermione!* I cried when Harry met Sirius, Lily and James. That was so cool! Sad, bittersweet when he left, obviously, but really, really cool. I don't think anyone vould have written it better. Once again, you leave me speechless, melindaleo. Awesome, fantastic, super job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. I'm working on an early post for this week.



Reviewer: kissmegrint Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 04:25PM Title: Survivors

Oops, I forgot to ask my question! Will we ever find out why Harry was allowed to choose his fate? I hope it's not because he's The-Boy-Who-Lived (-Again), but a more deep, meaningful reason. lol. Sorry, I'm not too big for cliches in fanfics. Was it because he was dying but he was having such a troubled life that the ___ (whoever owns the Other World in HP...is it God?) decided to let him choose? Or is there no real reason? Sorry..I feel like Curious George here. Oh, and to answer your question, I wasn't able to access a computer so I read them all in one sitting, cliffies and all. I was so grateful I didn't have to wait a week...I doubt I would've survived. ;)

Author's Response: Why was Harry allowed to chose? Hmm. Basically, it's because the author hates the fact that the only memories Harry has of his parents are bad ones. Through the Dementors and Snape's Pensieve, he's only got to see the tragic and the bad, and I simply couldn't have that. He basically just saved the world, he needed to be rewarded for that, and this is what he needed. Does that work for you?



Reviewer: Trey Anonymous Date: 2005.06.19 - 07:31PM Title: Survivors

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Just when I thought you had finished and couldn't possibly make a chapter near as powerful as the last one, you come out with this tear jerker! It's really not fair to do that to someone! Emotions went crazy during that chapter. Most stories I've read end right after the battle but somehow you have found a way to not let us off easy. Extremely tallented writer, I can't even begin to tell you how proud I am of you and this story, I know you have probably been told 100 times before but you should really try and publish a book, you have to much talent not to. Thanks again and I look forward to the next two chapters! Trey Stuart

Author's Response: Thanks. Ahh, from your mouth to some publisher's somewhere ears. Sigh, I hope so. I'm glad you've enjoyed the stories. I always want more wrap up at the end of a canon story, so I've tried to do that in both of them, plus leaving me some fodder if I ever want to continue ;)



Reviewer: Heather Anonymous Date: 2005.06.19 - 06:52PM Title: Survivors

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I cried. A lot. Yet I always cry in your story. lol And I don't know why. :D It's awesome

Author's Response: Thanks! It thrills me still when people say that.



Reviewer: Shelby Anonymous Date: 2005.06.19 - 05:13PM Title: Survivors

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I just wanted to review all of what you've posted so far and say...I'm amazed. I was sooooo relieved that Charlie died rather than one of the twins (I know that's awful, but there it is). I also wanted to acknowledge that I too have always believed that Dumbledore is going to have to die before Harry can defeat Voldemort and I truly respect you for being able to write it. I was highly amused by your depiction of Aberforth...not to mention extremely surprised and refreshed! I hope that JKR has something planned for ol' Abe that can surpass what you've done. I have found these two stories (Power of Emotion & Curse of the Damned) to be inspiring really, and I can't wait to read the last two chapters. Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked Abe, I've grown rather fond of him. In re-reading OotP I think he might be more crotchety than I've made him, but we'll see. I'm glad you've enjoyed the stories.



Reviewer: Shannon Anonymous Date: 2005.06.19 - 03:50PM Title: Survivors

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You're determined to make me cry, huh? He cries himself to sleep!! That was so sad. I found the concept of Harry choosing between life and death a little difficult, though I very much liked that he finally got to talk to his Mom and Dad and see Sirius one more time. It really didn't seem like much of choice to me -- you choose life. You're just going to die later and see them again anyway. LOL, am I too logical? Ginny was making me quite mad in this chapter. I see from some of your review responses that Ron will be taking care of that -- Good! As always, I'm looking forward to Friday!

Author's Response: Harry has always wanted to have his family, so I think he would have been sorely tempted to stay. It also marked the start of the turn in his life where Harry was finally making his own decisions regarding his life.



