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Reviewer: star dust Anonymous Date: 2005.11.01 - 05:03AM Title: Road Home

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Awww.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed :)



Reviewer: LuckyHP Signed Date: 2005.08.14 - 11:48PM Title: Road Home

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Keep up the very good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I greatly appreciate your response.



Reviewer: Professor Scroll Signed Date: 2005.08.07 - 01:08AM Title: Road Home

I forgot to say, "How could you?" Poor Neville. I always knew that he was meant to do great things, and that he would willing sacrafice himself for the people he cares for, but it broke my heart to read about it. He has always been a true friend to Harry. (couldn't you have used someone that I didn't like, maybe Michael or Dean? LOL) probably not, they wouldn't have been as selfless.

Author's Response: I know, it killed me to have Neville scarifice himself, but for a very long time especially since I've heard the prophecy, I've seen Neville scarificing his life for Harry. I don't know why, but nothing else seemed right to me when I wrote that part of the story.



Reviewer: Professor Scroll Signed Date: 2005.08.07 - 12:49AM Title: Road Home

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Wow, Pantherhawk. You wrote a beautiful story for your first one, (Or the first one that you posted here) maybe a little short, but you know how long winded I can be. I still have tears and a silly grin on my face. Waiting a year after the defeat of Voldemort sounds very in character. Harry would have some mental healing to do, but I hope that they don't wait that long. My only other comment is that according to Hogwarts; A History, you cannot Apparate from the Hogwarts grounds. Harry and Ginny would have to go to Hogsmeade before Apparating to the Burrow. However, who knows, some of the Wards might have been broken during the war. Again, good job. Professor Scroll

Author's Response: I forgot all about the wards about the Apparate, Hermione would have a fit with me now wouldn't she. Maybe I will take a look and see if I can change that before I send the second chapter. Thank you for pointing it out for me, and thank you very much for the review. I greatly appreciate your kind words.



Reviewer: harrylovegurl Signed Date: 2005.08.06 - 08:07PM Title: Road Home

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it was beautiful i hope there is more coming i would love tyo read

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I had said earlier that I didn't know if there would be a second chapter but I started it last night, and it's about half done. I have one more scene to do before I send it to my beta. Thanks for reading.



Reviewer: harryandginny Signed Date: 2005.08.05 - 06:26PM Title: Road Home

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Good job with the story! However, I find it hard to believe that Harry would be able to perform a killing curse. Other then that, keep up the good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I appreciate it. I believe that Harry would perform a killing curse, though only on Voldemort, and in an act of desperation. Harry is sweet soul but now he's to the point of no return and wants to get ride of the man who has killed so many.



Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2005.08.05 - 06:17PM Title: Road Home

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This is lovely. MORE MORE MORE.please/

Author's Response: I am currently unsure if I'm going to continue with the story. It had stared as a one-shot. But when I submitted it, i noticed there was a possiblitiy so I left it open. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: XODannyXO Signed Date: 2005.08.05 - 05:29PM Title: Road Home

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Wow. That was amazing. So perfectly described! I almost cried! lol! Great job! ~Ashley

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate it greatly.

Author's Response: As much as I tried this chapter wanted to stand alone, as it was orginally intended to be. I started a second chapter of Harry and Ginny's lives together but it just didn't flow, so I went back to my orginal thoughts and made it a one chapter story. Hopefully I didn't disappoint anybody. Oh, I made some corrections that were pointed out to me, nothing big though just the beginning and the end paragraph. :) Maybe I'll continue Ginny and Harry's story in another story but as of right now I like thinking of it just like this.




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