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Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.16 - 10:55PM Title: Chapter 22: Truths Among The Muck

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I find it odd that the Aurors who are the best of the best, have to report to Magical Law Enforcement. You think it would be the other way around. Lovely job as usual!

Author's Response: I think I wrote this before we had a full explanation from JKR. I know this was post OOTP, but I think a year before HBP.



Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.05.09 - 07:03PM Title: Chapter 22: Truths Among The Muck

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Poor Ginny - she's such a strong, fiesty thing that seeing her cope with insecurities is sad. Interesting concept of Ginny seeing a young Harry as her savior. It makes me wonder if she will be able to accept/trust an older Harry to save and protect her. I hope you're feeling better and the rewrites are going well. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Oh yeah... the insecurities play more of a role than has been shown but not much. I am feeling okay and I got chapter 24 rewritten today and my Beta sent it back (we always work like this...) I write a chapter and she's as hooked as all the other readers so she drops school work (in this case she has finals) to fix it for me that day. :-D



Reviewer: angiegs Anonymous Date: 2005.05.09 - 04:56PM Title: Chapter 22: Truths Among The Muck

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Dagnabit! So Harry wasn't as affected because of that darn Occulency while Ginny was just skipping along the road to the land of Insanity. Voldie's green light started the possession but who is possessing them? We know that Malfoy is behind it (the stupid git), but is he the mastermind? I am not sure because he was locked away for a bit and both H/G were still suffering. So could it be Malfoy Jr or someone else? It's interesting that the 'Dark Mark Tattoos' are reappearing. I think they need to check people working in the ministry for any new tattoos. Unless the evil dream stranger picked up on Hermione's help through a dream of H or G's, the 'evil dreamer' has to be someone really close. For some reason Ron's partner keeps in my mind. He could have easily overheard about Hermione's help through Ron or H/G. Also why did Tonks and Ron go to Azakaban? Why not one with their partner? You have left me a lot to think about. I hope you are doing better and just take your time with the last two chapters. This is for fun so don't stress. Cheers, Angie

Author's Response: Ah yeah... I know I put it as a chapter title, but "the past counts". Who is a great question and there have been very few clues so far as to who that person is, although there are some, of course. Okay, so on to your next part about the Ministry and such. Nope, sorry you're assumptions are wrong. Okay, well Ron and Tonks went together because they don't want to bring in more people than they have to (keep the bonding quiet) in case their is a leak. I am actually having a lot of fun rewriting the chapters (I finished chapter 24 today and I'm about to send it off to my Beta) so yeah, well I also started revising chapter 24 today ;-) No worries, I'll still be posting daily.



Reviewer: Phantasia Anonymous Date: 2005.05.09 - 12:31PM Title: Chapter 22: Truths Among The Muck

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That was great. I hope your feeling better. Phan :P

Author's Response: Thanks, and I am starting to.



Reviewer: cloud9 Signed Date: 2005.05.09 - 02:56AM Title: Chapter 22: Truths Among The Muck

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WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. haha..... i think that this a fantastic story. one of my favorites. great job.

Author's Response: Thanks... I will just as soon as *yawn* I wake up from my nap... not that you'll see the new stuff I've written for a few days cause I still have other chapters to post. ;-) I'm so glad you like it.




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