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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.12.30 - 11:21AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
I don't like the sound (or description) of that woman that got hit by james' keys: a familiar leer; drinking from a flask; later smiling and humming instead of her earlier behaviour...
And who knew cho was such a bunny boiler!?
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.21 - 05:18PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
brilliant chapter
I loved James' little "punishment" - very funny!
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.12 - 05:11AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Well wondering what is up with the lady in the three broomsticks I am think Polyjuice or something since you have quite the mood swing there.
Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.10 - 10:23PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
omg i'm so happy that they weren't attacked in hogsmeade... suprised, but happy. i feel really bad for ginny though... how can they question james's paternity if he looks as much like harry as they say an dhas harry's eyes? i guess spiteful people will say anything to hurt their victims. i'm trying to predict attacks before they happen (voldemort attacks, sorry. my mind jumps around a lot) so that im not suprised when they come. i feel better that way. which is why none of my frineds will watch horror movies with me. lol. i really do love this story!
Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.05.08 - 08:15PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Cho needs a reality check. She definelty needs to get over her self.
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2004.10.21 - 10:56AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Harry being concerned about Ginny spending 'his' money seems very out of character... Harry has never been concerned with money, and I can't help thinking he would be happy to share it with his family... That said, I'm enjoying this so far, :-)
Reviewer: Hedwig55 Signed Date: 2004.03.03 - 06:56AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
loved it like always!!!!!!! i can't wait for more!!!!! plz plz plz plz plz post more and really really really soon!!!!! everyone wants more!!!!!...ur a great writer!!!
Reviewer: Myk Anonymous Date: 2004.03.02 - 11:15AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Wow, excellent story. It's so well structured and you're sex scenes are so tasteful. I wasn't sure if i'd like this story when I saw it had an R Rating but you have done everything so well it's great. You're exceptionally talented!
Reviewer: Paris Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 05:08PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Loved it! Best chapter yet. I love the Cho flashbacks. That girl gets on my nerves!! Update soon!! It was funny when Ginny talked about having sex with Harry in front of Ron. I think that Hermione should get pregnant, but she is too good at potions, so they wouldn't get pregnant. Well, Ron and Hermione should have sex anyway. Then Ron wouldn't be so grossed out by Gin and Harry having sex. Its kind of annoying when Harry says that Ginny is the sexiest witch. Does that mean that he knows a muggle that is sexier than her? Cause if I was Ginny I would get really annoyed at that. Other than that it was perfect though. UPDATE SOON!!! I also would like to mention again that Hermione and Ron should have sex. I am sick of Hermione and her little virgin self.
Reviewer: Duke2010 Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 04:19PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
Good. Very good. It's so sweet, Harry and Ginny having their special night together. But, Ginny's having emotional outbursts. Is James going to have a brother or sister? I wonder.
Reviewer: AgiVega Signed Date: 2004.03.01 - 12:04PM Title: Chapter Fourteen
This was the funniest chapter so far, it made me roll on the floor laughing, especially when Ginny was talking aloud about shagging Harry :)
Reviewer: DTORRES Anonymous Date: 2004.03.01 - 08:29AM Title: Chapter Fourteen
a very fine piece of work. As always I lookforward to the next one.
