Great! Thought it was going to take longer for them to get together...but definitely not complaining!

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okay. i just wanted to let you know . that i really like this story so far. hehe

Author's Response: Thank you!

haaaaaaaaaaa hermione is the BEST! and ron and ginny and harry!! haa! great story!

Author's Response: I had a lot of fun with Hermione in this story, it was definitely pre-hbp though.

JESUS! THIS IS CHESSY! THEY SHOULD FALL IN LOVE IN THE TIME, NOT BY PEER PRESSURE!

Author's Response: What an excellent point. I never looked at it that way.

my suggestion with the snog scene would be: after Harry says he loves her and sees her smiling that he makes the move for the kiss, you can have that kiss end and then ginny say what she says and then lauch herself onto him lol ... but i believe that Harry needs to make that move.

Author's Response: Hmm, I'd never thought about it that way and I am leaning towards agreeing with you. Thank you for the suggestion! I am certainly going to keep that in mind for the future.

I like your Ron, but Ginny goes from distraught to "in love" quite quickly, even though Harry has only said that Hermione might have a point.

Author's Response: Yes, it is probably my biggest complaint about this story. I didn't build up the transition well. In my other (later) stories I have worked on that.

Well... are Harry and Ginny now a couple? If yes, the rest is going to be a little boring. If no, lets see...

Author's Response: Hopefully it won't be too boring... the story really wasn't about them getting together although it was an important detail.

I think that Harry should reveal to Ginny that he is falling in love with her when they are alone. He shouldnt really say anything in front of Ron and Hermione but wait until they leave and then have him talk to Ginny and tell her exactly what it is he has been feeling when he is with her. I personally would be embarassed if someone told me that they were in love with me in front of my best friends. I think, for Ginny, this will be more convincing and more romantic since she has been helping him learn to be more affectionate. For example during the cuddling lesson he claims to have instinctivly wanted to put his arms around her. He should tell her that he was thinking this before right before she gave him permission to. I think this story is very good so far and has a very interesting plot. But I sometimes get the feeling ( I dont write, I read, so my opinion doesnt mean much and I mean you absolutely no disrepect or offense...) that sometimes you are in a hurry to move the plot in a particular chapter along that the emotion and sincerity in the scene are being lost. For instance Ginny has been pushing aside her feelings for Harry for years. Anyone who is an avid Harry/Ginny supporter knows this. She doesnt have any clue as to his feelings for her so, when he tells her his feelings, she should have been in disbelief and stunned not smiling and exstatic jumping into his arms. Kisses like the one you have written about should come later in thier relationship thier first kiss should be slow and exploritory sweet and soft almost shy, not lip crushing. She had just been crying denying Hermione's assumption that he loves her. I do really like this story and it did say I should review if I thought it could be improved I just merely wanted to share my opinion. I think the plot in incredible and I will definatly keep reading. :) Fliberty

Author's Response: I can see how it might be better for him to admit it when they are alone but he probably would not have admitted it at all without Hermione's help and I guess I imagined that he was seeing Ginny's pain and discomfort with the whole thing and he was trying to sooth her. Hmm... all right, I'll think on that one more. I do, however, feel like it would be out of character for Harry to tell Ginny that he wanted to put his arm around her. He was not being very open with her at that point. I also agree that parts of it were rushed in the begining (this was my first story) but also, your opinion does matter and I want to hear it!! Honestly, I don't get offended . Okay, well the issue of her feelings over this will be adressed more, later on in the story. I don't know how far you got, but I never did touch on it very much and in hind-sight I realize that I should have since I set her up for so much heartache. You're right about the kiss... I'm terrible with that sort of thing, as you'll see later on. I just can't write the kissing part too well. Mostly, I see Ginny as always believing in Harry's hoensty since we know he's a terrible liar. Maybe that's where I was going, although I really don't remember. Anyway, I'm glad you like the plot. I do too, although I can certainly see that this was a learning experience for me, as far as the writing style goes. Thanks for being honest, not many people are!! :-D

i absolutly posotivley love this story. i love this story so much i dont know how to express it.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for letting me know. :)