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Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.13 - 01:57AM Title: Chapter 8: Not What You See
He chuckled. “See? You still make me laugh. Generally we are laughing at me but at least we laugh.” – Nice line!
I like the dream, though I want to know more about it.
There’s lots more tension; methinks Harry could be coming around finally.
I’m also excited about Hermione’s baby. I should’ve said that sooner…
I feel so bad for poor Ginny, she loves Harry so much. Stupid prat.
The ending was great! Though when she said she wanted to kiss him I started singing “Kiss the Girl” from the Little Mermaid and now it’s stuck in my head!
Lovely chapter! I hope my crazy reviews aren’t making you annoyed. They are quite fun to write. *_*
Author's Response: Those dreams are important...
Reviewer: nuage blanc Signed Date: 2005.04.25 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 8: Not What You See
Really interesting! Please continue!! ;-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so... I promise the whole thing (all 28 chapters) will be up before the end of May, I just can't be more specific than that.
