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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2010.12.28 - 06:18PM Title: Chapter Four

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What a lot going on in this chapter. Firstly we have the traumatic discovery for Ginny when she finds out she is pregnant and then has to tell Harry. I could picture McGonagall watching the quidditch pitch from a window and was glad Harry was showing his support for Ginny after the initial shock of the news.

Then we had the hilarous (or maybe not depending on who you are and certinaly not for Ginny) scene of Molly forcing Ginny to breast feed baby James. George really did take it too far at the end.

And finally Snape's typical (but dreadful all the same) treatment of Harry in advanced potions. It was a strange feeling of being on the endge of your seat wondering what he was going to say next, while wishing he would just SHUT UP!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.04.20 - 12:59PM Title: Chapter Four

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great chapter



Reviewer: rosebud987 Signed Date: 2009.03.25 - 12:25PM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2008.09.06 - 10:45PM Title: Chapter Four

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I really like your story so far. Cheers!



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.10 - 07:05PM Title: Chapter Four

Well do like how you are doing the flashbacks though I will say I cant see Ginny's brothers being such an ass can see some joking but Fred and George aren't stupid and would know when to draw the line. Though don't really know what is going on with your story seemed to me that they didn't want anyone to know which would make alot of sense but now your just throwing it out there like it is no biggie and Snape bascly connecting the dots for everyone wouldn't think he would be that stupid or sink that low.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.03.17 - 09:17PM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.10 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter Four

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snape is so vile! i still think that ginny needs to talk to harry, but i can understand why she just wants to be alone and avoid everyone who is wispering behind her back... i think its sad that she has to be so protective of james, more so than any other young mother might have to. this is a really wonderful story and i hope it all works out for them in the end.



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.04.06 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter Four

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That whole brothers-in-the-room-while-Mom-exposes-t heir -sister-to-them-in-what-should-have-been -a-beautiful-and-PRIVATE-moment-for-Ginn y-and-Harry was more than a little creepy.

Aside from the strange behavior during the birth and introduction of breastfeeding techniques, I really like this story.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.01.31 - 07:24PM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.01.30 - 11:59PM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: The 5nitch Signed Date: 2006.11.15 - 01:53AM Title: Chapter Four

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Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2006.09.18 - 06:47PM Title: Chapter Four

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oh ron is so foolish, i love him he's the best!



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.05.04 - 11:57PM Title: Chapter Four

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I love the twins they are so funny. Runt Potter that's so cute. Although I like the name Harry and Ginny picked out better but the twins will make interesting uncles God help them all.



Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Date: 2005.10.22 - 09:48AM Title: Chapter Four

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IT is alright.



Reviewer: Borg Anonymous Date: 2004.11.03 - 12:28AM Title: Chapter Four

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Cute little story, however............why the hell would Ginny and Harry allow her brothers to be there while she was in labor? Makins snide comments and generally being asses. Also why would Molly make Ginny breastfeed James in front of her brothers while they made stupid comments about it? Very unbelievable fic.

Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry you feel that way. First of all, during labor family and friends are allowed to visit but not everyone can be present for the actual birth for risk of possible infection. Ginny's brothers were trying to make Ginny feel better by cracking jokes thinking this would make her at least laugh a little, however they failed and realized it later on. Second of all, a baby must be feed within a few hours after birth. The baby cannot strave and Molly is basically trying to get Ginny used to doing things like this in front of her brothers. She shouldn't have anything to be embarrassed about. If you think this is so unbelievable, then that's your opinion. This is how I've written my story and I can't please everyone.



