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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2011.03.22 - 05:53AM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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well, at least they've decided to make decisions together from now on



Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2009.06.10 - 06:05AM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.03.01 - 05:52PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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wow, so well written. and i really felt ginny's pain.

Author's Response: I have to confess - for Chapters 13 and 14, my wife really stepped up as beta to help me make that realistic. We had arguments over some parts of those chapters! Thanks for the review! - Patrick



Reviewer: JaTrRm Signed Date: 2008.01.24 - 01:00AM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Iv been a fan of this story for a few months now, and it gets more interesting with each new chapter.. Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter to get approved..
Just a questions, maybe I missed something, but why did the numbering of the chapters get skewed around 12?

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying - the new chapter will hopefully be up soon.

As for the skewed chapter numbering, that's the result of some glitches that happened while adding the last two chapters. I'm told it'll be fixed. :) Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: ProfessorBinns Signed Date: 2008.01.23 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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I've just discovered your fic and read all the way to this chapter. I want to say first of all that I really enjoy your writing. The characterizations and plot have gotten steadily more refined, chapter by chapter. Even your prose is getting more sophisticated.

Second, I think you've done a great job showing Harry's growth. I was beginning to wonder about Ginny, so I think this chapter is really the turning point in your story; Ginny will become much more of a three-dimensional character. It also makes sense in my experience of the way people deal with trauma--she spent her summer in denial, afraid that admitting her feelings would destroy the happiness she had with Harry, but paradoxically that denial made the happiness feel hollow and unreal. So kudos for the realism here. Now I can't wait to find out more about Ginny...

PS: The birthday non-sex scene was both hilarious and very very real. There conversation about it here makes it even more brilliant and realistic.

Author's Response: Thank you, first, for the compliments on my writing. I'm finding this an interesting exercise, as the majority of my fiction experiecne until now has been in the realm of play by e-mail games, where I'm only responsible for one character and working with a large number of other writers. So transitioning from that has been interesting, but, I think, beneficial.
I'm glad you like Harry's growth, as well, and I agree with you about Ginny. I've put a great deal of thought into the both of them. It's gratifying to see that the intent is being perceived correctly.
Oh, and the non-sex scene is one of my favorites, for just those reasons. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: jennymafurr Signed Date: 2008.01.21 - 01:56PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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GAHH!

I want to hear her stoooooory!

So many of the fics I've read don't go into what happened at hogwarts,
I want to see if my imagination is a vivid as others.

-J

PS. wonderful chapter, btw.

Author's Response: It's awaiting validation now, so you shouldn't be kept waiting too long. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: BioHazard82 Signed Date: 2008.01.20 - 07:20PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Brilliant story so far. Chapters are pretty long and it has great pacing. Keep up the good work, and update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks - too short a chapter is kind of a pet peeve of mine. Glad you're enjoying - thanks for the review!



Reviewer: londonxlove Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 09:44PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

I mean to say TALE!
wow that was stupid of me haha

Author's Response: S'okay - I figured your meaning ;)



Reviewer: londonxlove Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 09:43PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Ah I love this story! Can't wait to hear Ginny's tail, should be intense! =]
Thanks for the fast updates, too - I'm lovin them!!
Keep up the amazing work =D

Author's Response: Hopefully it lives up to it. I'm glad everyone likes the quick updates, though I very much doubt I'll keep to this pace once the semester starts up again. Still, you never know! Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 11:04PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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well its time for ginny to being the healing process and learn to allow harryt he same confort that she provideds him...kutgw

Author's Response: I have to admit, I'm enjoying the role-reversal there. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Intense. I love this story.

Author's Response: And I love hearing people say that! :) Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Laurendcg05 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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Very good chapter, it's always interesting, the spin authors put on Ginny's time at Hogwarts. I like that you included the time from when Harry left the burrow, can't say I've read anyone else include that. And of course, we are interested in it because Arthur said the family is fine, but we never found out what that meant. You just don't get a party invaded by death eaters and not get one unforgivable. Anyway, can't wait until the next chapter, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yeah - fine is relative, I figure. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: ginnyfan3 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 02:09PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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great chapter. can't wait to hear ginny's story. update soon.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it - and that you're eager to know what happened. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 01:30PM Title: Chapter 13 - While You Weren't Here

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