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Reviewer: mysinger Signed Date: 2011.12.26 - 04:37AM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.03.09 - 06:40AM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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well, as awful as it is that Harry has actually had the need to write those letters, at least got his feelings out :)



Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2009.12.17 - 02:00AM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.06.05 - 10:13PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: LadyRuthless Signed Date: 2009.04.29 - 08:44PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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This is great! But it says in DH that Fleur doesn't much care for flying on brooms, took a thestral instead in "the 7 potters."
I think it more likely that Arthur is an excellent chaser than Fleur :-)



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2009.02.04 - 10:28PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Love the reality of the fight and the restlessness. Excellent characterisation.

Author's Response: A goal I always strive to achieve. Thanks for the review! - Patrick



Reviewer: bludger45 Signed Date: 2008.03.13 - 10:17PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 03:29PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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ooh, those letters, you have written another beautiful chapter! x

Author's Response: Thanks - the letters scene was among the handful that inspired the entire fic. - Patrick



Reviewer: teyrijen Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 04:04PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: elaithin Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 10:13PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2007.11.21 - 01:59PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.09.30 - 09:51AM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

Send him and the others back to school!! They need to finish their educations and have time to relcaim some of their youth.

Author's Response: No worries, they'll get there, we promise!



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.09.23 - 08:37PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

As I suspected...important stuff i that last bit. Set up nicely for us to wonder where you will tke harry next...he doesn't know where he's going, we don't know and we can speculate :D

Author's Response: Speculate away!



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2007.09.23 - 03:53PM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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I enjoy your story very much. I love that you have not hit Harry with any other pressing/dangerous matters right away. Instead you allow time for healing, reestablishing relationships and trying to figure out "normal life".

I also appreciate the "Rowlingesque" hints you drop about information that may be coming, such as Ginny's ability to perform healing spells rather well. I am still pondering why Harry has yet to ask Ginny about life at Hogwarts in his absence.

It was rather cool to give Harry a little lesson in how Ginny felt about being left out and left behind. She let him off the hook rather easy, though! She must have enought pent up rage in her to blow a small creater where she stands!

Author's Response: Thank you! We decided that they should get a little bit of a break right off - they've all got it coming, certainly. For the rest - the healing spell's, Ginny's year and how she feels about it - that'll all be followed up on too, we promise.



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.09.23 - 10:42AM Title: Chapter 4 - Letters

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This is a really good chapter :D . I think there's a lot of really cool stuff in the last bit - but the formatting is way off and I couldn't read it properly and only skimmed it.

I liked the letters and the whole thing seems well thought out and put together, showing reasonable links and reasoning. I particularly liked how Harry was so keen to see Teddy.

I suspect there is a reason Ginny is so good at healing charms... :(

But y'know...really ... Cairns???????? tch tch tch... ;) Still i suppose you could've chosen *Townsville* lol ;)

Author's Response: Gah! I don't know what happened to the formatting on those paragraphs, but thanks for pointing it out! It's fixed now.




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