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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.01.06 - 04:13PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Cho is such a bitch...I cant see them ever being rid of her as she simply wont take no for an answer.

Things looks like they are gearing up for a final battle...I dont think our favourite couple are going to be having any easy times for a while.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.22 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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wow, brilliant chapter
Voldemort really gives me the creeps though



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.09.08 - 10:51PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.14 - 03:44AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

Well I am wondering how your going to end this story for some reason I am almost sure that your going to kill off all the Potters or more of them at least.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 10:03AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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I'm so glad that Harry told his brothers-in-law and Arthur about why he had left his family. It appears that Charlie still had some lingering anger towards him, judging from his comment about Harry not dancing with Ginny, but it will probably take time for everyone to get back to normal with each other.

Arthur was well-written in this chapter (as usual). He was loyal to and affectionate with his family, and he stood up to his mother about Ginny and James attending the ceremony while phrasing it in a respectful (yet firm) way. He was also great with Harry. I liked how he seemed to already know that Harry had had good intentions behind leaving his family, even if it was a very bad idea. He was warm and supportive of Harry, as always, and he was not a bit ashamed of his daughter. I enjoyed Harry's view of Arthur and Ginny dancing together. Very sweet. Arthur is just the best dad in the world. And your Molly is fantastic, too.

I'm glad that Molly spoke up to Alice, and it was probably smart not to do it in front of her children. Alice would have been angrier if her grandchildren had witnessed her being criticized by Molly.

Another wonderful chapter!



Reviewer: janepotter Signed Date: 2007.07.01 - 12:01AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Grammar patrol!!
"Mum if anything happens to Harry and I promise me you’ll take care of James.”
^Need a comma ^Should be Harry and me - Should stand alone when the former is taken from the sentence, i.e. happens to me vs. happens to I.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.02.08 - 12:24AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Reviewer: Fictio Anonymous Date: 2004.09.08 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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I love this story! I have stayed up to 11:00 everynite just to try to finish it. Cho is such a B****!!! At least Michael hasn't done nething lately! i hope all will be well. Love it that Gin and Harry finally made up! Romance Fics Rule! Keep it up!



Reviewer: caitlin Anonymous Date: 2004.07.22 - 11:43AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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omg!!!!!!!!!! that was awsome!!!!!!!! i can't wait 4 the next chapter. just to let u know i am addicted 2 this story .great work so far....



Reviewer: Lauryn Anonymous Date: 2004.07.20 - 06:27PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Sorry it took me so long to review. Stupid computer. Anywayy I loved this chapter. It was really great. One of the best chapters yet in my opinion. Great job, keep it up and cannot wait to read more.



Reviewer: Trisha Anonymous Date: 2004.07.19 - 10:48PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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One of the best chapters yet. I really like how intertwine all kinds of emotions within this chapter and you really have the characters personalities down! I really liked the ending because I think that it's incredibly sweet that after spending so long fighting this battle alone, that Harry finally has someone to look out for him and stand by his side. Very good!! Update!!!



Reviewer: Miss Mione Anonymous Date: 2004.07.19 - 04:56PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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I love this story so much! This has to be my favourite chapter yet. It had all the suspense, the romance, the comedy, and the queen slut, Cho. Why oh why does she have to be such a bat about Harry? I mean, HELLO! He is married, and has a son. What makes her think that she even has a chance with him! Anyways, I think you did a great job with this chapter. You especially have "Miss Queen Slut" down to a T! Can't wait till next chappie!



Reviewer: AngieGS Anonymous Date: 2004.07.19 - 01:35PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Great chapter but I do think that Grammy needs to go away and take Cho (I am a pathetic slut) with her. I am looking forward to more and I am glad that Harry told the truth to Ginny's brothers and her father.



Reviewer: DTorres Signed Date: 2004.07.19 - 08:45AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Ginny and Harry seem to be under attack on two fronts (Grams & Voldie). I liked how James needed to be center of attention and you have a good grasp of the characters (and I like how you are starting to show Harry has a spine). I look forward to the next update.



Reviewer: Mizrable_gurl Anonymous Date: 2004.07.19 - 12:24AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Nice chapter.......hey could you like, actually i live in a really hot place with absolutly no air conidtioning and i'm practicly fainting so i'll review later Luv ya!



Reviewer: allison Anonymous Date: 2004.07.18 - 11:16PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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i loved it i was awesome im just alittle concerned about ginny and harry being so adult i mean i know they half to cuz of james but i like ginny needs to get alittle wild and them be teenagers for a little while and just be by themselves together WHENS A NEW BABY COMING!



Reviewer: Hedwig55 Anonymous Date: 2004.07.18 - 10:53PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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omg great chapter!!! but...so sad. Harry started crying when talking abotu Bryce, Ginny started crying while worrying about Harry, and me, crying at both parts. lol. i hope Ginny's brothers will soon forgive Harry. and i just can't wait till lil James starts to walk!! hehe. well, i hope Harry doesn't like sink into a depression like he did when they lost Bryce. and i really hope Harry doesn't go after Voldomort like a dimwit. btw, when is James going to get a lil sister or brother??? hehe. just wondering. lol. well, hey, wait a minute. how come it took you so long to post. u useally post each week but this time it was like...almost 2! well, i hope you post more soon. and i just can not wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: It took me longer because I was having a lot of trouble writing this chapter and real life got in the way too.



Reviewer: Lourdes Anonymous Date: 2004.07.18 - 08:19AM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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What an intricate web of personalities. Pity about the fact that we can choose our friends but not our family. Poor Arthur was born to a very narrow minded witch. It is a good thing that Elijah balances this out. Ho he fell for Alice in the first place beggars belief. Men are sooooo blind and Charlie would have fallen in the same chasm if Ginny had not revealed a thing or 2 about Cho. As if Bryce is not enough, Voldie made a drama right in the middle of a simple dance...but hey, we are talking about Harry here. When was life ever kind to him?



Reviewer: Lilyanna Anonymous Date: 2004.07.17 - 08:07PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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Sorry I have more to add. I really think someone slipped some truth potion in Harry's Firewhiskey! Am I right?



Reviewer: Lilyanna Anonymous Date: 2004.07.17 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter Twenty Four

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*sob* That was very good and so so moving. Please updates ASAP!




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