Reviewer: la schtroumpfette Anonymous Date: 2005.06.18 - 01:03PM Title: Survivors

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GREAT CHAPTER MELINDA !!!!!!!!!! That was realy WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I like the fact that harry had to chosse between life and death... And the way he hesitated... But, i do not agree with what Sirius had said : sometimes, you have the choice between life and death : look : those who decided to suicide... but well, here, i'm quite nasty with you... I also the meeting with Sirius and harry's parent's, it was so beautiful!!! And, oh , well i've forgotten : great plot : when all the things seemed finished, you make the readers dependant on your story by plotting another problem : Ginny seemed realy stupid and egoist... When Harry need her the most, she refuse to be with him. I can understand she think it's her fault, but, well... she can do a little move and try to be there for harry... Finally, i want to thank you for not killing Ron... I was so afraid you would kill him... Harry would have been eaten by remorses. And, ho, i also like the idea of a new scar for harry on his side. When i first read the previous chapter, i hadn't seen that he has been striken with the avada kedavra... But well, having a scar or being dead... i think i would choose the scar. Well, i'm sad, that's nearly the end... Will you continue to write stories???? When you will have read HBP, will you wrtite a fanfiction ??? I hope so YOUR STORIES ARE REALY GOOD (have you ever thought of becoming a real author ? If so, when you will publis your book, i think i will be on the first to read it)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I do hope to one day have my own story - if I could only come up with an original idea the motivates me as much as this one does, lol. Have faith in Ginny, and of course I couldn't kill Ron. I LOVE Ron.



Reviewer: aryell Signed Date: 2005.06.18 - 12:51PM Title: Survivors

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Wonderful chapter, although i'd thought Ginny might have beena little more stronger and stuck by harry. but then again she's probably feeling guilty that she was the one that was taken into the chamber again andhe followe dher because of that. I knew it was LUNA!! oh well, lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Ginny is having a rough time, but she'll come around. She just needs a little time - and a little push - to pull herself together. Don't worry - Hurricane Ron is on the way...



Reviewer: mickyblueeyes Anonymous Date: 2005.06.18 - 09:57AM Title: Survivors

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i am sorry about the harry+hermione part of my last review.i was wandering if you had the time to answer could you help out a bite with my doubts about who gets together. just to let you know i trust my gut instinicts and i have a funny feeling that h+h will get together. i have read the books throughly or maybe not to some people's exact length of knowledge. i have found out and guessed ginny still has feelings for harry when they are in the hospital wing after the mom incident. i have come to understand in gof that ron has feelings for hermione. Also during the book hermione blushes when krums name is mentioned as well. as to harry he sort of has feelings for cho at that point. with all the books especially gof ootp jk has shown many hints which can be interpet in many different ways and points of view. a couple of weeks ago my sister stayed for a weekend and we discussed what might happen in the next book. my sister confirmed with me that a MAIN CHARACTER will die in the next book sorry to say. I know this might sound sad but it will either be ron or hermoine who might get the boot. i know this is sad but i think this might happen. if i had to chose how everyone will get together this is how it should happen. ok,r+h are going out with all the lubby dubby going on. harry will be struggling with his lost of sirius. they are in a battle and either ron or moine will die which will devest harry severly. at that time harry will probably turn to either hermoine or ginny for comfort. it ought depends on who dies. if hermoine dies than harry will turn to ginny and if ron dies he probably turn to hermoine or ginny. if you have any advice in the books of gof and ootp can you please write down what chapters that you think i should read to find these answers. in the interest for harry i hope jk places harry with the right witch who will loce harry as just harry none of this boy who lived rubbish. also another thing to consider now that harry and dumbledore have sorted out the ministry problem with slime old fudge i wouldn't be surprised if more witches started to fall for harry due to being the boy who lived. for this reason harry needs either GINNY OR HERMOINE for this. I also think since harry is so much like his father he needs someone who plays the role of lily in his life. of course ron will be godfather to harry's children if they both survive the war. i don't think jk will kill of harry either. if that happened than the story will be a waste of time. also i have heard one of them will become a professor. if harry survives i reckon he will teach dada. we will just have to see what happens. sorry for this long review but i thought i should ask for some help with these partners in the series. my father told me never be afraid to ask for help with anything. thanks again for your stories that you have posted. i have placed them under my favourite story list to read. keep up the good work and 10 all the way. my guess is that you have a reason why harry and ginny haven't embraced each other yet. take care and i can't wait for the next chapter to come up. MICKYBLUEEYES

Author's Response: Grin. I'm very much like you - I always go with what my gut says, and my gut wrenches and nearly hurls at the thought of H/Hr, lol. I just don't see it at all. As far as HBP goes, I do know the war begins in full and I think we'll see more than one death. I don't for a moment believe it will be either Ron or Hermione, however. Personally, I think it will be DD, but we'll see. I can never see a situation where Harry would ever betray Ron like that. In GoF, Ron was the thing Harry culdn't bare to lose - even if he had an interest in Hermione (and I don't think he does) he'd never do that to Ron. He wouldn't be Harry if he did something like that. As for Hermione, in canon she has no trouble or embarassment with Harry that is so common at that age, whereas she does with Ron. I don't want to get into a full blown debate over it here, this is just how I feel - and I feel very strongly about it. One more month and we'll see.




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