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Reviewer: Tearlit Signed Date: 2007.10.17 - 12:47PM Title: Chapter 24: Simple To Deceive

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Ok I think all my questions are answered now, well those from the previous chapter anyway. I don't like that they took her last name away though. This was an especially good chapter!

Author's Response: Oh good, and yeah, I wanted to make it primitive and outdated.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.02.02 - 04:24AM Title: Chapter 24: Simple To Deceive

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HA HA HA HA! I know that you published this before HBP came out which makes this all the more fun. The Sword of Gryffindor is basically a horcrux! Well done! Obviously, there are differences, but it is such a similar idea... and since many people in fandom have theorized that the sword is a horcrux, that makes this even more delicious. Give yourself a big pat on the back for this one. This story is fabulous. I swore to myself that I wouldn't get so wrapped up in it that I wouldn't read the whole thing tonight and not sleep, but I can't resist. It's too good to stop.

Author's Response: You have no idea how freaky it was to see how close I was! I even had the idea of several horcurxes (sort of) in that it was a part of several people and objects. It wasn't perfect, but it was close enough to be scary!! I'm sorry you haven't gotten any sleep... i've done that too L-D



Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.05.12 - 11:19AM Title: Chapter 24: Simple To Deceive

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Hey, I'm mentioned! Cool! :) Glad I could help. Very, very interesting - loved Ron's comment about wishing Moody hadn't retired...again! The explanation of the the fractured spirit was really good - the idea that V.'s magic is still around not his body - well done!

Author's Response: Hey, you deserved it! You let me know that I messed up, and yeah, that was a big mistake on my part. I should have checked it more carefully. I'm glad you liked it and thanks again! :-)



Reviewer: angiegs Anonymous Date: 2005.05.11 - 02:42PM Title: Chapter 24: Simple To Deceive

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Okay, so it was 'Imperio' in a sense that caused the prisoner to kill himself. Malfoy was just a big fat herring. He was showing up all over the country to confuse the aurors. Now who could have the sword? I am leaning towards Pettigrew, I can't remember if you have mentioned him in the story or if he died or not. If he is still alive he could have easily stolen the sword while he was an animagus, H/G wouldn't have noticed him, OR, someone could have been watching the final duel between Harry and Voldie and been hiding under an invisibility cloak and picked up the sword and hid when Harry and Ginny were distracted. Ohh I just love this. Thanks, Angie

Author 's Response: Yup. Malfoy showing up all over the country... well sort of. Pettigrew's dead, sorry ;-) When he and Malfoy had Ginny at the last battle, she ducked a killing curse that killed the rat. Very perseptive... you'll find out next chapter but the question is still "who" Thanks for the very fun review :-D I love hearing all the speculation.




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