Reviews For 5 Nights of Promises
Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.04.15 - 08:24PM Title: Irony of the Gods Painful separations for the two love birds. Reviewer: Potter47 Signed Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:45PM Title: Irony of the Gods *twitches at the use of "&" instead of 'and'....* Again, the punctuation needs work... for example: "Harry!" her wand was now pointed directly at his chest. "Just hear me out, yeah?" he was holding his hands up in surrender as she glared him down - regardless to her puffy red eyes and wet cheeks. In both of these instances, the word after the quote should be capitalised, because it has nothing to do with the way the words were said. It is a new sentence. I hope this gets better as the fic goes along... Onto chapter three. Reviewer: Raiining Signed Date: 2005.07.26 - 07:45AM Title: Irony of the Gods Wow - that was much better than I thought it would be from the byline Six months? and she's already left him? Wha???? But this made sense - and was very well done. The "rumour" bit was the catching part - excellent. Reviewer: Pink Lizard Signed Date: 2005.07.25 - 06:39AM Title: Irony of the Gods Lovely! It was really sweet!!! Love Pink Lizard x Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2005.07.25 - 12:08AM Title: Irony of the Gods These are great moments... ready and waiting for the next. Reviewer: freshwater Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 08:54PM Title: Irony of the Gods When I first read part one, I thought this would be about the first 5 days following the end of HBP.....but I like your plan better. After all, we don't remember days or weeks, we remember moments. Can't wait to see how far your next 3 days take us. Reviewer: professormoody Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:22PM Title: Irony of the Gods Very good!! Hope to see more soon! Reviewer: Lei Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:08PM Title: Irony of the Gods This is very good. Keep it up. I can 't wait for more. Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:03PM Title: Irony of the Gods Keep up the very good work! Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 05:55PM Title: Irony of the Gods Beatiful. Simply beatiful. I almost cried. Please continue! its awesome!
Reviewer: Professor Scroll Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 03:02PM Title: Irony of the Gods Who cares what category it should be in. This has been a very sweet story so far. Reviewer: itsme07863 Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 02:19PM Title: Irony of the Gods "I think it's high time someone told you about the birds and the bees since they seem to be in season." lol. i doubt harry needs to be told but tonks version is prob very hilarious. :D update!!! Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 02:02PM Title: Irony of the Gods My heart dropped at the bit about Oliver but it picked right back up again. Tonks is ever the wonderful big sister with the sensible insights. Harry's lucky to know her. Lovely! Reviewer: andi Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 11:37AM Title: Irony of the Gods even nicer.continue will you?
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