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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.01.07 - 07:06PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
OH my goodness...breathe, breathe!
That seems far worse than Ginny AND James being taken....James on his own is just too much to think about:-(
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.22 - 02:44PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
wow, not sure what I think about that chapter
I guess that this is going to be Voldemort's end though
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.15 - 04:15AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Well now I do think I am right Malfoy is the spy. Though probably unwilling that is what I think since to me it seems he was more warning not sneering at the Potters. ONE HUGE FLAW how in the world did they Apparate onto the grounds I mean come on now have you never heard are dearly beloved Hermy say you cant do it?????
Reviewer: nwsgrl032190 Signed Date: 2008.07.30 - 08:34AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.How could you.
Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.04.06 - 08:40PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Fantastic chapter! I loved Harry and Ginny's time together talking and kissing under the tree. Those were some of those golden, sunlit moments that could help him defeat Voldemort. Then, to have the chapter end that way, with James kidnapped by the Death Eaters; now THAT is the definition of a cliffhanger!
Reviewer: Alas123623 Signed Date: 2007.09.03 - 11:09AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
hmmmmmmmmmm im not killing you yet. take that as a wonderful complement that i really like your stories. now FIX THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.08.22 - 09:22PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
ihate you! i hate you! how could you do that?!
Reviewer: ShadeXH Signed Date: 2007.08.04 - 03:12AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Oh, come on! It's 3 in the morning and you leave me with an ending like that? Ah!
Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.11 - 09:12PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
o no!!! although i must admit that when you start your shapters with a "don't hate me" its kind of obvious that something very bad is going to happen. i'm just going to keep telling myself that he'll be ok (note how obsessed i am with HP that i'm worried about a baby that doesn't exist in a world that doen't exist... hope you got that) and i'll go back to my chem... interspersing chapters of this story with my studying is a great stress reliever... although it can be annoying when i have to stop on a cliffhanger!!!!! love the story, i really really do... EEK! he'll be ok... he'll be ok... lol great story
Reviewer: Raine Signed Date: 2005.10.04 - 08:30PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
WHAT DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING!?!?!?!? YOU'RE KILLING ME MAN!!! ACK!!!!
Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2005.09.22 - 12:43AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
nONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOo!!! Thats all I can say about that!
Reviewer: FictionFreak Anonymous Date: 2004.09.08 - 11:15PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
OMFG!!!!
Reviewer: MAggie Anonymous Date: 2004.09.06 - 01:55PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
ive been reading your story from when you first started posting it..and i am very sorry for not reviewing. this story is what gets me online to see if you have updated....and i cant WAIT til you update because i am seriously wondering what has happened for james...and that whole draco situation.
Reviewer: taryn Anonymous Date: 2004.09.05 - 07:12PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
AHH!!! im goin crazy with out an update i dont mean to be all obsessive but i absolutely love your story...and thats sayin alot cuz im normally a h/hr but my friend told me i had to read ur story and it is by far the best ive read including th h/hr ones i hope u post soon
Reviewer: Kadyak Anonymous Date: 2004.09.02 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
Please see previous review. I don't wish to intrude, but if you'd like, I'd be happy to provide a few tips on the grammar/word use. Please be assured that it has struck me that I am so riveted to this story. You handled Harry's misguided attempt to distance himself from his family extremely well. It was heartbreaking to see him do that, but it worked its way out. You have also handled the complexities of teen pregnancy and the varied reactions of the members of the Weasley family exceptionally well. Finally, your representation of the characters is true (in my mind) to J.K. Rowling's. J.K. Rowling should be honoured by your work.
Reviewer: Kadyak Anonymous Date: 2004.09.02 - 01:27PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
As an adult (42 yrs) fan of HP, I am finding your story both enchanting and captivating. Please update soon. My only criticism, and this is coming from a language major, is that your grammar and word use (switching "their" and "they're" for example), could use some work. Still, I have been fascinated and have become quite emotionally involvved in your story and that is the most important part.
Reviewer: Mina Anonymous Date: 2004.08.28 - 12:15PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
poor james... :'-(
Reviewer: magzimus Anonymous Date: 2004.08.27 - 12:55PM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
please update!!!!!!!!! please? please? Please? PLease? PLEase? PLEAse? PLEASe? PLEASE? PLEASE?! PLEASE?!? PLEASE?!?!?!?! (goes into apoleptic fit)
Reviewer: MrsHarryPotter Anonymous Date: 2004.08.25 - 10:36AM Title: Chapter Twenty Six
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why did that have to happen. I hope james is alright. i am going on holiday on fridy so please update soon
