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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.03.16 - 08:19AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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well, I guess that's going to bollock's Harry's mind up a bit



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.06.09 - 10:43PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2009.02.06 - 04:00PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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What a very exciting chapter.!

Author's Response: Thanks again!



Reviewer: MuggleBorn Signed Date: 2008.10.03 - 06:24PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Just having read "Vires, Veneratio, Diligo", I couldn't help but recognize the scene from the beginning of this chapter. Are the two stories supposed to be tied in some way? In other words, are the dreams that Harry's been having in this story going to appear as real events in Vires, or was that just a one time event? If so, it adds an entirely new twist to both stories

Author's Response: I would say there is A connection, yes, but it's a pretty peripheral one. Thanks for the review! - Patrick



Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.09.18 - 09:12AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

Aha! I've seen this dream somewhere else, haven't I! Your wonderful new story, which I am enjoying so much. (I also noted the title of that story sneaking in here as a chapter title ;-)

I recall asking you about whether the dreams corresponded to other stories before, and now I have some hope that they might turn up as such at some point.

Author's Response: I deny everything! - Patrick



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 05:30PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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that was an amazing chapter, the first part of it was so funny, and you have really detailed the action sequence, and it had me hooked reading faster and faster. it was soooooo good! x

Author's Response: I really wanted the action to take the reader by surprise, so I'm glad to see when that works. Thanks for the review! - Patrick



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 07:17PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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welll now harry has had some fun but now they need to fix him again...and the press can take a leap for all i care....kutgw

Author's Response: As you see, Harry comes out of it pretty okay. Ginny, on the other hand... Well, thanks for the review!



Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 11:25AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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I'm really liking your dream sequences: are they based on actual fics? if so, where? The one for this chapter looks like I'd rather like to read it ;-)

Author's Response: Actually, they're not. They are an excellent way to feed plot bunnies though, and see which ones I may want to develop later.

Author's Response: Oh - and thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Laurendcg05 Signed Date: 2008.01.17 - 07:56PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Such a good chapter! I loved the dream, and I almost feel as if the dreams become real or soon will become real due to the blue light and other hints you've left in the chapter (like Ginny not arguing with Ron). Anyway, I'm very curious now, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: The most I will say is that yes - there is something to the dreams. :) Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 06:14PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Great chapter. The dream was strange, the action exciting and the scene with George very funny. Loved it.

Author's Response: Guess I hit the mark on all three fronts, then! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: hersheykiss Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Where were the real Auror's? why was there so much time for this battle to occur without the Auror's arriving to intervene?

Author's Response: I'll address that next chapter. Basically, the Auror department is still very understaffed, and simply couldn't get anyone there before it was over. From beginning to end, the fight was probably half an hour, all told. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Fleury Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 01:45PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Ouch. Not a good day for Harry, then. At least he had some fun before. I'm really interested in Ginny's sixth year, and I hope that we get to read about it soon! Excellent writing and grammar. I did notice one or two typos in passing, but I can't even remember where they were. Good job on the chappie. :D

Author's Response: Oh, you'll get those answers soon, I promise - thanks for the review!



Reviewer: dejavu Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 12:39PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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this is a good chapter, Harry is not going to take this well, post soon

Author's Response: Well, I don't think anyone would take it well, exactly. No one decent, at least. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 12:33PM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

Completely missed that family tree though. Where can I find that 'cause I love to see it.
So many others were wrong then hey? LOL
Thanx

Author's Response: They've got it up at http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Weasle y_family Of course, it's a bit late, since I've already married Percy off to Penelope - but, oh well.



Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 11:51AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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Great chapter, weird dream at the start that certainly will have a follow up further down the line.
Hilarious piece where H&G walk in on G&A ( always thought it was Fred with her?) It sure must be awful to walk in and see your brother's hairy ass stick in the air with some legs sticking out around him LOL. Scarred for life indeed :)

Very good fighting sequence, wrighting very descriptive. Loved it.
Thanx for a wonderfull chapter

Author's Response: Oh, you can count on that dream being followed up on, certainly! As for Angelina - that's who George marries, according the the 'Weasley Family Tree' that got released right around New Years. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2008.01.16 - 11:09AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Quick and the Dead

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