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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 04:19PM Title: Chapter Two
So we did get to see Ginny's brothers' reactions but they also quickly got to see how much Harry cared for their sister. The birth was brilliantly written and had me on the edge of my seat.
So James is at Hogwarts...surely he isn't going to be a secret for long? I can see why Harry would be terrified of this information getting into the wrong hands, but I can't see how it can be avoided. Short of Ginny and James going into hiding, what can they do?
Reviewer: hgluver4ever Signed Date: 2009.09.12 - 02:26PM Title: Chapter Two
I hope those Hufflepuffs got a detention for scaring poor James!
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.20 - 12:26PM Title: Chapter Two
another great chapter - love the story
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.09 - 12:46AM Title: Chapter Two
Hmm don't know what your doing really seems like you wanted them to keep it secret and than all of a suddenly you have Dumbledore go back on this plan seems like you wanted him to do that though do love your flashbacks though don't think her bros would be rude to her though.
Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 08:03PM Title: Chapter Two
Fantastic chapter! I've enjoyed all of the chapters so far, and I didn't want to stop reading long enough to write a review. However, I loved this chapter so much that I had to let you know.
I loved it when Ginny told her brothers to stop blaming Harry for her being pregnant, since she was actually more to blame than he was. That's what I wanted her to do, with her brothers being so unfair to Harry, and she was brave and strong enough to withstand anything her brothers might think about her.
I'm so glad that Ron and his parents are being so supportive of Ginny and Harry's marriage and giving birth to James. It's a fantastic change of pace from all of the stories (especially in "bond" fic's) where Molly tries to keep Harry and Ginny apart, or at least to slow down their relationship. I'm so glad that you wrote it this way.
I also loved how supportive and wonderful Harry was of Ginny throughout the delivery. You wrote that whole scene so well!
I am so interested to see how Ginny and Harry will manage school and James simultaneously, especially with NEWT-level schoolwork. I've been hoping that maybe Dumbledore would let the them move into a guest room or suite there at the castle, so that they can live somewhat like a family would. So, I'm eager to end this review now so I can read more.
BUT, one more thing. When I was looking for a new fic to start reading and I found this, I was a little perplexed by how vague your summary was for this story. I wasn't sure if this was the type of story towards which I gravitate, since there wasn't much information given. So, I just decided to start reading it, assuming I'd quit if it was not my thing. I'm SO GLAD I decided to give it a shot! I can understand an author not wanting to spoil any surprises, but I thought I might let you know that this also might keep some people from reading it. "Harry and Ginny make a decision that changes their lives...." One might wonder: did they buy a Quidditch team? Did they adopt a dozen orphaned wizarding children whose parents died at the hands of Death Eaters? Did they decide to buy up some land and build houses for each of the Weasleys, so they could all live next door to each other? Did they decide to move to the US, in order to live somewhere in which Harry might not be recognized so much? Did they decide to become teachers at Hogwarts, after things had calmed down after the Final Battle? Your summary is so vague that it could be attributed to dozens of possibilities, and some people may be hesitant to try a story if they have no idea AT ALL what it's about. I'm not trying to be rude or to "flame" you. I just thought maybe you could add a little more to the synopsis. Even just one more sentence might give the reader a slightly clearer picture what to expect. Published books have quite a bit more information on the back cover (or inside the dust jacket) so that the reader has a feel for the book they're considering reading. Since people read the books despite the blurbs on the back, it doesn't have to completely ruin the plot points of the story.
However, like I've already expressed, I personally am very, very glad that I decided to give this wonderful story a try. Thank you for writing it! Excellent work!
Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2007.08.11 - 06:26PM Title: Chapter Two
but wat if harry wanted to take the baby to class?!LOL!
Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.10 - 01:09PM Title: Chapter Two
i guess they could still use the little brother cover story... say why the wesleys couldnt watch over him and say that they chose ginny to watch him bc she was a girl and that harry would help her bc she needed support and hes her boyfriend... although im not sure why ron wouldnt be helping her... hey they're great liars, why couldn't they come up with something? this could be bad though. it obvious that voldemort will find out now, probably form a malfoy. bad bad bad news for the potters. this is a really awesome story!
Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.05.04 - 11:49PM Title: Chapter Two
I just love the twins bet they made for an interesting childhood. They are so cute and funny the way they teased her while she was in labor. Although I don't know why Molly didn't kick their asses out of her room. Wow this story just got more interesting. Raising James in Hogwarts how difficult is that.
Reviewer: Cid Anonymous Date: 2005.08.21 - 09:01PM Title: Chapter Two
SunDevil05 Oops On my last review I said I had read up to chapter 2. I looked at the thing wrong. I am *now* done with chap 2 and am glad you put some backstory in here about the Weasleys being upset with Harry, Awesome! Nice twist about Arthur and Molly leaving for a month and Harry and GInny having to take James. I wondered how people were going to find out about him. Cid
Reviewer: marilyn Anonymous Date: 2005.03.01 - 02:19PM Title: Chapter Two
wonderful! I didn't understand exactly everything in the birth scene but that's not your fault I have just never given birth and I am the youngest. Great chapter anyways. I love the outline of this story; it is very professionally written.I could never have done as good. You are a fantastic writer.
Reviewer: ally Anonymous Date: 2004.06.02 - 06:01PM Title: Chapter Two
gah, how did this happen, i reviewed on the wrong chapter..oops
Reviewer: ally Anonymous Date: 2004.06.02 - 05:37PM Title: Chapter Two
aah good chapter, how does the email-thingy work, i have a good hunch on what is going on with malfoy...
Reviewer: luna Anonymous Date: 2003.10.24 - 10:06PM Title: Chapter Two
amira......this is crazy i hate that u write better than me lol j.k i agree with the other review i enjoi how u portray ginny....i also think u nailed percy on that last chapter lol
Reviewer: casi Anonymous Date: 2003.10.16 - 04:09AM Title: Chapter Two
beautiful beautiful *wipes tears from eyes* the birth scene is just wonderful now *falls over giggling*
Reviewer: casi Anonymous Date: 2003.10.15 - 12:00AM Title: Chapter Two
Amira you know I love you right? hehe okay this story is pretty good it goes along a little to fast for my liking it just skips one thing ot another and I am left kidna wondering where things come from. I really can't see Ginny as the scared type around this type of thing. The girl was raised in a house with 7 boys. I can imagine her doing the whole "this is MY baby and if you have anything to say about it I can tell you were to put your broom" Oh and please never ever ever EVER write a birth scene with out looking up a thing or two or asking for help lol I read it and giggled.. But thats me. I also always pictured wizards using midwives because there isn't a maternity ward at mungos.. adn we know my thooughts around midwives.. I guess I would have used that because then hiding the baby would have been easier. oh oh oh CAAEN BABY!
Author's Response: LOL! just for you casi! thanks for your help with the revision! so all you readers, i have a new verison of the "birth scene" and will be updated shortly. thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Kelly Lucky_439@cox.net Anonymous Date: 2003.10.14 - 11:05PM Title: Chapter Two
awsome i can not wait for more love it
