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Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2008.08.18 - 10:20PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

Really cute! I loved it!

Don't you shake your head for "no" and nod your head for "yes"? I was briefly confused whether Harry was indicating yes or no.



Reviewer: hmrpotter Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 09:06PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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We-hell...things got a little erotic there, didn't they? :o)



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2007.04.29 - 06:43PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Awesome just awesome. Yes I imagine in my own head what happen between Harry and Ginny after they left the common room. That was simply beautiful, thanks.



Reviewer: XeroBlitz Signed Date: 2007.01.31 - 07:19AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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That was great! There's one thing, though, that can't happen. Harry came back late in the night way past dinnertime, so he and Ginny couldn't stay out until dinnertime. Sorry. Anyways, this story was great!



Reviewer: ladywindsor Anonymous Date: 2006.09.12 - 10:26PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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My number one favorite fan fic of ALL time. I just love the feeling I get from this one. I know you are busy with The Seventh Horcrux, but maybe when you're done with that we can get some more missing moments.....I love those!



Reviewer: hp4_source Signed Date: 2006.02.01 - 10:27PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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I can't figure out how why it took me so long to find this one. Anyway, it's brilliant. Superbly written and both of them are so in character. This missing moment has been done a zillion times but yours is one of the very, very best. In fact, all of the missing moments you've done are wonderful; but this one is just the...sweetest. Must be all the chocolate.



Reviewer: windsor1114 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 05:13PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

I forgot.................please write more!



Reviewer: windsor1114 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 05:10PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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I started reading HPFF a few months ago and this is one of the first ones I ever read. I liked it so much I read the other things you've done. I have read lots of other fics by lots of other people and this missing moment story is my number one favorite of all. I love how you portray the new relationship between Harry and Ginny....It is just the best! I also think that you are the best of the writers I've seen...you really capture what JKR would write if she let us see more! You should write your own stuff...I bet it would be really great.



Reviewer: Jaquelyne Signed Date: 2005.09.27 - 10:02AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Ah the joys of young love. Great chapter Mel. Jo did'nt give us much, she gave us a litt.e but your missing moments fill in the gap. Mom loved it too.



Reviewer: Belle Anonymous Date: 2005.09.26 - 11:44PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Oh I love these missing moment things.... This one is by far the best I've read and I congratulate you on that :) The writing is great, and Ginny and Harry's dialogue is so believable I can imagine the exact events following after they left the Gryffindor common room... Oh, and that bit with the chocolate is just 'wow!' :P Loved it! :D



Reviewer: swishandflick Anonymous Date: 2005.09.26 - 02:20PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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I think I like this one even better than chapter 3 (notice I'm reading them in the wrong order!). What nice, sweet melt-in-your-mouth H/G-ness! I didn't know if I would be able to read this sort of thing after HBP, but this missing moment certainly does it! I like how Harry reacted when he realized he had to talk to Ginny and not just snog her, no matter how much he wanted to. You show how he's matured but in a way that's very in sync with canon. Well done.



Reviewer: Speed Anonymous Date: 2005.09.20 - 10:43PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Wonderfully done! A tremendous job of catching the parts I always thought were missing.



Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2005.09.18 - 12:26AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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whoa! that was hot! great job!



Reviewer: firewhiskey Anonymous Date: 2005.09.17 - 04:42PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Yay!! Another missing moment! I was so happy to see this update to what I hope will be a long string of little one-shots about Harry and Ginny. Anyway, they were so darn cute...all that chocolate licking was very sensual (and made me crave some Hershey's Kisses; I ate 5!). I was a bit surprised at how forward/cheeky Harry was being, but hey, I guess being with your soulmate brings that out in a person. Awesome job Melinda, and I can't wait for more! ~Kristy



Reviewer: ChaliceInnana Signed Date: 2005.09.15 - 09:56AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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steamy... I love all the kiss missing moments. This was a very hot entry in the genre.



Reviewer: Elementum Signed Date: 2005.09.14 - 01:54PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Daaaaang, they are quite naughty together huh? Another amazing moment, as everything you do is. ^.^

Author's Response: Hee. I would have screamed that Harry was OOC if I wrote this post-OotP, but HBP showed us a new level of maturity and cheekiness in Harry. Who would have ever thought we'd read about his "purring beast". I LOVED it. I'm so pleased with the way JKR is allowing Harry to grow up.



Reviewer: Fire Signed Date: 2005.09.14 - 12:46PM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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After about the first week that this site was up and running again after HBP I decided that there were already far too many missing moment stories and made it my mission to avoid them like the plague. However, when I saw the name Melindaleo written next to this one, I knew I couldn't ignore it. As always with your stories, I was not disappointed. Both this chapter and the previous one were absolutely perfect and I loved them both. Thank you so much for yet another brilliant piece of writing.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! I know, I know. I've seen that walk around the lake so many times already, but I just had to do it. I promise to try and keep the other moments I have planned off the beaten path. The next one takes place in the hospital wing...



Reviewer: Motare Anonymous Date: 2005.09.14 - 11:37AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Awww.. this was really sweet.. I loved it.. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: Motare Anonymous Date: 2005.09.14 - 11:36AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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Awww.. this was really sweet.. I loved it.. :)



Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2005.09.14 - 11:12AM Title: Treacle Tart, Broomsticks, and Ginny

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I just loved these stories! What a great job in showing both the depth and the level of fun in this relationship. Like you, I'm so glad we're canon now!

Author's Response: I always love to see your name! Doesn't the idea that we're canon send a thrill through you every time? It does me. I'm glad you liked these moments, I have a few others in mind.




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