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Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.13 - 10:34AM Title: Chapter 13: Traps Of The Mind
I heart Mrs. Weasley. You write her very well.
Oo Harry’s break-up. Yay! He’s not being so bloody thick anymore.
“Poor Celia.”
“Oy! I’m the one who got slapped.” He retorted indignantly. – Hahaha
A battle scene! Yay! I like that Tonks took on Ginny’s appearance to prove a point. You write her fairly well but she’s not clumsy enough.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm never sure about Mrs. W, but I try to think about what I'd say and usually that's what works best.
Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.05.05 - 10:46PM Title: Chapter 13: Traps Of The Mind
I hope your surgery went well! Harry is a sweetheart - thick, but a sweetheart! I'm enjoying the work aspect of this tale - it's fun to see them as reponsible adults!
Author's Response: Yeah, it did... I'm "stuck" in bed but really, I just get to read all day long with my laptop on my lap so it's all right. I really enjoyed writing them as adults... a lot more than I thought I would but it was nice to "grow them up" as it were. And thick... oh yes, I can only see Harry as always being thick.
Reviewer: Shannon Anonymous Date: 2005.04.29 - 05:10PM Title: Chapter 13: Traps Of The Mind
Nice little transition chapter. I'm very interested to meet this mind healer. I suspect foul play. Perhaps a death eater in disguise? Hmmmm...
I hope your surgery goes well. Hospitals are not fun -- no matter how nice the nurses are or how well things go. So, I hope you are home really soon.
BTW, I read your response to my first review. You have me totally confused now! Just how strong are those painkillers? LOL! Sorry, that's not really funny. But, thanks for the nice long response. I have a lot to digest now!
Author's Response: Thank you. The mind healer is certainly a puzzle. Is she honest or is she really a death eater? Ah well, you'll just have to wait and see. Yeah, well... I had a friend check over my response to make sure I was coherent and he said it was okay, so actually I think I was just being honest but yeah... the pain killers are lovely! ;-) It is confusing and it will only get even MORE confusing. It is truly a puzzle that is not what it seems. Have fun!! :-D
Reviewer: chocolatePrincess Anonymous Date: 2005.04.29 - 11:24AM Title: Chapter 13: Traps Of The Mind
Great Chapter!!!
Good luck with your surgery, I hope everything goes well!!!
I eagerly await your next post, when your feeling better :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully I'll be up and about soon enough.
Reviewer: Muggle WItch Anonymous Date: 2005.04.29 - 10:19AM Title: Chapter 13: Traps Of The Mind
Another great update. I hope your surgery goes okay.
Author's Response: Thanks, me too :-)
