Reviews For It Happened One Night
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2011.01.08 - 06:22PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight What bravery...poor little Abigail and that image of Pansy really on getting to hold her for the first time since she was a new-born was very evocative. The way James reacted towards Abigail shows the world of difference a loving environment can make to a child...he sensed that she wasn't well and was cold... I loved him giving her his blanket. And I do believe a child his age would sense the need and wish to do this. Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.22 - 03:04PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight brilliant chapter Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.16 - 03:46AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight Well really do think you wouldn't see old Harry playing around with stunning spells if you really had took his family away there would be some real carnage I think or at least I would hope. Reviewer: nwsgrl032190 Signed Date: 2008.07.30 - 09:50AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight OMG, OMG amazing chapter, I never expected Draco to be a father. That was so good. Reviewer: stinky_head Signed Date: 2008.07.05 - 04:37AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight Normally my opinion is that a baby is always good for a story, but only when written well. Up until now this story has been a joy to read, but there was something about this chapter that made me completely lose interest in this story. Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.04.08 - 07:47PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight I loved your idea to start this chapter from James's POV. It was a very interesting way to go, and it was convincing that it came from an almost-one-year-old, in my opinion. I'm not sure if a child that young would know enough "cause and effect" that he'd be able to put it together that Abigail was cold and sick, needing his blanket more than he did. But, his parents are true Gryffindors, with all of the chivalry and bravery that entails, so maybe it came naturally to him to give his blanket to the smaller baby. When I was reading about him doing that and Abigail smiling at him in reply, I was thinking, ten years from now, this is similar to the whole Rose Weasley/Scorpius Malfoy pairing, really. Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.08.23 - 02:52PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight oh no! i wanna kill you rite now but i wont! Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.11 - 10:28PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight voldemort's dead... he has to be... harry is NOT dead, nor will he die in HP7,,, these are the things i keep telling myself... this was a really great chapter... i'm not sure that i sould write a battle scene like this. i'd feel to much for the ones who died... i'm guessing that this was written pre-HBP based on the lack of horcruxes? i love this story i truly do and i'm not sure i want it to end... luckily for me, i know there are already a couple of one shots written after this! haha! lol... this is truly a fantastic story and i can't wait to see how it all comes out in the next chapter... or is that the epilogue...? i don't know... i've lost track of what chapter i'm on! lol... i hope that draco and pansy and abigail are all ok as much as i dislike malfoy i think he deserves this happiness. and i'm glad neville got his revenge! ok really really really long review... sorry... lol now i have to keep reading! =D Reviewer: natalie Anonymous Date: 2004.10.19 - 04:31PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight GO NEVILLE! Reviewer: discoliscious Anonymous Date: 2004.10.19 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight OMG! Oh. My. Gosh. you HAVE to update soon. like really soon. i hate cliffhangers. lol. i guess it'll take a while to update huh? since you have school and all. darn it! cool chapter tho. so sad about Abigail... OH! and the dementor attacks! pansy and abby better be alrite, cuz even tho pansy is so mean, they don't deserve that. about time bella was killed too eh? Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Date: 2004.10.16 - 08:48PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight that was THE ultimate cliffhanger of time... thats sooo mean! Lol. really good chapter... i want to know SO bad what happend... please let harry live. I know that you wouldnt kill off harry and not voldie... but if voldie did say the curse even if harry's made it to voldie first... wouldnt it still kill harry too? So both of them could die right..? How sad.... i was almost crying when you did the torture ginny/james part. So sad! The memory part was done very well, very moving. Reviewer: hyperblonde016 Signed Date: 2004.10.15 - 07:34PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight OMGOODNESS!!!! that was such a good chapter! i waited sooooo long for it and it was well worth the wait! BUT HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US WITH SUCH A EVIL CLIFFY!!!!! GRRR! lol but im gonna say that hopefully voldemort dies and harry jsut fainted out of exhaustion because i mean its not a story with out harry! lol he better live for james and ginny!! lol UPDATE SOOON!!!!! pleeaseee!!! ~*!Brooke!*~ Reviewer: Me Anonymous Date: 2004.10.14 - 03:56PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight That was FANTASTIC... your my favorite writer around her... I love your story.. it is so uhm.. .real.... Reviewer: lilypotter15 Anonymous Date: 2004.10.13 - 05:49PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight omg this is so great!! NOO!! HARRY MUST LIIIIIVEE!!!!! You are a fantastic author!!! It's like, I'm actually there, in the story, you know? Oh, you probably think I'm crazy or something, but i just wanted to say that i await your next update!!!! Reviewer: Lauryn Anonymous Date: 2004.10.13 - 04:52PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight Wow that was amazing. You are extremly talented. I cannot wait for more =] Great job Reviewer: caitlin Anonymous Date: 2004.10.13 - 03:02PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight if u killed harry i will be very and totally pissed off at u but good chapter its a cliffhanger that keeps me drooling 4 more ppllleeeaassee update soon and let harry live. Reviewer: HermioneGWeasley Anonymous Date: 2004.10.12 - 09:57PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight PLEASE update again soon. This chapter was wonderful, but I do not think I can wait as long as we had to for this chapter. Reviewer: diggingupophelia Anonymous Date: 2004.10.12 - 01:14PM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight Bravo! Very very well done, all though I must say you are almost as evil as Voldemort with that cliff hanger lingering about! I really hope that you update soon because the suspense is going to kill me. Reviewer: Manda Anonymous Date: 2004.10.12 - 07:59AM Title: Chapter Twenty Eight Wonderful! Well worth waiting for! So much happened in that chapter that it kinda hard to absorb, but i have and ................ wow! Harry had better not die, because well.... wut would be the point???? all the love and no Harry? He had better just live for Ginny and James *and Ron and Hermione too*. ~*~manda~*~ | |||||||
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