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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.03.08 - 05:28AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
this is one of the most wonderful Harry/Ginny chapters that I've ever read. I'm so glad that Harry decides to tell Ginny everything because I really hate it in stories where he doesn't and it just causes trouble between them
Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2009.12.17 - 01:30AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
Fabulous chapter. Great stuff about Harry sensing something dark inside of him. Also, the comment about the final confrontation being different because Harry had the advantage of knowledge is perceptive. Thanks for writing such a thoughtful and intelligent post-battle fic.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
This is indeed the stuff that drama is made of. Good work!
Author's Response: A lot of these early chapters are built around scenes I wanted to see in canon - this one especially.
Thanks for the review! - Patrick
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
omg! that was absolutly fantastic! i think you are a very good writer, and i have read a few stories of what has happened after the battle (as i felt jk cheated me!) and they have been good!i do't know if you are american or british or from anywhere else, but you write like her and thats a hard thing to do. there has been some i have read where the spelling and grammer has put me off, when they use Mom instead of mum, silly wee things really, but you have written so well
i like how you have made harry relive it, and in such a way it kind of makes feel a little better, by getting it all off his chest,
how many chapters are you planning to do. i originally seen the on the hpff, and you only have 6 on there, but 17 on here.
keep up the good work
charlotte x
Author's Response:
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
omg! that was absolutly fantastic! i think you are a very good writer, and i have read a few stories of what has happened after the battle (as i felt jk cheated me!) and they have been good!i do't know if you are american or british or from anywhere else, but you write like her and thats a hard thing to do. there has been some i have read where the spelling and grammer has put me off, when they use Mom instead of mum, silly wee things really, but you have written so well
i like how you have made harry relive it, and in such a way it kind of makes feel a little better, by getting it all off his chest,
how many chapters are you planning to do. i originally seen the on the hpff, and you only have 6 on there, but 17 on here.
keep up the good work
charlotte x
Author's Response:
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 02:17PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Talk
omg! that was absolutly fantastic! i think you are a very good writer, and i have read a few stories of what has happened after the battle (as i felt jk cheated me!) and they have been good!i do't know if you are american or british or from anywhere else, but you write like her and thats a hard thing to do. there has been some i have read where the spelling and grammer has put me off, when they use Mom instead of mum, silly wee things really, but you have written so well
i like how you have made harry relive it, and in such a way it kind of makes feel a little better, by getting it all off his chest,
how many chapters are you planning to do. i originally seen the on the hpff, and you only have 6 on there, but 17 on here.
keep up the good work
charlotte x
Author's Response: I am an American, for the record - Texan stuck in Louisiana, if you want to be specific. HPFF's slowed down because you can only submit one chapter at a time, but over there will catch up to here eventually. This is planned to be a full length novel, so I'm looking at something like 35-40 chapters. Thanks for the review! - Patrick
