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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.12.30 - 07:28AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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I think you had already (before this chapter) described Ron as a loyal and very supportive friend. Yes, he did have first hand experience of witnessing what Harry and ginny were going through, but on the other hand that could have made it a lot more difficult to handle.

So this chapter was lovely, it reinforced all his loyalty to them both, particularly his sister, and showed maturity.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.20 - 03:31PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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aww, great chapter
I'm glad Ron's stopped acting like a git
I really loved the line -
“As well as a hippogriff with a cold,â€



Reviewer: rosebud987 Signed Date: 2009.03.26 - 12:48AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.11 - 07:23AM Title: Chapter Eleven

Well done do say this I think is the best chapter so far do love it your flash backs and all though just came to me you would think Harry at this point in his life was a ticking time bomb I think if he heard half of that there would be a few hexs thrown or at the very least a shouting match.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.03.18 - 11:10PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Great idea to write this chapter from Ron's POV. It's definitely nice to know what he's thinking and feeling. We gained a lot of great insight into why he acts the way he does here. Also, I enjoyed all of the flashbacks. It's great to see Ron defending Ginny and Harry so strongly.

I've really enjoyed what you've been doing with this story. Every once in a while, when I was at work today, I'd think about this story, and it made me smile. Thanks for brightening my day!



Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.16 - 07:59PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Awwww. Ron and Hermione are my favorite.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.02.02 - 06:55PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Reviewer: x_sectumsempra_x Signed Date: 2006.04.05 - 01:21AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Aww! That was sweet. I love all these flash backs =D



Reviewer: Roxy Anonymous Date: 2005.03.18 - 01:44PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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I WISH THERE WERE MORE DETAILS!!!! BUt the story is aweomse! thebest yet!



Reviewer: HotDragon Anonymous Date: 2005.02.25 - 09:18AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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I love your Fic, but i think there are too many flashbacks...you really need to cut back on those...but otherwise, it is a great fic and i will continue reading.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story. The purpose of the flashbacks is to give some information about what happened to them prior to this story. They do stop within the next few chapters.



Reviewer: sexy seeker Anonymous Date: 2004.05.10 - 04:19PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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i know i already reviewed this chapter but i was bpred so i decided to read the whole story again from teh beginning becasue i love it so much. this is definately my favourite chapter. i'm quite an empotional person and by the end of the chpater i was crying. it is so sweet. please write more chapters like this one.



Reviewer: Paris Anonymous Date: 2004.03.15 - 04:28PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Oh how i love it when R&H make out!



Reviewer: gOLdEnsNItCh Anonymous Date: 2004.03.04 - 03:30PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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I love the little thing at the end with Ron and Hermione. I am rereading this chapter because it is one of my favorites. I have said this before (I sometimes post under Paris) that Ron and Hermione need to have sex. Hermione is too goody goody. She is such a virgin (well I am too but I should be I am only 13 years old) Like if Ginny had sex at the age of 15 why can't Hermione at 17. I really love this fanfic. It is the best ever.



Reviewer: casi Anonymous Date: 2004.01.20 - 03:27AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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*shakes head at my amira* I don't know how you can write fluff! Your so good at it though . :) Your story is really great I would suggest something fun with a twist to happen. It's really flat in that sense that nothing really happens. I'm not really talking as much about Voldie-Poo kidnaps James or what not. Although that could acctually be really cool. It would be interesting to see what you could do with Death Eaters getting a hold of a baby. There are a lot of Death Eaters that are parents. Theres acctually this really cool section of a story. I think its Objects of Desire (which you still need to read) where Snape and Lucius show up at Godrics Hallow and find Harry still alive. Lucius just snaps into father mode changing diapers, conjuring up a bottle, and baby talking to Harry calling him an "little Dark Lord killer". It also goes into at that time what a proud father Lucius was always talkign about his son. I thought that that was an awesome insight that really built up the story and you could so something like that. Have a death eater sitting over James "aren't you just the cutest little thing. We'll keep you all snugand warm until your daddy comes so we can kill him, Yes we will." Okay I am rambling. I would just love to see more small plot lines added in that aren't strictly just main charecters. Play with more humor. Theres so much you can do. James should be crawling soon and I know that you wantted to have more fun with Draco. Have Draco come over to the Gryffindor table during dinner sometime carrying James claiming he found him underneither the Slytherin table as he weaseled his way out of his carrier or high chair and went on an adventure. Acctually I can't wait until James starts crawling thats such a fun stage. Trying to change or dress a child at that age is amazing because the minute you think they are going to stay they roll over and start crawling away. Ron could have fun with that because god knows he doesnt know how to care for achild doign that. umm *blinks* I love you!



Reviewer: Erin Anonymous Date: 2004.01.19 - 04:01AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Ron's not a prat, he's just a big brother who wants to protect his baby sister. I think it's wonderful, and can't wait for the next chapter. ;)



Reviewer: Laiviria Anonymous Date: 2004.01.16 - 08:13PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Aye! Bloddy brilliant chapter mate! I think I cracked my floor though...I fell off my chair laughing a good amount of times to do so! Keep up the wonderful work!



Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Date: 2004.01.16 - 01:22PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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I finally caught up with the whole story. I think this is a wonderful account of the ups and downs of pregnancy. You are doing a great job. Keep it up.



Reviewer: sexy sseker Anonymous Date: 2004.01.16 - 12:28PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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WOW! i loved it because it was from rons point of view. my fave part was the weasley brother pact. it was so cute. keep updating soon. loving what oyur coming up with. hurry, hurry, hurry!



Reviewer: Belle Anonymous Date: 2004.01.15 - 05:16PM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Aww, Sun, you really made Ron seem like a great person in this chapter. It definately added to the overall context of the book. Bravo!



Reviewer: Jaquelyne Signed Date: 2004.01.15 - 04:03AM Title: Chapter Eleven

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Another fabulous chapter Sun.

You didn't make Ron look like a bad guy. He was just being a big brother. I loved the flashbacks with him telling us the story. Well done!

~J~




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