Reviewer: Katja Anonymous Date: 2004.08.24 - 07:25AM Title: Chapter Four

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I read your story so far, and now I think it's time to put my two cents in it. Please don't mind any spelling/grammar mistakes in my rewiev, since I'm German and English is (obviously) not my first language. A few things are confusing me. I think it is rather funny that nobody could have been found to take care of little James while Molly and Arthur are gone. The Weasleys are such a HUGE clan! Or why not hire a nanny? Harry is rather wealthy; surely he could have afforded professional childminding for a month. Taking the baby to Hogwarts is not the cleverest thing to do, and I'm sure either the (rather overprotective) Weasleys or Dumbledore (one of the smartest wizards alive!) should have come to that conclusion. In my opinion this is a plot hole, since I can't see any logic in it. And why would Dumbledore encourage Ginny and Harry to wear their wedding rings? So far JKR pictured him very keen on keeping secrets as long as possible. I think it's very unlikely and out of character that he would put little James deliberately in danger by revealing his real parents. In particular when there are plenty of other possibilities to solve the problem. Why not stick to the story that James is Ginnys baby brother? Everybody would believe it (since Ron mentioned it on the station to a few of the other students) and James would be safe. Another thing is the way Ginny reacts to the news of Charlie being seriously injured. She doesn't react at all! OK, she is distracted by James and the joy of seeing him again, but nevertheless I think it's very out of character for Ginny to totally forget about her brother. And she didn't even mention it to Ron at the table. This doesn't look like the usual Weasley we-are-family-attitude at all. This goes as well for the constant and rather harsh teasing of Fred and George while Ginny was in labour. The twins are pranksters, but there are limits to everything. And who would be that suicidal to teas Ginny Weasley (JKR described her inherited Weasley temper) in such a moment?! I know it's not easy to come up with a flawless plot. I hope you don't take my words as a flame, but this came to my mind while I was reading the first five chapters. Greetings from Germany, Katja

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. And no, I'm not taking this as a flame. However, I would like to respond to your observations. The reaon that James went to Hogwarts was because it was a complete secret. No one outside of the immediate Weasley family and the Order of the Phoenix knew about it. It would be too difficult to leave him with a brother or an Order member because of the careers those people have. They would not be able to care for a baby. Why didn't they stick to the story that James was Ginny's baby brother? Harry. He couldn't just let Ginny be the only caretaker for him. He knows he has a responsbility as well and has to take that responsibility. Also, Harry loves James just as much as Ginny does. He can't just stand by and pretend that he has nothing to do with his child. Eventually someone would find out and it's much easier for them to tell everyone off the bat than to wait and have people discover it later on. As for Dumbledore encouraging them to show their rings, well there is a reason for it that I cannot mention right now. It happens much later in the plot. But there is a reason for it. Now for Ginny's reaction to Charlie, okay maybe I did leave that out. But Ron does know, I just didn't mention it. It's not a very crucial part to the plot so I really didn't see a reason for it to be in there. As for Fred and George, I can see them as the type of people who would tease Ginny like that. Their intentions were to try to get her to laugh and cheer up a bit and try to take her mind off the pain, but they didn't realize that she would not like it very much. They do become serious about it later, and if you have continued reading, there is a chapter from Ron's POV that shows them feeling bad for it. I hope that explains things to you. I hope you continue to read, if not then that's your decision. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.



Reviewer: Jaquelyne Signed Date: 2003.10.25 - 02:41PM Title: Chapter Four

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There is a part of me that is very glad that I am almost 30 and prego for the first time. But you have hit the experience right on the head. Good Chapter... Bravo! And the Snape bashing will be later this afternoon. Also.. how does Malfoy know?



Reviewer: Delylah Anonymous Date: 2003.10.25 - 02:09AM Title: Chapter Four

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Interesting story. I'm glad you're portraying some of the problems that come with teenage pregnancy. I have one critique: if it had truly been 2 months since Ginny had nursed James, she wouldn't be able to just pick right back up again (unless she had been pumping the entire time). She would need a spell or something.

Author's Response: My friend pointed this out to me after I had posted the chapter. It is addressed in Chapter Five. Thanks for your comments! THANKS TO ALL!



Reviewer: luna Anonymous Date: 2003.10.24 - 10:35PM Title: Chapter Four

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bad snape..i love how u told the part about the breast feeding...good stuff.. that makes me sound weird o well



Reviewer: Xandra Anonymous Date: 2003.10.21 - 04:29PM Title: Chapter Four

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ooh snape is so mean!!! i love this story more and more with every chapter! its so different to all the others and i can't wait for the next installment!!




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