Reviews For Demons In The Dreams
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.10.27 - 04:16PM Title: Chapter 9: Really There Ginny did you HEAR his reply!!!:-) Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.13 - 02:08AM Title: Chapter 9: Really There I love the easy banter between Harry and Ginny. Reviewer: chocolatePrincess Signed Date: 2005.04.26 - 05:40PM Title: Chapter 9: Really There I love this story, it frustrates me to no end, but I love it
It is extremly agitating that Harry and Ginny don't snog already but I know that there is a reason that they maintain their level of "friendship" and I think their friendship is sorta cute!!!
I noticed one thing while I was reading your story: The little thing Harry and Ginny keep saying to eachother practically every chapter...
Ginny says something about Harry being a flirt and Harry replies with "you've figured me out then"...
Is this significant in any way at all or is it just my overactive imagination?
Anyways!Good luck with your surgery!! I know how scary it can be since I've undergone about 3...But then again you could be alot braver than I am...
~Ruby
P.S: Update as soon as you feel better from your surgery :D Reviewer: Shannon Anonymous Date: 2005.04.26 - 03:54PM Title: Chapter 9: Really There Hello there! I've just finished reading several of your stories including the Garuda series and this one. I must say this one is my favorite, so I'm reviewing it first! I just like post-Hogwarts stories for some reason. I think it's because JKR may not actually write anything to contradict them...
There are several aspects I'd like to comment on. First, the suspense. You did a very good job setting up the problem -- i.e. Ginny and Harry both have very bad nightmares that may or may not have something to do with what happened when Voldemort was defeated. Ginny's nightmares have been getting much worse lately. Okaaaay... That's about it. So far, I have several theories about why this may be happening, but you're not really shooting them down or giving me any additional information with which to expand on my theories so I'm not feeling a lot of suspense, per se -- more like curiosity. Ginny and Harry aren't actively seeking the answers to why they are having these nightmares, so I'm not really either as I read the story. Does that make sense? That part of the plot doesn't really seem to be going anywhere yet.
Second, the subplot -- Lucius Malfoy. He's such an evil character, so useful for creating problems in a story! This is a good subplot that I do feel is "going somewhere." I'd like to see Harry and Ginny doing more active work to try to find him, rather than just responding to tips they receive from others. The globetrotting is great. H/G on the pacific coast; H/G on the Eiffel Tower... Where will they go next?? Somewhere equallly romantic hopefully. May I suggest Venice? Also, cool spy gadgets would be a great addition. Surely Aurors have access to James Bond-like gadgets that the rest of the magical world has never seen!
Finally, the relationship. The non-sexual intimacy is very sweet, but it is a little, ahem, frustrating! I hope that you are planning to get them together well before the end of the story. It is lovely to read about Harry and Ginny discovering their feelings for each other, but it is even more lovely (in my opinion) to read about the happy couple tackling and overcoming problems that face them. They both seem to almost like their nightmares since they give them an excuse to be close to each other, to the exclusion of everyone else. This is, of course, not healthy. Therefore, they need to admit their feelings for each other before they can get rid of the nightmares. I hope I've convinced you! :-) Reviewer: angiegs Anonymous Date: 2005.04.26 - 02:54PM Title: Chapter 9: Really There Another excellent chapter, I am enjoying your style of writing and the developement of the characters.
Now one thing that has been bugging me the last couple of chapters. Are these two people the most idiotic people on the earth or what? They keep toying around with each other and never quite get it. I want to step into the story and slap some sense into both of them. Ok I am done now with my rant.
If I remember correctly, you were having some surgery. Best wishes on that and I hope all goes well.
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