Reviews For "Baby, It's Cold Outside" by Frank Loesser
Reviewer: Elizzza Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 10:12AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Enjoyable time travel here - and it really was very very cold in the mid forties. I am most impressed by the story itself and look forward to the next chapter. Perhaps you should have a second look at the punctuation though - and there is something weird about the order of events. Never mind - a 9 seems to be fair.
Reviewer: x Anonymous Date: 2006.03.19 - 01:52AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
as usual sir ollivander, you prove yourself one of the best fanfic writers i've ever had the pleasure of reading his/her writings. you never disapoint with your writing, keep it up!
Reviewer: shadowknight109 Anonymous Date: 2006.03.06 - 02:34PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Outstanding story! It's soooooooo good to see the Dursleys get their comeuppance! JKR should take note of (and from!) this one; I'd love to see this in Book 7! Great fun! Great laughs! And, for Harry, definitely a long time coming! Once again, well done!
Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2006.02.20 - 02:13AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
I love it! UNCLE VERNON IS A COW!!!!!!!! A GIRL COW!!!!! (fyi, that's kind of creepy!) But I love it!
Reviewer: mari Anonymous Date: 2005.12.19 - 11:21AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Reviewer: indianalain Anonymous Date: 2005.12.14 - 08:29AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
How did Hermione's parents get to platform 9 and 3/4 ???
Funny, but I can't imagine a revengeful Harry, even against the Dursleys.
Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 11:45PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
LOL... thats all I have to say
Reviewer: angiegs Anonymous Date: 2005.12.13 - 07:18PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
And justice for all. A nice, unique way for Harry to get his revenge. Not necesarily cruel, but a little evil. Really good job, I really enjoyed this. Angie
Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.12.13 - 07:14AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Amusing, and sorely in need of a continuation, but there are a few things that could do with a tweak. The writing's good, for instance (barring a couple of minor typos), but the phrasing's odd; there are sentence breaks where there probably shouldn't be any, things like that. A few of the plot points feel a bit simplistic, too, but again it's nothing major. All in al, pretty good work.
Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2005.12.12 - 11:50AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.12.12 - 03:26AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Reviewer: abhijit Anonymous Date: 2005.12.12 - 12:42AM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
nice little story , but a bit too naughty
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 07:53PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
*snickers* oh dear.... that was quite entertaining, though I honestly can't see Harry doing anything quite like this..
Reviewer: o0xBeCky Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 06:54PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
revenge...i love it. great job !
Reviewer: Chromatix Signed Date: 2005.12.11 - 06:53PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
REVENGE! ...is sweet.
Very nicely done. :-)
Reviewer: librius Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 04:44PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
LOL great story pls continue. "And vermon lived the rest of his days as a cow" ^_^
Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2005.12.11 - 04:36PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
intersting story - i like he way harry and ginny are back together - but i just cant see harry being that mean to anyone even the dursleys - tho it certainly was funny. i liked it!
Reviewer: amblewat Anonymous Date: 2005.12.11 - 04:25PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
That was brillient my friend. Anytime that I can help let me know. :)
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2005.12.11 - 04:20PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
An observation that you make early in the story caught my attention right away. I have never thought about how Hermione is able to explain her Magic life to her Muggle parents. It might be interesting to explore sometime how they are able to interact with that portion of their daughter's life. This story was great! I could never come up with any revenge as wonderful as this. You aren't even causing them to be harmed, so much as to simply be taught a lesson. This is one of those stories where you wish that someone could take a real photograph of certain characters' faces. Poor Uncle Vernon. I hope that the farmers don't own a bull. Thanks. Eric B.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2005.12.11 - 04:05PM Title: Revenge at Seventeen
Well done; amusing. :-}