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Reviewer: coffeeandchocolate Signed Date: 2019.01.28 - 08:30PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
Love this story! It's so cute
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.10.05 - 12:01PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
great start
things are certainly going to get interesting :)
Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2008.02.09 - 04:47AM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
They say you can never have something for nothing, let's hope Harry doesn't blow it in his bid to win Ginny's heart. Great start to a good read.
Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 05:25PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
No Review
Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.05.25 - 08:34PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
Well, it's pretty obvious, but it's more fun for the readers that way! x) Yayy.
Reviewer: XiaoXiao Anonymous Date: 2005.06.06 - 12:03AM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
Hmm...this could get interesting....
Author's Response: Yepp Yep
Reviewer: Ana Anonymous Date: 2005.06.04 - 03:57PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
Gosh this story looks really good. Only problem is...
I'm not seeing any more chapters...I need more chapters in order to sruvive so hopefully you'll be a quick updater and not make the same mistake most good authors make which is update once every month.
PLEASE????
Author's Response: lol. It will more like once every week. Most likely around Thrusday or Friday. Maybe sooner. I'm glad you liked though. =D
Reviewer: Jade_amethyst Anonymous Date: 2005.06.03 - 09:55PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
lol great story update soon
Author's Response: aye. aye. Captain. =D Next one will be up around Thrusday
Reviewer: GuiltyIndulgence Signed Date: 2005.06.03 - 08:25PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
I first must say that I've thoroughly enjoyed how this story starts. The idea is compelling, and the dialogue moves at a quick pace. Then, I checked out your biography and was blown away to realize you're already writing at this level and you've not even graduated high school yet--well done. This is definitely a talent you should continue to nurture because you're a natural.
So I always try to include at least one "friendly criticism" with a review, and here's mine: watch your "Americanisms." I think it would help tighten up your story if you try to reread your dialog with a British accent in mind. It will help you keep your characters a little more in canon and will make for stronger dialog. Otherwise, great job! Very impressive start, and I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: =D You REALLY brighten up my day. Thank you for reading and for the compliment. I will try to stay away from the...Americanisms. =D
Reviewer: oceanblue Anonymous Date: 2005.06.03 - 04:01PM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
cant wait for more....i cant wait to see how this works out...
Reviewer: Lesa Anonymous Date: 2005.06.03 - 07:31AM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
This is an interesting start. I'm a little concerned about the way Harry and Ginny treat each other other, him enjoying teasing to make her angry and her kicking Harry doesn't sound like the beginning of a good relationship.
Author's Response: lol. They are just messing around. I thought it was cute. It's like back in grade school when they told me that if a boy teased me...he liked me.
=D glad you like.
Reviewer: emmamoonpotter Anonymous Date: 2005.06.03 - 07:09AM Title: I do believe we need a plan, Watson
Well, well, well. How the tables have turned. Harry liking Ginny and thinking Ginny got over him. Ha! Can't wait to see where this is going!
Author's Response: ooooh...your gonna be in for a big surprise when the next chapter comes. =D
