Reviews For The Simplest Things
Reviewer: Rosepen Signed Date: 2008.08.02 - 04:32PM Title: The Simplest Things
That was amazing I think you should continue this whole story thing. It would make a great terrific story. I know that I would read it. Good luck on other stories there going to be great by your first one I can tell.
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.03.27 - 01:19AM Title: The Simplest Things
Loved it! What a fun, fluffy, totally romantic fix. Sigh.
Reviewer: gejufan Signed Date: 2008.02.22 - 04:21PM Title: The Simplest Things
Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe Signed Date: 2007.01.07 - 10:16AM Title: The Simplest Things
I loved this one-shot. The fantasy summers were a really good idea, especially the way that Harry's ties into Ginny and the bit at the end. I noticed the that this story was in present tense (something I don't think you've done before) in the beginning of the story and you did a very nice job with it. Great job!
Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2006.07.11 - 10:42AM Title: The Simplest Things
Really enjoyed this, I like flangsty too!
Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2006.07.11 - 10:41AM Title: The Simplest Things
Really enjoyed this, I like flangsty too!
Reviewer: MuggleMomma Signed Date: 2006.06.20 - 02:45PM Title: The Simplest Things
Oh! This fic really made me grin. It's got to be the best scenario for the Harry/Ginny get-together that I've ever read. It's wonderful!
Reviewer: Chelle1917 Signed Date: 2006.06.17 - 11:09PM Title: The Simplest Things
I just stumbled upon your fics. Since at the moment, I don't have the time to start a chaptered one, I thought I would start with this one.
Reviewer: Watermelon531 Signed Date: 2006.05.09 - 07:51PM Title: The Simplest Things
You are such an awesome author; I'm definitely adding you to my favorites! Such an awesome story!
Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2006.04.21 - 03:18PM Title: The Simplest Things
As others have said, "cute", and loveable, and cuddly, sorta like a teddy bear. :-) Or maybe simply fun. You're a good author, I've just added you to my favorites list. Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: willow Anonymous Date: 2006.03.24 - 01:52PM Title: The Simplest Things
ah! i loved this! but then i love all your work- i think i may now have read it all...well everything here or on phoenixsong anyway! thought about a sequel to this? ; )
Reviewer: ShA-nAy-NaY Anonymous Date: 2006.01.02 - 09:10PM Title: The Simplest Things
i LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! great story!!!
Reviewer: redkneazle Anonymous Date: 2005.12.28 - 02:58AM Title: The Simplest Things
a fun read!
Reviewer: Billie Bowtrunckle Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 09:41PM Title: The Simplest Things
Oh my, I've just signed myself up for an account here so I could leave a review! Another HP fanfic site could be disasterous for my productivity! ;) I like how you tuck in the angst among all of the happier (fluff) bits. I'm reading along, thinking that everything is fine and well and suddenly "bam' I stumble across a line about Harry being injured or the fact that he's locked up in the summer and it just sort of hits right in that soft spot (you know, the ohhh poor Harry soft spot). You do a wonderful job at jumping between the two seamlessly while maintaining a nice balance. Flangst is definitely an appropriate category for this piece ... maybe it should be made official category?! I really love how you begin a thought that then just pick up on it here and there. For example: Ron hogging Ginny's stuff and then taking Harry's share of things as well. That was a nice detail. Not only was it funny, but it conveys that Harry and Ron have that same sibling-like relationship as Ginny and Ron. Ron is one of my most favorite characters and I always enjoy it when authors do him justice (in my humble opinion). I also thought it was telling to have Hermione's dream include something for Ron. I also think it's believable that Ginny is so matter-of-fact about so many things and relatively perceptive when it comes to Harry in general, but fails miserably when it comes to Harry's feelings toward her. It's her blind spot ... how appropriate and loveable! Cannon-like characterization for the trio and Ginny are something that I really appreciate. You incorporate some great one-lines in there as well that had me grinning. "He seems to have got over his skepticism and, completely ignoring the rest of the ridiculous story, focuses in on that one insignificant detail. Boys are strange,' "I think I'm about to die of asphyxiation since breathing no longer appears to be an option,' and "He's definitely part Weasley; we're all idiots.' I noticed that there were some "tense' issues, which are really difficult to find, especially when writing in first person: Opening paragraphs Ginny's voice should be in present tense: "I shake my head-.This is the start of summer break...' Ron talking about his dream should have consistent tense: "Are you kidding? I'm soaked to the bone! I can't go inside wet, and I certainly can't perform a drying spell in front of Muggles' Also, because it's Ginny's voice, maybe your first paragraph should be: "The mood inside the train is somber and restrained, reflecting the anxiousness that we've felt since the traumatic end of term-' I hope you don't mind that I pointed out these nit-picky things, but I always appreciate it when reviewers lend me their eyes. I think you did a terrific job at bringing Ginny to life and it was thoroughly entertaining to read events from her point of view. I hope there's more of the same to come. Great one-shot!
Reviewer: Trina Anonymous Date: 2005.10.30 - 06:50PM Title: The Simplest Things
That was so frikin cute!!!!! I loved it, great job!!!
Reviewer: jess. Anonymous Date: 2005.10.16 - 03:33PM Title: The Simplest Things
yah! review number 100!! heheh, its cute, i like the fact its fluffy, but not overly so, it has the fluff, but also that hint of anst that makes it more realistic ^_^
Reviewer: gemz Anonymous Date: 2005.08.29 - 03:23AM Title: The Simplest Things
fab and i would love to hear what happens next!!!!
Reviewer: ash Anonymous Date: 2005.08.21 - 03:13PM Title: The Simplest Things
I love youor story! this is the first one ive read since i moved about a month ago from Arizona. ive been feeling kinda depressed, but your story has made me really happy. its awesome i luv it.
Reviewer: mmiluski Anonymous Date: 2005.08.20 - 11:30PM Title: The Simplest Things
really good, but itd be nice to find out wat happend at the beach
Reviewer: brhsoccer14 Signed Date: 2005.08.14 - 10:52AM Title: The Simplest Things
Wow! Hands down, best stor I have read yet. I was wishing that there would be more!