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Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.04.15 - 08:24PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Painful separations for the two love birds.



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2006.03.22 - 09:26AM Title: Irony of the Gods

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ooo, very nice



Reviewer: Potter47 Signed Date: 2005.09.01 - 09:45PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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*twitches at the use of "&" instead of 'and'....* Again, the punctuation needs work... for example: "Harry!" her wand was now pointed directly at his chest. "Just hear me out, yeah?" he was holding his hands up in surrender as she glared him down - regardless to her puffy red eyes and wet cheeks. In both of these instances, the word after the quote should be capitalised, because it has nothing to do with the way the words were said. It is a new sentence. I hope this gets better as the fic goes along... Onto chapter three.



Reviewer: Raiining Signed Date: 2005.07.26 - 07:45AM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Wow - that was much better than I thought it would be from the byline Six months? and she's already left him? Wha???? But this made sense - and was very well done. The "rumour" bit was the catching part - excellent.

Author's Response: thank you once more :)



Reviewer: Pink Lizard Signed Date: 2005.07.25 - 06:39AM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Lovely! It was really sweet!!! Love Pink Lizard x



Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2005.07.25 - 12:08AM Title: Irony of the Gods

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These are great moments... ready and waiting for the next.

Author's Response: I shall be posting part 4 either tomorrow or the day after so you dont have to wait for long for the next part :)



Reviewer: freshwater Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 08:54PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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When I first read part one, I thought this would be about the first 5 days following the end of HBP.....but I like your plan better. After all, we don't remember days or weeks, we remember moments. Can't wait to see how far your next 3 days take us.

Author's Response: yes, it's random night and things that will happen seperately in those nights :)



Reviewer: professormoody Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:22PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Very good!! Hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: you will ;) thanks for the FB!



Reviewer: Lei Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:08PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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This is very good. Keep it up. I can 't wait for more.

Author's Response: Tomorrow morning will be the next part - I hope you enjoy it! :)



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 07:03PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Keep up the very good work!

Author's Response: thank you very much!



Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 05:55PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Beatiful. Simply beatiful. I almost cried. Please continue! its awesome!

Author's Response: I'll be posting part 3 tomorrow morning :) thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Professor Scroll Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 03:02PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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Who cares what category it should be in. This has been a very sweet story so far.

Author's Response: I know it doesn't really matter - but I do it for the few individuals who like pointing it out ;) Just in case! heh.



Reviewer: itsme07863 Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 02:19PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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"I think it's high time someone told you about the birds and the bees since they seem to be in season." lol. i doubt harry needs to be told but tonks version is prob very hilarious. :D update!!!

Author's Response: even though I'm not writing a version of it - you just gave a grear plt bunny ;)



Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.07.24 - 02:02PM Title: Irony of the Gods

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My heart dropped at the bit about Oliver but it picked right back up again. Tonks is ever the wonderful big sister with the sensible insights. Harry's lucky to know her. Lovely!

Author's Response: yeah - Tonks is adorable ;) Thank you very much for the feedback!



Reviewer: andi Anonymous Date: 2005.07.24 - 11:37AM Title: Irony of the Gods

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even nicer.continue will you?

Author's Response: yes, the story is def. AU - but dont worry I will finish it - I onyl have one more chapter to write, all the others have been written already :)




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