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Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2022.04.25 - 08:20PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
I feel like I read this before but didn't comment, but can't quite recall. Either way, I'm enjoying this premise, and hope you won't mind if I comment every chapter. You've done some excellent tension building here.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll read along with reviews. I'm actually about to head on a road trip so I may not be able to reply (limited internet) but I do love the reviews :D
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2022.04.25 - 08:20PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
I feel like I read this before but didn't comment, but can't quite recall. Either way, I'm enjoying this premise, and hope you won't mind if I comment every chapter. You've done some excellent tension building here.
Reviewer: rextile Signed Date: 2013.11.21 - 09:29PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
Done with reading it a third time.. still as action packed and amazing as the first time.!
Hope to see other great works like this and ur latest story :)
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.10.26 - 06:50PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
You've got me hooked! I think I might start to get agitated with Ginny though if she doesn't tell Harry how she feels very soon!
Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.12 - 12:38PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
This was a lovely opening chapter. Nice and intriguing. I like the dream sequences. I find it odd that Harry and Ginny aren't dating, though I guess that will come sometime later. Great job!
Author's Response: I am finally catching up on review responses! So here we go... yes, the dating thing is a major thing :-D
Reviewer: gem Anonymous Date: 2005.09.19 - 08:11AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
i've only read the first chapter, but i pretty sure that this is going to be one of my favourite fics. i love to ones where H/G are just friends, good friends who have something speacil, that will hopefully become more. Well, going to read the rest of the story.
10 *'s
Author's Response: I think it's safe to say they'll be more... after all, it's posted here! :-D But yeah, the suspence gets drawn out so just hang in there. Nothing will make sense till the end.
Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.05.05 - 07:14PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
Another thought just occured to me...one of Harry's weapons in defeating the Dark Lord is the power the Dark Lord knows not. I've always assumed that is Love, and in my dreams, it is the the love between him and Ginny which gives him the strength to do so. I'm curious to know if that is also true in your story, or if you have another idea...of course, I'm only on chapter four, so... And, is it that H&G really do love each other in your tale but just haven't gotten the gumption to do anything about it yet...at this point in time, I need to keep reading, don't I? :)
Author's Response: *grins evily* Oh love is important but no, that isn't how Harry kills him. That will be revealed in a dream as well but oh, you have a long haul until they are together... (like 7 more chapters or something) but that was kind of nessessary on my part. Their romance is important but not really the story.
Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.05.05 - 06:58PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
Ah, wvchemteach sent me in your direction for good measure! Love the start - my heart aches for Harry & Ginny. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you... he keeps doing that to me and making me blush! Anyway, I'm glad you liked the start and I hope you have fun trying to figure out "who dun it" with the rest. :-D
Reviewer: lil_birdie Anonymous Date: 2005.05.01 - 10:08PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
yes yes i like it i like it alot...lol....i love a good mytsery fic so im ganna go read the rest
Author's Response: I'm glad you like mystery because there will be plenty of it! :-)
Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2005.04.22 - 12:21PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
OK, having read your other works this is the better of the four (although I likes Say Yes a lot), you are adding the little details that bring your stories to life as well as some of the inner thoughts that give the reader a better view of the outward action. I hope that both Ginny and Harry realize that they only need each other and that by admitting it will cause the nightmare to go away but, I guess the journey to that point it the point of your story right? Anywho ... keep up the great work (and yes, I love how fast you update, very nice to us readers you are!)
Author's Response: Are you sure that is what is causing the nightmares? *evil grin*
I'm glad you think that I have improved. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SAS33 Anonymous Date: 2005.04.21 - 02:58PM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
Excellent Story, I'm really enjoying it. Very well thought out and well written.
Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hate to boast, but seriously, the story is thought out to the extreme. I pretty much leave the readers clueless until the last few chapters (it's 29 chapters long). So anyway, I give clues through it for the plot but you have to look really closely. Anyway, happy hunting and thank for the review!!
Reviewer: Tron Anonymous Date: 2005.04.21 - 07:15AM Title: Chapter 1: The First Puzzle Piece
Yaa Hoo! I'm happy to see this story here.
I read it on FF and thought it was great.
I hope you have another great plot in mind for us. I'm looking forward to your next story.
Author's Response: Not for a while... I'm about to go through surgery and I'm in quite a bit of pain and fairly doped up. Although I wrote Demons while on some nice pain killers, I am struggling right now to just post it, and it's already written. yucky... I won't write again for another few months.
